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Posted: 13 years ago
phew, finally catched all ur four parts.
hawww!! maan as a singer, loved this concept n geet is always nakchadii.

keep pming, will love to read further parts.👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: anshra

Hey u update
in this state of urs😡
u were sick na😡
plzz take rest sam
dont get sick re
and the update
was fab
toogood
loved it totally
wonderful
awesome
and now iam waiting
formore
but only when u r perfectly fine
ok?
orders from ur sis😉




Okkk BOSS... i vl not update, not until i'm fit n fyn...
Love you diii... muaaahhh
Edited by samina_17 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
maan n geet having time to spend alone..
they will know each other during the drives..
the great msk is keeping his anger in control
but later geet will feel bad when she will come to know he is msk..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update!
Loved Maan's dedication..He became a driver just to learn that small piece of music..
since Geet's dad doesn't know that Geet loves music, I guess Maan will be the one to discover her music potential..
Does her dad not like music now n y??ok..ok...I know thats what even Maan wants to find out..😆
I hope that Geet first falls for Maan n later learns that he is MSK...
Waiting for Geet's plan...
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Posted: 13 years ago




Sargoshiyan-Whisper of Love

PART 5




The whole drive to the university was on silence. Here Geet continued her cursing program for Maan, and Maan smirked at her situation.




As soon as the car parked on the car parking, geet went down hurriedly and ran to the uni gate. On mid-way she stopped and shouted at Maan


Geet: Maan my class will finish at 12.30pm. Don't be late

Maan: I will wait here

Geet again started running

Maan was watching her retreating back and mumbled, Delhi express

Geet reached the classroom and as usual entered from 2nd door. She sat beside Pinky.

Geet: Kitna miss kia?

Pinky: IS curve derivation ki 2 parts finished

Geet: Good, I don't need to hang my brain with this boring macro

Pinky: But sir already told that it will definitely come on final

Geet: Then make a note of it for me, I will memories it before xm, no need to understand it

Pinky: Ok

Geet: Where is Piyush?

Pinky: Don't know, he said he will wait for us in the canteen

Before Geet replied anything, Mr Bakshi (Macro teacher) called out her name.

Mr Bakshi: Miss Handa, tell me why the planned expenditure function is going downward here?

Pinky was slowly telling her the answer, For the decrease in planned investment

Geet overheard half of pinky's answer and replied to the teacher

Geet: For the decrease

Mr Bakshi: Decrease of what?

Geet: That you said earlier

Mr Bakshi: Miss Handa, I know what I said earlier, but I want to know it from you now.

Geet didn't answer anything and looked down at her note book

Already students of a group were started smiling at Geet, especially

Sameera, the first girl of the class

Mr Bakshi: This is the last time I'm warning you Miss Handa. If you don't want to attend class, it's your choice, and if you come then you have to pay attention here.


Geet: Sorry sir


Mr Bakshi: Sit down and concentrate.


Geet sat down, it's the regular routine for her in the class.

After the class, Geet entered the canteen along with pinky


A boy came to them and hugged Geet side way




Piyush: kya hua madam? Why are you in a grumpy face?


Geet: Because of our honorable Bakshi sir. I don't know why he is always after me?


Ragini was passing by them, she mocked Geet, Why don't he? He knows well how much bad our honorable geet handa in study?


Pinky: oyyeee, what's your problem? Why are you always after geet?


Geet: ragini mind your own business; you don't need to think about my study.


ragini laughed at her comment. Oh really, you know geet, I don't even want to think about you when I will prepare my subjects as your name only harm my result.


Ragini was always the topped in class and teachers loveed her a lot for her brilliant result. For that she wants all the people will praise her and will run after her.


But here Geet was famous to all because of her bubbly self and friendly behavior to everyone, and that's why she always taunted Geet for her weak point and that is Geet's study. As our Geet was always busy in her dream land, her results are very bad in almost every subject.


Geet was going to answer her back, when Piyush interrupted, Leave her Geet.We have better works to do. Let's go to the mall, we can have some ice cream together.


Pinky: You guys carry on then, I need to go to library for my assignment. You don't worry geet, I will make one copy for you also.


Geet: Thanks Pinky, But I really need to study this time, Papa is also upset for my result.


Piyush: kar lena xm se pehle. Now let's go


Before Geet could answer, her phone rang


Geet: hello


Ria: Geetu, teri class khatam ho gayi na?


