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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part..all behind maans money n fame

but geet is diff..he will love her..w8ing 4 their meeting
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: idunno

please translate in English cant get all dialogues


Ok dear, from next part i vl use english for dialogues also... 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Firstly A BIG THANK YOU to all of you that you keep commenting here and encouraging me... Your each comment truly means a lot for me...😛

Sorry guys that I disappeared all of a sudden... Had my semester final and also me suffering from fever n headache...😭

I will update tonight as well as tomorrow... And about regular update, I will give updates twice in a week... BUT if i get more comments and likes then the number of updates will increase for sure...😉

Okiee me going for writing... Keep reading this story and don't forget to hit LIKE n also keep COMMENTing... I can give you this surety that you never read any story similar with this concept... Its from my own head's hidden brain... 😆


With loads of LOVE,
~~S@m~~

Edited by samina_17 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Its ok dear n woo 2 updates... Yipeee
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Sargoshiyan-Whisper of Love

PART 3



It's evening time in Handa Mansion. Mohindar Handa is in his room for a small nap. Arjun still didn't come back from office.


And here trio girls were busy with their gossiping in the dining room. Pinky came as soon as she came to know that this time her news is 100% correct. She was busy in munching chocolates from last half an hour.


The whole discussion subject was about Maan (sam thinking, what else they can do without praising our Maan Singh Khurana)


Ria: I don't think he comes for any music concert or show


Geet: But then why he come Delhi all of a sudden


Pinky replied while licking her fingers: I think he came to meet his girlfriend.


Geet shot an angry glare at pinky while Ria started laughing at pinky's answer and geet's reaction.


Pinky looked up innocently at both of their face then more innocently ask Kya hua?


Geet: Tu chup kar and continue your work, kuch acchi baat to bolti nehi.

What is discussing here?


Arjun asked while he was entering the room.Ria stood up to take the files and bag from her husband.


Ria: nothing important, you tell how was your day?


Arjun: Good and have one more good news.guess what?


Geet, Pinky, Ria: What?


Arjun: I found a driver for gudia's car.


Geet: Kya bro, I thought you will give some truly good news like'


Arjun: well it is good news as now I don't need to give you a lift for your university.


Geet: hawww, bro you are so mean?


Ria: You guys again start your quarreling? And arjun why are you always keep poking her? Geetu's uni is on your way na?


Arjun: yes but your geetuuu always made me late with her uni going preparation.


Geet: Who asked for your lift? I am not a small kid that I cannot drive my own car


Arjun: You will not drive and that is already decided by dad


Geet: I don't want any driver, all my friends drive their own car including pinky also, then why can't I?


Arjun: Its final geet, now come on let me introduce you with your new driver.


Geet made a grumpy face and looked at Ria who shrugged her shoulder in reply.


Ria know very well that no matter how much Geet want, her papa and bro will not let her drive, well no let her do anything that has a single chance to hurt her.

Pinky laughed at Geet's making faces as well as Arjun who side hugged geet and said, Come gudia


Both went to the sitting room followed by Pinky while Ria went to upstairs.

When they reached the room they found the man standing near the window, his back was on them.


Arjun: Gudia, here is your new driver.


The man turned and came face to face with them which made pinky's chips pack fall down.


Geet murmured to herself, this small boy can drive car but not me.


Pinky replied back with same voice, haila geet, maan jah, aisa handsome driver mile to I will stop driving for sure.


Arjun smiled at both of them and said to the man, you don't need to join from today.You can start your job from tomorrow morning.Geet has her class at 9am.


Man: Ok sir, I will come before that then


He was leaving when Geet asked from behind, what is your name?


As soon as geet heard his voice, it's like she heard this voice before.


Maan turned back and replied with a little bit of nervousness




Maan: Its Maan mam.


Pinky: MSK's name (sam: person same then name will be same na 😆)


Geet: Did I see you before, I mean where you worked before?


Maan: I came here before some days mam, I used to work in Mumbai before.


Geet murmured to herself: then where I heard his voice'




Maan lifted his one eyebrow: ji?


Geet: Nothing, just don't be late tomorrow; I don't like those people who come late on work


Maan: I will keep it in my mind


Pinky: what's your full name?


Maan: ji? Its Maan Sharma, why mam?


Geet: nothing, she just asked you. You can leave and DON'T be late.


Maan: I will come just on time mam, good bye


Geet: Hmmm

Arjun: Tomorrow don't forget to bring your driving license with you, I need to check that.


Maan: Sure sir, if you want then you can talk with the person for whom I worked before.


Arjun: Its not important, just bring your license tomorrow.

