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Posted: 13 years ago
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Before starting i want to tall u all teaser part is postpone...because i want to give clear picture of geet life..

so enjoy..

part -3

i still remember the stituation of my life..when all the people of my age used to play..i used to do extra work..so that i can give a toy to vicky..which he was longing for..i remember the day when "maa"..was not well...but she has to go to work...as the owner will cut the salary of her mother if she doesnt go..

i remember..i came back from school...i shouted for "maa"..but i return i got a low reply..i ran towards her room..saw that she was pale..that strong lady was now weak..her body was supporting her...i heard vicky shouting for food...i ran towards him..i didnt want him to see "maa's" condition...i asked him to be sited ..i will serve him the food...i ran towards the kitchen..i saw no food..i came to know the truth maa was not able to make food...but what now??..as i knowed that papa will bewaiting for food...their maa condition was getting worst..

finally i told the truth of maa's conditon to vicky..he had tears in his eye..i said to him to bring the docter..though i heard maa protesting..as he will charge money and there is money in the house...i quickly send vicky to bring docter..he ran for his life...i ran to my small carpet where i used to sleep..and quickly took out the money which i have save for vicky's toy..the docter came..he told maa..complete bed rest..maa was not satisfied and started protesting..as she has to go for work..docter taook the money and gave medicines and left ...the medicine does it magic..maa fall asleep..i knowed what i ahve to do..i saw that vicky wants food...but was not saying..even papa will wait for it..i moved the kitchen..and made the food...sent the tiffin to dad through vicky..when he came back i gave him food and i myself eat it..i went to do work in behalf of maa..i told vicky that if maa wake up give her food and medicines..he innocently nooded...i ran to different house..does all cleaning and washing dish..i went 5-6 houses..it was really tiring for me..i came back home..i saw maa staring me with tear,..i very well know what this tear were for???...she put me in her embrace...after sometime i went o kitchen started preparing food as i know papa would be coming..

i quickly made food...and we all eat.that day i came to know about my real strength,my real power..and another emotion called love and responibility for family...an other day of life for a girl geet handa...i laughed at my own thought..what next was stored for me i really dont know...may be another chapter of life...where i come to know about different type of emotion or knowledge..

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hope u like it😕

do comment

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waiting for ur replies...

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i hope u all relating to geets condition..???

and hope u liking the way story is progressing/??

Edited by ishanidhi08 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32


WHY 😡???

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Posted: 13 years ago
#33
First I got angry becoz u r making us wait.Now about this episode of her life.I m in tears reading this.It is reality of life.Many kids hav to bent down in front of thorns in their way.This type of Geet I m loving her becoz I m feeling sorry for her.


Lov U

Don let us wait for more.
Edited by Jass.KN - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34

hehehehe...😆

do read the part..waiting for ur reply..😉
angelwords thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jass.KN

First I got angry becoz u r making us wait.Now about this episode of her life.I m in tears reading this.It is reality of life.Many kids hav to bent down in front of thorns in their way.This type of Geet I m loving her becoz I m feeling sorry for her.



Lov U

Don let us wait for more.



very true...i must dedicate this part to them...😊
pakka jada wait...no no..😆😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
mindblowing
its sooo heart touching
good job dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: J.Rahman

mindblowing
its sooo heart touching
good job dear


thank you so so much...😃
hope u liking it??
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
poor geet ... working so hard for her family... very strong girl...

waiting for next part...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved the part..
Loved geet's determination and she s mature more than her age..

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Posted: 13 years ago
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tat was really nice dr...
emotional!!!!!!!

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