FF:Love VS Ego- At Altar of Sacrifice-#1-part1-19~ - Page 8

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Posted: 13 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: t_areeb

wow childhood love

and maan is always there silently looking at the baby doll



BABY DOLLL 😡
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Posted: 13 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: mila1

Dis is wat i call character CONsistancy🤣...drooling her from birth😳...



Rasllleeelaa Character of MSK*dnt even DREAM* only ek kaam aata hai usko NON STOP GAZEEE!!!!! 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: sdlife19

so geet is born now..

nice start..
will wait for the next part
thx for pm



haannn Shobha keep waiting :P D lazy me writes latelyyy!!! 😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74
PART 4






Maan was never so like this before😉.. He played with his sets of toys to break it up in just 5 min & wail at top stretching his vocal cords just to burst out his mother's eardrums😡.. Maan had never learnt to be silent🤢. The youngest in his family at a pre term kid was always pampered to d power of inifinity 😡. He had wanted all tat he asked for nd had never learnt no for an answer😆. He was s shor making types nd stuck to his mom like Fevicol :P never let her in peace... Followed her like his shadow😭! But things change nd since d time Rano had been back home with BABY GEET😉... Beena just could not resist staying there all time loving nd taking care of Geet . Maan never cribbed ususally would have protested see his mother's love divided over him but inthis situations he choose to stay calm nd just be a silent specator to all things revolving around Geet...😉

Maan never went near her, He used to watch her from as far as possible... *god knows Y* Maan who generally used to be so engrossed with his sports cars... Had completely given it up after Geet had come home.. He never found time to keep his eyes away from her for other activites!!! He used to walk to Rathore's Mansion along with Beena daily nd wen Beena nd Rano had their non stop chtater he used to resume his profession of CONstant gazing!! 😡

It was during one such gazing did he notice her turn over her self😉 :P Her first Venrtal movement nd wen d mothers were busy chatting he captured d moment in his moms Mob😭!!! * Maan had collection of Geet's snap - *all long shots :P* He loved poking his Mobile around tat kept clicking every now nd then!!!😳! The flash had just focussed on her tiny Retina nd before her eyes could percieve d rays of light a vibrant smile parched through her lips!! *Beauty Personified* 😉

Geet later learnt to focus on moving obljects her analytical brains slowly on d verge of development! 👏She used to smile at flying objects nd moving toy trains😳!! Maan noticed tat nd used to revolve around her cot or craddle making her turn her head nd smile all over😉!!! Maan loved running all through d garden wen she was brought out during sun bath at morning🥱 ... nd use d to run about d main hallway wen she was put on her Pram for evening walks🥱. All these smiling sessions had left her giggling nd smiling trying to fanatasixe moving objetcs.. nd he totall y startled by her sweet smileee!!!


Geet had been to hospital 1 month later for routine vaccinations nd it was pulse polio day too ... Geet came back home with full flushed cheeks soaring with pain due to all d numerous vaccinations tat had pireced her gentle skin😭..Tired nd shattered she had slept over Beena... Rano too was unwell with fever so Geet's responsibity laid on Beena😡... Beena had told Kunal to take Maan for his OPV but Maan refused🤢... He just blantly told to Beena i'll get tis done only if Geet too gets it done😲.. Beena tred xplainging to Maan abt d other medications Geet had been given too but talking ot Maan was pure waste of time *anything crept into his brains even God cant change nd Maan missed his OPV(Oral Polio Virus) of tat phase counselling... 😕

It was a week later wen Maan was severly Ill nd down with fever nd Barely able to stand..😭 Khurana's were hell worried seeing Maan laying lifeless ...🤢

Maan had been to d hospital nd after a serious of Tests he was flown to CMC, Ludhiana - Diagnosed with Polio😲, a crippling disease that would leave him life long handicapped... 😲


PART 5




Edited by ainaGURTI - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome Update mali..loved the bonding growing between maan n geet..But in the end u made me sad..Maan diagnosed with Polio😭..Ohh hw culd dey neglect polio drops like this😕 ,waiting to see how the story continue..Pls continue soon😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: maneetshauna

Awesome Update mali..loved the bonding growing between maan n geet..But in the end u made me sad..Maan diagnosed with Polio😭..Ohh hw culd dey neglect polio drops like this😕 ,waiting to see how the story continue..Pls continue soon😛





Loved d bonding : ROFLOLOLOL!!!!!

They never ignored his vaccine :P Homely visits for OPV was prevelant but he had avoided it !! *Zidddi types*
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Mali congrats on your FF. Will read and comment...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: swan20

Mali congrats on your FF. Will read and comment...😃



Hannn anujaaa 😉 Hope it it good!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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oh ... i hope he gets better soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#80
awesome mali..
just superb..
loved the way maan nirofying geet..
but wats this maan and handicapped..
please dear dont do this

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