After Maan left Geet poked on Pinky's shoulder, Oyee what happened with you?


Pinky: His name is Maan and also he don't look like a driver yaar


Geet: So what? He is smart enough but that doesn't prove that he is from s good family


Pinky: His name is Maan yaar


Geet: Sharma hai Khurana nehi buddhu. Aab din mai sapne dekhna band kar aur chal upar


Pinky: cant he be the MSK?


Geet: what? Are you insane? Well actually yes, Geet handa hai hi itni famous.


Pinky: hai don't know where my MSK is now


Geet: YOUR? Oyeee Pinky, MSK is only mine, okiee?


Arjun smiled at this two antics and went for freshen up.


Near the window from outside one more person is enjoying their conversation with amusement. He is none other than the Maan Singh Khurana ooopppsss Maan SHARMA.


Maan: Two more crazy fans added in list

After some hours


Maan and adi were sitting in a tea stall.





Maan: I thought there has a little bit brain inside your head.but yaha to pura ka pura empty


Adi: maan seriously, there was no other choice, That Handa seriously will not even talk with you if he know that you are a singer


Maan: I don't think so. Because his daughter loves music. If he don't allow music in his house then how could that girl


Adi: How did you know that his daughter loves music


Maan: I heard her to talk about my songs.


Adi: your music fan? Ladki dikhne mai kaisi hai?


Maan:Shut up adi, just cut the crap


Adi: thik hai thik hai, gussa kyun hota hai, waise shundar hai kya dekhne mai


Maan: Adiii...


Adi: Chal chor. Did you meet with him?


Maan: Still not. He was not present when I went to the house today


Adi: Hmmm. When will you start your work Sharma ji?


Maan: from tomorrow Aditya ji.


Adi: Maan, thoda bachke rehna mera dost. If those girls recognize you then they will eat you alive.


Maan: They will not recognize you no matter how clever they are. But I need one driving license as Sharma sur name.


Adi: You will get it, don't worry, you just try to find out he is still sing or not. Then we will meet him with our real identity.


Maan: Chal, I need to sleep now. Don't know how I will handle all these girly stupid gossips for hours. The more they will irritate me, the more I will make plan to kill you, and god knows how many ways.


Adi: Maan, tujhe jaldi uthna hai ki nehi? Come come, we are getting late.


Maan smirked at Adi. No matter from how long they are good friends, how deep their friendship is, still Adi always get scared with Maan anger. Though Maan nevercrossed his limits in anger, not at least with his family members, and for Maan, Adi is his brother from his childhood.


PRECAP: Maan's first day at work...👍🏼


Geet's plan number 1 to trap Maan so that he can leave the job as like the other drivers...🤣


WHAT WILL BE THE PLAN??? Socho socho socho'.


How was 2day's update? you guys liked it na?...Thank you so much to all that your response...🤗

To be honest I didn't think that I will get that much response posting only 2 parts...😛

To silent readers, EK COMMENT KAR VI DO AAB' 😔


With Love,

~~S@m~~


Previous Part: Part 2

Next Part: Part 4

Edited by samina_17 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
MAAN BANA DRIVER GEET KA



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Posted: 13 years ago
Love ki liye kuch bhi karega oopsss sorry song ke liye kuch bhi karega ...Heyyy Maan Sharma tumhne toh Manak Sharma ki bhi yaad dilwa di ...DONO ek saath so dreamy dreamy ...hey mera dill ..Ohhh sorry i back from my Maan and Manak Land ..Nice Update Loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
wowwwsimplu superbi am loving this storyits so simpleyet so charasmaticloved itmuahz to u for this brilliant workwaiting for moreee
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Posted: 13 years ago
👍🏼 It was awesome yar i was thinking k ab maan ka kya ho ga bechara ab pata nai geet kya kya kare gi ose bhagane k liye 😎
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow sam... what an awesome update...
loved it so much...
ufff geet and pinky's antics...
uff how much both are crazy behind MSk...
geet's MSK or pinky's MSk???
i know i know pinky is like a kabab me haddi and she is reserved for adi...
so pinky now stop dreaming about MSK...
their bonding is very nice..loved the family so much...
wow maan became geet's driver...
oye hoye..balle balle.. balwant is back...
now i'll drool over him also...😆
question session was nice.. she thought that why his voice is familiar...
budhu wo maan singh khurana hai...
how come no one saw him before? didn't get the point...
now fake driver, fake driver license... but love story is real...haaye...
oye.. 2 more crazy fans added in the list...
count me too... me also crazy...
precap is awesome...
continue soon dear..
love ya... huga to you...

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