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PART 8

Both Annie and Vicky were standing with their head down in the study whereas Maan was engrossed in his work. They were so scared to face him tat since he called them in the study they did not once see his face. They knew the reason but still were not prepared for it. Annie and Vicky both exchanged looks as if trying to gain some courage to face the wrath of their brother. Annie nudged Vicky to speak out while Vicky nudged Annie but no one dare to say a word to the devil sitting in front of them.

Annie: bhai…. We… are…. Sorry….
Maan still did not look at them and continued doing his work.
Vicky: Bro.. we are.. extremely… sorry… we .. wont .. do it.. again..

Annie: please bhai… ish baar …. Hume…. Maaf kardijiye… please..
( please bhai, this time…. Plzz forgive us.. please)

Still there was no answer from Maan. it was like he was deaf to their pleading.
Vicky: please Bro… hume jo.. bhi kiya.. woh.. college ki khatir…. Kiya… aur hume pata nahi tha… ki aap waha aanewale the.
( please bro.. wat ever we did.. we did for college.. and we.. did not know.. tat u.. will come.)
Maan just shot a angry glare to Vicky which made Vicky to shiver and step behind. Annie could not say and word more.
Maan: so you three were ready for tat thinking tat I would never come to know about it. M I right Vicky.
Vicky: Nahi bro… actually woh lead dancer.
( no bro… actually the lead dancer)
Maan: hell with you lead dancer Vicky. i don't send you to college to do all this crap. Don't dare forget who u three are and whom you belong.
Annie: bro hum jaanthe hain par… we did not have any other option. We had to do tat. And Geet was the best option for the lead dancer.
( bro we know.. but we did not have any other option. We had to do tat. And Geet was the best option for the lead dancer.)

Maan: Geet.. or so if Geet was not there would your college not have selected someone else and You and Geet did learn dancing for all this or wat.
Annie: No.
Maan: than why the hell you all three did this knowing tat you are not allowed.
Vicky: Sorry bro.
Maan: just shut up Vicky and don't use tat sorry again. Why do you think I put all this restriction on you three. Did you forget the worst day of our life Vicky. why do you think tat I always keep reminding you about your responsibilities towards the girls.
Vicky: I know bro.
Maan: wat do you know Vicky. did you forget the day when we were on the verge to loose Geet. did you forget the sleepless nights we all had. Did you forget how frighten Annie was after seeing Geet. did you forget how Geet used to scream at nights. If u have not than how could you do this.
Vicky: I haven't bro. I still remember those dreadful days of our life and m sorry.
Maan: sorry for wat Vicky. to let Geet dance with tat B****** and to let Geet were those revealing dress. Do you know who Rahul is and wat he is upto. Come on speak up Vicky.
Annie: Rahul is the best dancer bhai. He is a nice guy.
Maan: ya a boy who changes his girlfriends every week and leaves them after using is a nice guy for you. Isn't it Annie. A guy who has his eyes on Geet is a good person isn't it Vicky.
Vicky and Annie: No bro. he isn't.
Maan: than how did you allow Geet to go near him without getting the right information. Last time you were saved Vicky to let Annie and Geet come out of the college alone. why do you keep on repeating your mistakes.
Vicky: M sorry bro… I will not do it again.
Maan: you don't have any other chance Vicky. this is the last time m warning you you better understand ur responsibilities or be ready to face me again. And you Annie don't even forget in you dreams tat u are a Khuranna and Geet is a Handa. And when you bothe are not allowed to do all this things so its better to stay away from it and you being the elder I hope tat you make Geet understand this.
Annie: m sorry bro.. I will keep this is mind.
Vicky: m too sorry bro.
Maan: don't think tat I have forgiven you both, so just go now.
Both Annie and Vicky went out while Annie who had controlled her tears now poured them out feeling miserable. She knew tat wat they did was wrong but was it really wrong. Vicky hugged her and calmed her down saying.
Vicky: shhh di.. bas kijiye.. dekho bro ne jyada kuch nahi kiya na.. tho ab chup hojaye.
( ssh di. Its ok.. se bro did not say much na.. so now keep quite)
Annie: nahi.. Vicky… bhai ne jo kaha woh theek kaha. Hum kaha ush Rahul ko jyada jaanthe hain. college mein rehkar bhi hum uske baaremein kuch nahi jaan paye aur agar ushne Geet ko rehearsal time pe kuch kiya hota tho.
( no Vicky, wat bhai said was right. Where do we know rahul. Even being in the same college we don't know rahul much. And if during the rehearsal time if he had done something to geet)
Vicky: I know di.. par kuch hua nahi na. so relax. Pata Nahi bro ne Geet ke saath kya kiya. I hope bro did not take out his all anger on her.
( I know di. But nothing happened na so relax. Don't even know wat bro did to geet. I hope bro did not take out his all anger on her.)

