**FLAMES OF DESIRE** MG FF IMP NOTE ON PG 145 - Page 55

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

FLAMES OF DESIRE

PART- 6

she was stunned wen she saw him standing right infront of her...she didn't dared to look at him...she backed out a liltle...hiding behind her parents shield...n dats wen she found him holding her hand n dragging her out frm their...leading away frm crowd...she looked at him n then on the hold...scared she looked at her parents n everybody...which were standing as shocked as she was...she felt embarrassed n scared...maan dragged her out exiting frm the hall...pulled her to a lone corner...pinning her to the wall...

geet was horrified wid his actions...maan was holding her frm her shoulders tightly... scared she closed her eyes...bit her plump lips...this triggered his passion...he moved his both hands down her arm...smoothly touching her...creating havoc in her body...she started breathing heavily...maan interlocked his fingers wid her...pressing it firmly...moved her arms up, wid their interlocked fingers...parallel to their heads...she arched her body towards him in response...he bend down towards d hollow of her slender neck...pushing his chest now againts her...closing d distance between their bodies...he kissed her on her slender neck...burning her skin their...then nibbled it gently giving a love bite...

geet moaned.... "ohhh maan"

maan licked it their to sooth her pain...he moved up towards her cheek...giving wet open mouth kisses throughout his path...by now geet was lost into his touch...she was going mad wid the sensation he was creating...she tried to free her hands to hold him to her...she so much desperately wanted to feel him...bt maan didn't loosened his hold a bit...he smirked at her plight n licked her blushing red cheeks...followed by a bite..."ahhh" she moaned...

n then she felt someone tapping her shoulder...her closed eyes got irritated...she didn't wanted this passion to end...anyone to stop them...then she realised wat if sm one is watching them doing this...shocked she opened her eyes the next moment...meeting her mom's worried ones...her mouth opened in a big O...like wud screamed d next moment...getting out of her dreamland...she looked all around...finding her self in hall between the guest...n both her families looking at her wid worried looks...

"kya hua puttar...tu chillayi kyu...r u ok"

geet looked at her mom n then behind her at a distance was maan standing looking amusingly at her...he had that evil teasing smile on his face...like he knew wat she was day dreaming...

geet scared jerked her hand randomly...accidently hitting a passing by waiter...the tray which was is in waiters hand fell down...creating a huge sound...geet closed her mouth embrassed scared for creating a scene...maan looked away shaking his hand...thinking..."kya hoga iss pagali ka"...he closed his eyes smiling at her antics...geet had big fat tears in her eyes...thinking she ruined maan's party...

dadi rushed to her...holding her by arms...

"beta koi baat nahi hota...hum abhi nakul se keh ke sab saaf karwa denge...aap royiye nahi asi choti bato ke liye"

(beta no need to worry...it happens...i will ask nakul to clean it all...u don't cry for such small things)

then dadi told nakul to clean it all...n ask d guest to carry on wid the party...she wiped geet's tears...n told annie to take her in for sm fresh air...n to calm her self...rano lovingly carresed her baby's cheeks n eyed her to go wid annie...maan was feeling bad for her, bt wid next thought, he was liking his effect...he knew for sure she was dreaming of him...wid her looks n the way she was looking at him proved his gut feeling...he smirked...moved towards mohinder n rano...he took their blessings...n mohinder hugged him lovingly...rano kissed his forehead giving her blessings...they were so much happy for maan...n they continued chating...

On the other hand annie took geet to her room...

"yaar geet kya ho jata hai tujhe...kabhi kabhi kitne pagal ki tarah behave karti hai"

geet so much wanted to hit annie wid smthing...bt then thought no use..."yeh dushta danavo ki toli kabhi nahi sudhar sakti chahe kuch bhi karo"...she pouted looking at her babaji..."aap bhi koi kasar mat chodo mujhe satane ka...n aaj toh hadd hi kar di aapne"...her cribbing continued...n dats how annie found her...after getting no response frm geet annie looked behind finding her cribbing...

"ho gaya tera"

"kya"

"wahi jo kar rahi hai"

geet innocently "kya kiya maine"

annie sighed thinking "kuch nhi ho sakta iska"...giving up she told geet to come to her so dat she can touch up her makeup...geet like a small obedient baby went her...

annie after completing her makeup...told her " baby abhi iske baad koi gadbad mat karna ok"

geet innocently nodded her head in yes...

"toh bacha ab chale bahar"...

"ha chalo"

annie smiled at her wud be bhabi...

they moved out n entered party...as they entered, the whole scene came flashing infront of her...making her guilty...n she looked at everybody if anyone was staring at her...she felt relief watching everyone engrossed in themselves...dats wen she was jerked by vicky...scaring the breath out of her...

vicky- "princess r u ok...kya ho gaya tha tujhe...teri tabiyat toh thik hai na"

"mai thik hu...mujhe kya hona hai" she said softly...

vicky- "yaar tu aise achi achi thik nahi lagati...apne andar ka shaitan ko jaga jaldi...jo sabka khoon pi jata hai apni bak bak se"

geet made a big O face..."shaitan"..."mai shaitan hu...vicky kamine kutte mai chodungi nahi tujhe...tu ruk abhi tujhe dikhati hu"

vicky- "oye hoye mai issi shaitan ko toh jaga raha tha"

n he started running around annie n then went to dadi, dev, nt. rano n mohinder who were chating wid maan...geet was following him unaware of were he was heading...vicky went behind dadi...n took her shield...

vicky- "dadi dekho apni fav poti ko kaise shaitan ki tarah marane daud rahi hai"

geet- "dadi dekho aapka pota mujhe shaitan bula raha hai"

Everybody were laughing hard at their cute nok jhok...n maan was lost looking at his mishty in her real self...he so much missed her a cute antics...he came out of his thoughts wen he heard her saying...

