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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 13 years ago

#131

Hi there, thanks 4 da pm n fab superb update! Maan thinking abt Geet n forgot to say goodnite to Poonam! Maan upset n angry as he is thinking abt Geet! H is falling for her! Maan is rude to Geet. Maan admiring Geet! Geet openly stares @ him! Maan chupke chupke looking at her again! Geet knows! Maan impressed with Geet! Update soon! Well written

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meravigiliso

@meravigiliso

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#132

Awesome update ritzy

As we say tym heals every wound and pain . And nurturing with love and empathy will show wonders and can even erase the scar of past . And i found new begining for maan , he forgot to say goodbye poonam thinking of geet . Nayi zindagi , naye ehsaas dastak de rahe maan ki zindagi mein . till yesterday , he was mesmerized by her mental aura , her intelligence ,her innocence ,her naiveness and today he was attracted physically . loved it , The way maan is moving to new path of his life .

Ahhh, geet , loves her spirit , her chulbalapan and her zindadilli . Her patience and preserveness is giving knock to the brighter side of life .

Raasta katin hai, manzil door hai ,

hosle bulund hai ,dil mein umang hai ,

intezar hai us pal ka ,jis pal mein ,

mein hi mein hi hongi ,aapke dil ke har kone mein .😍

precap sounds very interesting . ritzy , u r writing fabulously . enjoying to d core and i really want u to show gradual process in der relation .

Edited by hermoso - 13 years ago