Annie: I hope so.. Vicky hum jaake Geet se mile abhi. Mujhe ushe milna hain.
( I hope so. Vicky can we go and meet Geet now..)
Vicky: ok di..
Annie and Vicky goes to meet Geet at Handa Haveli. Rano told them tat Geet was sleeping in her room so they slowly went inside and were shocked to see Geet crying. When Geet saw Annie ahe just ran to her and hugged her while continuously crying. Annie tried to come her down slowly caressing her hair.
Annie: ssh baby.. don't cry.. its all right.. kuch nahi hua..
( ssh baby. Don't cry.. its all right.. nothing happened)
Vicky: please sweetheart aisa mat cry karo na please….
( please sweetheart don't cry like this na)
Geet: Di.. unhone aapko bahut shout kiya hoga na.
( di, he shouted at you na)
Annie slowly broke the hug and was shocked to see some marks on Geet's neck. She instantly realized wat is was and send Vicky out. Though Vicky was not ready but Annie said tat she wanted to talk to Geet personally. So finally Vicky went leaving the two important girls in his life alone. Annie made Geet to lye down on bed making her to keep her head in her lap and geet nicely covered her neck once again failing to notice tat Annie ahd already seen the marks
Annie: geet, bhai ne kya kiya..
( geet, wat did bhai do)
Geet flinched hearing this and shivered and her hold on Annie became more tight. Annie knew tat there was something which was disturbing Geet so she slowly tried to ask her.
Annie: Geet sweetheart, dekho agar kahogi nahi tho mujhe kaise pata chalega ki kya hua hain.
( geet sweetheart, see if you don't tell than how will I know)
Geet slowly got up with tears in her eyes and said.
Geet: Di, woh itne naraaz kyu hote. Kyu itna gussa karte hain mujhpar. Humne kya galat kiya tha ki unhone hume itna rulaya.
( di why idoes he get so angry, why he always gets angry on me. Wat wrong did I do tat he made me to cry so much)
Annie: Geet, bhai ne kya kiya tumare saath. Kahi kuch..
( geet. wat did bhai do with you. I hope he)
Geet: Nahi di.. unhone kuch nahi kiya.. sirf shout kiya humpar aur kuch nahi di…
( no di.. he did not di anything.. he just shouted at me and nothing else)
Annie: Geet tu sach keh raho hain na.
( geet are you saying the truth)
Geet: haan di main sach keh rahi hoon.
( yes di )
And Geet hugged Annie once again
Geet (ST): main kaise keh sakthi hoon di ki unhone kya kiya humare saath. Hume khud pata nahi ki woh aisa kyu karthe hain. hume darr lagtha hain unhse. Darr lagtha hain unke yeh gusse se. I really love him di but I fear him more.
( how can I tell di tat wat hi did with me. I myself don't know why he does all this. I fear him. I faer for his anger. I really love him but I fear him more)
Annie(ST): I hope geet tat bhai ne aisa kuch nahi kiya ho gusse mein. I just hope tat with his over possessiveness he does not loose you. Par main kuch nahi kar sakti Geet, bhai par ush incident ka khaffi asar ho juka hain. m sorry geet its all because of me tat u are suffering.
( I hope geet tat bhai did not di anything in his anger. . I just hope tat with his over possessiveness he does not loose you. But still I cant do anything, tat incident has left a mark on him. m sorry geet its all because of me tat u are suffering.)

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The day went by Geet not going to Khuranna Mansion on the pretext of not feeling well. She even avoided talking to Maan on phone. Geet was very sacred and did not know how to face Maan. The next day she thought tat she will not go to KM but luck was nowhere with her. Rano had got a call from Priya saying tat as it was Sunday they would have the lunch together at KM and Rano could not deny it. She informed Prem and Mohinder about it and went to Geet to inform her. Rano saw Geet lying on her bed lost in her thoughts. She slowly went to her ann put her had on her forehead and asked.