Geet: Ya Bhabi, why?


Ria: Then do one thing, come fast and on your way bring some cucumber and carrot for salad


Geet: But bhabi'


Ria: Geetu, hari prakash is also not home, and I also can't go as papa is still not at home.


Geet: ok Bhabi, I am coming


Geet cut the call and looked at Piyush with a puppy face


Geet: sorry piyush, I have to go home now. We will plan this ice cream later, then Pinky can also go with us


Piyush: Ok, but let me at least drop you today, your bro don't come today na?


Geet: no actually bro hired a driver yesterday


Piyush: but geet


Geet: Bye dear, im getting late already. See you tomorrow.


Piyush: ok then, bye. (self-thought: I am waiting for that day geet when you will don't even step forward one inch without my permission)

Here inoutside of uni. Maan was talking with his daadi ma.


Daadi ma was laughing at maan's comments about geet.


Daadi ma: Seriously Maan, don't you think it's too much to comment about a girl like this when you just know her for only one days?


Maan: sweetheart, one day is well enough to know this delhi express.


Daadi ma: Delhi express? Maan do you know one thing? Mohindar handa's village town is hoshiarpur


Maan: really daadi ma? Then let me change her name from delhi express to hoshiarpur express


And both started to laugh again.


Daadi ma: bas kijiye avi maan, it's not good to comment about someone in her absence. But I'm really glad there is one girl who can dance above your head


Maan: No need to be that much happy sweetheart. It's only for some days as after that I will tell mohindar ji my real identity


Daadi ma: and after that Geet will be totally fida over you. She loves MSK na?


Maan: Daadi, stop pulling my legs now. That nautanki is coming, will talk with you later daadi ma


Daadi ma: Thik bhai beta, take care of yourself, love you


Maan: Ya bye, love you too sweetheart


Geet came near car and heard the last line what maan said.


Geet mumbled to herself: Oh, so he has a girlfriend too


Geet opened the car door and sat in her seat.


Geet: I need to go to the bazar for grocery shopping


Maan: ok but mam


Geet: But? U fixed you dating time kya?


Maan: what?


Geet: Hai, with your girlfriend? geet replied with a cheeky smile


Maan: No, I am asking that which mall you want to go for your GROCERY SHOPPING


Geet: Mall? He he, why will I go to the mall. I will buy all these from roadside. And you need to go with me, samjhe?


Maan's self-thought: roadside wala? I never went to any mall with mom for shopping, adi ye kaha fasa dia yaar?


Maan: Ok mam, but I never did all these, so I can't help you on that


Geet: Why didn't you shop for your girlfriend?


She winked at Maan where a mischievous smile was playing on her lips.




Maan: No, And why are you asking me about my girlfriend again and again?


Geet: Because I heard you to say love you


Maan: ya so? One can only say that to his girl friend?


Geet: no but sweetheart can be called to girlfriend na? I used to heard bro calling bhabi on these names before their marriage. And whenever I caught them u know bhabi used to shy and her whole face turned red like a tomato


Here our Geet started her bakbak, and poor Maan have no other option to listen


Maan looked at her totally surprised that how a girl can talk too much when before 3hours she was in so much bad mood.




Unknowingly a smile came to his fame


Maan: Hoshiarpur express


Soon he forgot to ask Geet that she had any experience to shop on roadside bazar or not

PRECAP: Karne chala Bazar do anari, vo vi delhi ki roadside per'. What will happen now???


Next update will be just after i received at least 35 comments and 50 likes... me already ready with my next update... 😉... waiting eagerly for your response...😍


Previous Part: Part 4

Next Part: Part 6

Edited by Dipti_Sam - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update yaar..
woo maan n geet both cursing eachother...
poor geet...thoda padh le yaar...
n this sameera...grrr.
n piyush ..poor guy... bt i hope ki he is nt bad..he loves geet bt he should nt b obbessed.. n create prblm in future??
precap amazingg...
waiting eagerly..
Edited by divya22 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Fantastic. To Geet ka 1 ashik v hain! Waiting 4 dr shoping.
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely awesome update yaar👏
cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
I just read your ff in one go... It was awesome 😛
geet is poor in studies.😭😭...and that sameera is the topper😲...and she always taunts her for that 😡😡...precap is really amazing...waiting to know the next...

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Posted: 13 years ago
😆 😃 it was very nyc wese agle part mein zada maza ai ga .
😊


LARAIB

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