"dev bhai isse pakado"

dev tried catching vicky for geet...bt failed...

vicky laughed loud...n then went behind maan...n geet came frm opposite direction...colliding wid maan's chest...n she was abt to fall...wen maan took her in his strong embarrasse...he pulled her hand wid his one hand n second holding her frm her smooth waist...she collided wid his taut chest...n he gripped her in his arms pressing his hand on her waist...squeezing her to him...

geet closed her eyes fearing to fall...bt then she felt this familiar touch...she knew it was maan...she inhaled his aroma...consuming it in her soul...d warmth of his body was making her shiver...she had an instant goosebumps all over her body...n his sensuous squeez made her jelly in his arms...

both were lost in each other...everbody were looking at them lovingly...bt then seeing them not paying attention to anybodys presence, they felt embarrassed n shy...dadi coughed many times to make them gain their senses...bt still they didn't budge...annie, vicky, dev n nt started giggling...vicky went behind maan...n poked geet's arms which were on maan's shoulder...geet slowly opened her eyes meeting vicky's teasing one...n then she realised wat she is doing...her eyes instantly beacame big...she jerked out of maan's hold...looking at everyone smiling n teasing faces...she became hell embarrassed n went behind rano...vicky started laughing madly...when maan gave him his angry glare...vicky shut his mouth the next moment...making everybody giggle...maan too smiled...he looked at his mishty who was hiding behind her mom...he looked away as he himself was litle embrassed...
bt then he is the MAAN SINGH KHURANA...who can do anything he wants...n no one can stop him...

they all started chating n discussing things...bt geet didn't looked up even for a sec...it irritated him...after a while elders left this kids for themselves...n finding this chance maan moved towards geet, who was standing besides annie...he stood beside her...increasing her heartbeats...dats when the slow music started n lights went dimmed...everybody moved towards the dance floor...dev joined wid nt...n vicky n annie found themselves suitable partners...geet was standing alone wid maan...geet tried walking away...bt maan not giving any chance pulled her back...holding her in his arms..."I wana dance wid u" ...he wispered huskily into her ears...pressing her to him teasingly...

geet closed her eyes...she knew if they dance together they will again creat sm embarrassement for themselves infront of everbody...shyly she denied looking down, nodding her head in no...

"are u denying me"... he spoke calmly yet anger was boiling in him hearing her rejection...

geet didnt got his anger...she taught he is asking in his teasing manner...

"yes"...she said teasingly

maan made his hold more tight...which started giving her pain...she looked at him finding his eyes spitting fire...she got scared...

he jerked her away...looking at her angryly...geet tried explaning...when he stopped her putting his hand infront of her...

"CHUP BILKUL CHUP"...

he painfully looked at her one last time n went away frm her...geet felt choked wid emotions...she again ruined everything...she cursed herself...she was feeling miserable wen dadi came to her...geet wiped her tears n composed herself...

"beta where is maan...arent u both dancing?"

"woh dadi...he must be busy wid clients...I don't want to disturb him"

dadi sighed..."yeh maan nahi sudharenge...har wakt kaam"

she told geet to be wid her n rano as she will get bored alone standing here...geet joined them...n they were chating...wen geet heared the music changing into salsa dance number...she was stunned finding the spot light on maan...he was standing at the center...everybody stoped dancing n moved back...then maan stretched his hand out...as if giving it to sm body...n then a sexy gal wearing a short dress gave her hand in maan's hand...he pulled her closer...n she collided hard on his chest...
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precap - geet getting hurt😭😭😭😭😭...maan getting angry😡😡😡😡
yuppieee...me done wid part-6...now feeling contended wid wat i am typing...thank u so much for ur likes n support...
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Edited by mahimaneet - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
OHHH M FAINTTT ,I M 1STT 🤢🥳
🥳I CANT BELEIVEEE,FIRSTLY I M GOING TO DANCE OHHH BALLE BALLEEE
NOW COME TOO UPDATE IT WAS AMAZINGGG I RELLY LOVE ITTT👏
MY ANGRY MAAN AND INOCENT GEET UFF I LOVE ITTT👏
👏AND GEET DREAMING UFFF SO NAUGHTY GEET😳😉

AND LASTLY PRECAP AGAIN INTERESTING ,YEH DIL MANGE MOREEE😊
😊
Edited by maaniqra - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb update dear..
geet day dreaming just awesome..
geet was damn sacred tat she ruined his party..
but by refusing a dance she mad him mad and now she have to face him,..
update soon dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesoome..
superb..
loved d upd.
maaneet moments were too good..
cont.soon..

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Posted: 13 years ago
hey awsm updt...
but i didnt lik the end maan wth anthr girl...pls dnt do tht nd try to low the anger of MSK it is tooo much poor geet she cant tell anythng because if his passion nd feel😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved it. Somebody save geet... Nd thanx 4 d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update
love it and want another update very soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update
loved it
geet is superb n her day dreaming
oh now maan wants to make geet jealous but i don't like maan with another girl
do continue soon

thnx for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
pm me yaar😊
Edited by sana.meher - 13 years ago

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