Rano: beta aapki tabiyat tho theek hain na. aap ish tarah bed par kal se.. kahi Vicky se jagda tho nahi hua na.
( beta are you all right. Why are you lying like this on bed. I hope u did not fight with Vicky)
Geet: nahi Maa, aisa kuch nahi.
( no maa. Nothing like tat)
Rano: tho theek hain, ab tayaar ho jao hume KM lunch ke liye jaana hain.
( than fine. So now get ready we have to go for lunch at KM)
Geet: No…
Rano: Kya.. bte hum KM jaa rahe hain woh lunch ke liye aur aap na keh rahi hain.
( wat..we are going to KM for lunch and you are saying no)
Geet: nahi maa, aisi baat nahi hain. actually mere tabiyat kuch theek nahi lag rahi hain tho aap sab jaye na main yahi ghar pe rehti hoon.
( no maa its not like tat. Actually m not feeling well so you all can go I will stay here)
Rano: Theek hain tho hum aapki badi Maa se kehte hain ki unki bahu ki tabiyat theek nahi hain so hum lunch ke liye nahi aa rahe hain.
( than fine I will tell ur badi maa tat her daughter-in-law is not weel and we are not coming for lunch)
Geet: Maa please, maan jaye na. kyu badi maa ka dil thodna chah the hain.
( maa please, listen to me.. badi maa will be upset)
Rano: wahi tho keh rahi hoon main beta, aap jaanthe hain na ki agar aap nahi jaayenge tho aapki badi maa bahut naraaz hojayegi, tho chalo ab tayaar ho jaye hum neeche aapka intezaar kar rahe hain.
( tats wat m saying you know na tat if u don't come ur badi maa will be angry so now get up and get ready we will wait downstairs)
With this Rano went and Geet had to agree. She could not deny any further as she also knew tat priya would not like it. They reached the KM and Geet started to shiver but still controlled herself. The khuranna's greeted the handas when Geet's eyes fell on Maan who was descending the stairs. As soon as Geet saw him she started to shiver more and hid behind Rano hiding herself from Maan. Maan was smiling at her but she hid behind more. Maan took the blessing of Rano and Mohinder and hugged Prem but his eyes were on Geet. They all settled on their seats and started talking while Maan was just staring at Geet. Annie could sense Geet's restlessness and tried to divert her mind by talking to her.
Annie: geet, kal college tho aa rahi haina. Waise bhi sunna hain ki kal principal college trip ki baat karne wala hain.
( Geet u r coming to college tomorrow na. I have herad tat Pricipal will be finally announcing the college trip)
Geet: main….. haan…
Vicky: yeh kya bakri kio tarah main main laga raha hain. tumne suna nahi di ne kya kaha.
( wat is this geet .. while are you stammering and saying main main like a goat. Did u hera na wat di said)
Geet: hmmm.
Vicky: Dad and mom ish baar humara college trip Goa jaa raha hain so we want ur permission and this year its Geet's first trip so hi hope tat you will say as always.
( dad and mom this time our college trip is going to goa so we want ur permission and this year its Geet's first trip so hi hope tat you will say as always.)

Rajveer: off course beta. You three can go. kyu mohinder.
Mohiner: Haan Vicky, agar tum theeno jana chah the ho tho jaa sakthe ho hume koi problem nahi hain.
( haan Vicky if you three want to go than we don't have any problem)
Geet: nahi.. mujhe nahi jaana hain. I mean I don't like all this trips.
( no. I don't want to go. I mean I don't like all this trips.)
Vicky: come on Geet, ab tum bachi nahi ho, college jaathi ho aur yeh trip Goa jaa raha hain. you wanted to go na so now why are you denying.
( come on geet. u are not a baby now. U are going to college and this trip is going to goa. you wanted to go na so now why are you denying.)

Geet: Vicky maine kaha na, I don't want to come. So its final.
( Vicky I said na, I don't want to come. So its final.)

