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Posted: 13 years ago
#11
congrats on the new thread
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part-1

i heard a round of plause...for my speech..for other it may be some words said my me...but for me..it was journey of life...a girl geet handa..

i remembered how my life started...i was born in HP...a poor girl..whose father worked as labourer in khurana industry...whose mother does sweeping in different houses...i had one brother who was smaller than me..vicky handa...my father used to work on daily basis...get plentyfull money home...how my brother eye was thirsty to get a small toy from dad..but how can he ask when he know..the condition..

we studied in a government school...every year got free book..it was build and was under khuranas...khurana the richest family of HP..i heard that its chain was all around world...they come in their holidays to HP...i used to see big big cars...big house...i had a faith in me that one day..i will stand beside them...

sometimes..i used to accompany dad to his work..or used to deliver him his food..i saw MR RAJ SINGH KHURNA..the owner of khurana industry..he was well build man...his attitude was clear in his speaking style ad his walk...dad introduce me to him..i quickly bow down and took his "ashirwaad"...he bestowed his blessing to me...and said to dad "that oneday this girl of ours will do wonder..i can see the spark in her eye"...papa was most faithful worker in Khurana industry...every delivery done was checked my hm properly..and this responsiblity was given by MR KHURANA himself...i heard papa saying that "saab dil ke bahut ache hain...humesha hum sabki maadad ke liya tyaar rahata hain...ekdum bhi gurrur nahi hain unme...babaji karein voh aur unke parivaar salamat rahe"...everyone in HP..wa happy with khurana family..they did every thing to devlop this village...i even heard that his father belonged to this village only..i deeply thought about his success..i know he is my idiol..i promised myself that one day i will become like him...

i went to his house also...the house was like a prince fort..marvellous design..clours..decor..i was facinated with it all..i came to know..there only sir's(raj) mother lives..while his daughter in law is in delhi..with her's two son...i saw the family pic...it gives a royal feeling..

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i dont knw u all are liking it or not??

do tell me..if u want it to be ff or ss...

will be waiting for ur replies..

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Edited by ishanidhi08 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#13
awesome part dear..
it looks more real
as a daily based incident in our life..
geets wish 2 be like raj..
she has now reached it..

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Posted: 13 years ago
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very beautiful and interesting update...

Geet's family is labourer's family...whose father working as a labour in Khurana industry...

the answer for ur question----yaar u know better how u planned ur story...whether it is FF or SS...I am here to read it...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very beautiful heart touching n well written words.This work of urs seems to hav lots of potential from starting So it is story about a girl deprived of every thing now lets see how she writes her own destiny .I don know when evr some thing seems different to me.I go through strange feeling n now this time I hav same

update soon dear 😃
Edited by Jass.KN - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice start...

geet is poor but has the determination to make it big...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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excellent. ..its soo realistic. ..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats on the new story...
nice concept...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Teaser

i heard that ...sir's elder son was coming..to HP..for the first time..
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i never knowed that this was the turning point in my life..
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a felt a tug on my shoulder...i turned back..i felt a hanky on my face...that smell..i knowed what was that...slowly and slowly my eyes were closing...
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thats all for todays buddy
hope u like the teaser..
plz tell me ...i should continue it or not??
will be waiting for ur replies..
Edited by ishanidhi08 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#20
life history of geet handa?...not geet maan singh khurana?...

awesome starting...

loved it...

thank u sooo much fr such a lovely story...n sorry liking is not working in my system...so cant press it...

continue nxt prt soon plz...

waiting eagerly...

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