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Posted: 13 years ago

will try my level best

Originally posted by: neethuMG

hey where is the updt...
pls wtng...pls...😔


will try
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

tujhe comment chahiye

kamini
kaisi friend hai tu
u even don't know ke main coma main hu
slap lagna woh bhi nishu ko
whatever may be the reason
shock itna bada tha ke sidha icu ke bed par thi main


🤣 how could I know you didn't tell coma me jaane se pehle baatha thi toh sahi😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mel420


🤣 how could I know you didn't tell coma me jaane se pehle baatha thi toh sahi😆

agar rajmata aati toh m
main kuch batati
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mel420


just because I love you, your off the hook😃😳


Off the hook or not I dont care.
You love me na? So then you have to jhelofy my nakhre! Get that straight dear Mel woohahahahha *evil laugh*
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Posted: 13 years ago
Madam jis I am there too!! Kaminoes I only go to ur thread to spam ! No one comes to mine Grrr!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

agar rajmata aati toh m
main kuch batati


where did I go I was always her my crazy Nishu
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Anu-Ananya

Madam jis I am there too!! Kaminoes I only go to ur thread to spam ! No one comes to mine Grrr!!


You love me na? So then you have to jhelofy my nakhre! Get that straight dear Ananya woohahahahha *evil laugh* and remember what goes around comes around😉😛
love you ananya
oh btw update and we will come update to kahbi dehti nahi hai 😡
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mel420


You love me na? So then you have to jhelofy my nakhre! Get that straight dear Ananya woohahahahha *evil laugh* and remember what goes around comes around😉😛
love you ananya
oh btw update and we will come update to kahbi dehti nahi hai 😡


Haawww!!
Love ya too although!
Update I am sobbing too to do one but my PC kamina!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
well @crazy_125 kept my promise so I hope you enjoy 😳

Part 20

After talking for a while the girls where settled in there room and Geet went to hers. When she entered. She couldn't believe her eyes. Anie was right the entire room was full with her pics. She looked around and smiled trough her tears. I love you Maan asked her mouth. That's when she heard the door from the room crack open. She turned around and saw Maan.
Maan didn't notice Geet was in his room he was to lost in his thoughts. He closed the door behind him. Geet heart skipped a beat.

G:maan


Whitout thinking geet ran towards him and hugged him tight. Maan was to shocked to hug her back.

M:geet tum, what are you doing here.
G:Why maan don't you want me here
M:no geet it's nothing like that the girls there okay na

Geet let go feeling rejected once again and embarrassed.

G:haan there in there room the room you decorated for them.

That's when the door flew open. Nishu and Ruchi stormed inside.They both hugged maan. Maan hugged them back.

M:Girls
R:Dad I am sorry
N:Yes dad were both sorry don't leave us

Maan got tears in there eyes.

M:No I won't if you girls don't wanna. But please don't say soory I should say sorry.
R&N:No dad don't say that and yes we don't want you to leave.

Sara walked from behind.

S:Hello mein bhi hoon

Maan gave a look which said what are you doing here.

S:Oh unclu don't worry I am just here for two months. Holiday you now.
M:Right welcome Sara
S:Thank you uncle and sorry for making you fall from the stairs
M:It's okay
G:Making Maan fall what do you mean sara
M:It was nothing geet just a accident.
G:hmmm

After a while everyone went to their own room Maan and geet where left alone. Geet was still feeling awkward about the whole hug thing. She was in a dilemma.

Geet's monologue
Geet maan doesn't love you that's why he didn't hug you back. Stupid he never loved you that was why it was so easy for him to make you a victim of his dirty revenge. But if he doesn't love you why did he come back. why did he do all these things for me. The branch the room. Maybe it was just guilt feeling and here your thinking it's love keep your feelings in check. Stay with him just for the girls bas. Except it maan was never yours and never will be.

M:geet
G:huh
M:what's wrong. I am watching you for a while your in some deep thoughts
G:Nothing maan
M:Geet if your thinking about use and the girls then let me tell you. How much you hate me that won't matter as long as the girls and you want me to stay I will. You don't have to ask nice to me I won't leave until you say so I promise how ever you may act.
G:Ow so you think I am being nice but I don't mean it
M:Nahi mera
G:Ow so that's why you didn't hug me back aur mein pagli bahtha

Geet stopped in the middle of her sentence when she realised what she said. She looked at maan's shocked face.

M:So you where thinking why I didn't hug you back
G:Nahi toh

Maan smiled oww she was and still is so adorable. How good he ever hurt such a innocent soul. He felt like holding her tight. He also felt like teasing her a bit.

M:So you don't want me to hug you
G:I never said that

again whitout thinking. Geet stop acting like a 18 year old. Your a grown up women now. Atleast think before yourself. Geet told herself.

M:So what do you want geet your confusing me.
G:Maan please

Maan smiled he stopped teasing her. They sat in the room for quit a will. There was total silence.Maan decided to go for it and ask the question he was thinking for a long time now.

M:Geet why did you come back.
G:Wo I say your letter and felt bad. Your eyes where also hunting me the whole time, I didn't now why. And then I read the letter you wrote for Nishu and found out what happened to Nishu and how you helped her. Eh after that Annie called ehh and she told me how you spended the 16 years without me and I realized you loved me and when I heard you voice realized I can't live whiteout maan even how much I wo you now

Geet looked down all blushing and shying. Maan was shocked happyliy shocked. He looked at her. He couldn't believe it did geet just say she can't life without him. He walked towards her. he made her stand and hugged her tight.

M:Geet I am sorry jaan.I hurt you so much with my dirty revenge.
G;Maan please it's been 16 years please maan I have forgiven. Let's forget it.
M:hmmm

After a while. They where still in the hug. hey has 16 years been apart.

M:Jaan
G:Hmmm
M:I love you

Geet blushed and hided in maan. He smiled and decided to tease her.

M;geet
G:hmm

Not be able to utter a single word. She was feeling so shy.

M: What did you mean by you now I now what jaan

Geet felt her heart skip a beat everytime he said jaan. It made her even more shy and she was already shy and above all what was he asking her. Oh no he was poiting at I love you geet thought.

G:Eh about what are you talking maan

Geet asked with the most innocent voice.

M:you jaan what you said after I can't live without you I wo you now jaan what do I know

Geet hided herself more in Maan if that was even possible.Maan grabbed geet by her shoulder and made her face him. He wanted to se her total red face badly. She looked adorable.

M:bolho geet
G:Wo Maan I

Geet felt Maan's hand loosen up. She grabbed her chance and jerked his hands away and made a run to the bathroom.

Precap: me busy learning hyper linking in words really diff okay so no time to write a precap😛. Anyone want to help me before Ananya breaks her mobile🤣 while learning me.

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Edited by mel420 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow they are toghter grt prt 👏 ...
yippieee m first 😊

Edited by mandymore - 13 years ago

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