Annie: Vicky stop it. Agar woh nahi aana chah thi tho theek hain waise bhi mujhe bhi nahi jaana hain.
( Vicky stop it. If she does not want to come than its ok even I don't want to come)
Prem: Annie wats wrong with you. I remember you were so excited for this trip than why all this and Geet tum bhi.
Annie: nahi Prem aisa kuch nahi hain. main tho Geet ki wajah se jaana chah thi par jab woh hi ready nahi hain tho its no use na.
( no prem its not like this. I just said yes first coz Geet wanted to goand now when she does not want to go than its of no use)
Maan: tum theeno Goa trip ke liye jaonge, and tats final so no more discussion. Do you get it.
( you three will go for this trip, and tats final so no more discussion. Do you get it.)

Annie, Vicky and Geet were just shocked to hear him giving permission when he very well knew tat the trip to Goa is for a week.
Vicky: bro did you say yes for it, I mean our trip is for one week
Maan: haan Vicky I know about it and you three are not going alone as the bodyguards will to accompany you.
Vicky: ye lo gayi bhains paani mein. Anyways chalo haan tho keh diya.

Maan continuously was staring at Geet and she avoided to look at him. just by looking at him see could remember how harsh he was on her. just by the thought she used to start fearing.
Priya and Rano called everyone for lunch and they settled themselves. Maan sat opposite to Geet so tat he can see her all the time which made Geet more scared as she could feel his angry gaze on her. she tried to concentrate on her food but she could not. Her heart started to beat fast and she almost started to shiver all over again when suddenly Maan asked her to pass the rice bowl. Geet could not deny and slowly took the bowl with her trembling hands and passed it and as soon Maan's fingers touched her hand she drooped the bowl in the table. Geet started to cry and she quickly left the place and ran out of the mansion. All were shocked at her behavior when dadima said.
Dadima: Rano Geet ki tabiyat theek hain na. bahut khoyee khoyee dekthi hain.
( Rano is geet all right na. she is looking all lost)
Rano: pata nahi maaji par kal se kuch ajeeb si harkate kar rahi hain. din bar apne kamre mein thi aur yaha tak lunch pe aane ke liye mana kar rahi thi.
( I don't know maaji but from yesterday she is acting all strange. Full day she was locked inside her room and even she did not wanted to come for lunch)
Priya: Kahi Geet kisi baat ko leke pareshan tho nahi hain na. Annie, Vicky college mein kuch hua tha kya.
( I think she is upset for something. Annie, Vicky did anything happened in college)
The word college itself brought fear in them and slowly they said no. Maan was more furious to see Geet like tat as he somewhere knew tat she was avoiding him. but why the hell she was so sacred of him. He tried to get up when Rajveer said.
Rajveer: Priya, Rano tum dono jaake dekho tho humari beti ko aakhir kya hua hain. mujhe kuch theek nahi lag raha hain. aise chup chap rehne walo mein se nahi hain Geet.
( priya, rano u both go and see wat has happened to her. I don't feel good she is not a girl who would sit so quite)
Mohinder: rajveer theek keh raha hain. Rano tum dono jaake dekhlo aur humari zarrurat padi tho hume bhula dena. Aur haan uske liye lunch leke jaana aur tum dono bhi wahi uske saath kha lena.
( rajveer you are right. Rano u both go and see and if u require us than call us. And yes take lunch for her and even u both do your lunch there with her)

Precap: Geet still avoiding Maan

Maan all the more Angry on Geet.

Here is my next part.. so hope I have done a good job by showing Geet's fear here. So please do like and comment as I will be waiting for them eagerly sweethearts…

Love you alll

Shoba…………………………………………………….

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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update ... Poor Geet ...instead of getting angry Maan should do something.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved the part a lot..
That incident made geet to retire more into her shell..
But maan s not understanding her fear...
Nw again angry..
Its really a dangerous love..
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update
poor geet feel sooo bad for her
when maan will realize that his anger is scaring her more
waiting for next update
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update
in dis ff will maan ever please geet????
every time he gets anger 4 every small thing
poor geet...
cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
wonderful update...
wonder how can Maan not understand her fear...afterall that is why he punished her right...
i hope he realises soon that he is actually punishing her...not loving her
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Posted: 13 years ago
gr88 prt ...eagerlyy waiting fo nxt prt updt sooon pleazzz...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome Updateee I dont understand why Maan not understand Geet feelings that she hurt bcoz of him only and he is angry on her only .poor she

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