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ritzy09

@ritzy09

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Posted: 13 years ago

#101

daring...u are a great writer...welcome to the group

i have to say for me best part was mel's characterization...i was just laughing out and wondering, ab Mel kya likhne wali ha...pata chala sara ke saare special pets tumhaare piche...ha ha ha ha

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vrinda22

@vrinda22

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Posted: 13 years ago

#102

pata nahi woh koun lucky boy hoga jisse hum choose kaarege

hmm..kahi maan tho nehi..awesome part..hilarious

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---nishu---

@---nishu---

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Posted: 13 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: Anu-Ananya

sorrry kuch samajh hi nahi aa raha hai

please dubaara post kar na

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Melvina Preece

@angel-ki-shona

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Posted: 13 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: ritzy09
daring...u are a great writer...welcome to the group

i have to say for me best part was mel's characterization...i was just laughing out and wondering, ab Mel kya likhne wali ha...pata chala sara ke saare special pets tumhaare piche...ha ha ha ha

that's precisely what I am going to do Ritzy I am already planning a revenge on this Missy

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---nishu---

@---nishu---

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Posted: 13 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: mel420

that's precisely what I am going to do Ritzy I am already planning a revenge on this Missy

yaar sach kahte hai

koi kitna bhi dede

kuch kamini friends ko satisfy karna namunkin hota hai

thousand year se raaj karne wali chalo maana thodi khudas hai par queen to banayi hai

par nahi

yeh mam ab bhi face golgappe ki mafik gol kar bathi hai

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---nishu---

@---nishu---

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Posted: 13 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: ruchs
Very nice update dear'👏

Loved the way you added your touch'😉

Hmm Very interesting story'👏

Me really wondering that what will happen now'😳

Please update soon!!!😳

Love
Ruchi...😳

just wait little dear

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---nishu---

@---nishu---

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Posted: 13 years ago

#107

hey listen to her everyone

main toh writer ban gayi😆

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ritzy09

@ritzy09

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Posted: 13 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

yaar sach kahte hai
koi kitna bhi dede
kuch kamini friends ko satisfy karna namunkin hota hai

thousand year se raaj karne wali chalo maana thodi khudas hai par queen to banayi hai
par nahi
yeh mam ab bhi face golgappe ki mafik gol kar bathi hai

sun na nahi Mel...bechare teen teen angels ke kandhe par gun rakh kar she is shooting at you...

par yeh to hai...rajmata...she gave you the highest point

hypocrite me ...trying to satisfy both of you...mujhe animals se bahut dar lagta hai yaar...

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---nishu---

@---nishu---

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Posted: 13 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: ritzy09

sun na nahi Mel...bechare teen teen angels ke kandhe par gun rakh kar she is shooting at you...

par yeh to hai...rajmata...she gave you the highest point

hypocrite me ...trying to satisfy both of you...mujhe animals se bahut dar lagta hai yaar...

don't worry

as in india its tradition to listen to our elders

and yeh rajmata to akbar birbal ke zamaane se bhi puraani hai

ek kaan se sun kar dusre se nikal dena chahiye

as angel se

budi sathiya gayi hai