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Once Upon a Chance


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He walked out of his car, into the rain. His driver held up an umbrella to him, but He pushed him away. He closed his eyes and let himself loose in the rain. The action reminded him of something she had done so often. The very thing that had led to their 1st hug.

She was special, unique, different, and above all she was his. A special gift god gave to him. She was the gust of wind on a sweltering hot day. She was the cup of black coffee in the morning. She was the light of his eyes. She was where his eyes got solace. She was...She was...She was... Now, she was gone. Gone from his life forever.

Kehte hain:
Khuda ne iss jahaan mein
Sabhi ke liye kisi na kisi ko hai banaaya
Har kisi ke liye
Tera milna hai uss rab ka ishaara
Maano mujhko banaya tere jaise hi kisi ke liye



He still remembered that wretched moment. Whenever he closed his eyes he remembered her face. The face always filled with laughter, life, and care. It was now masked with hurt and bewilderment. He remembered him avoiding her. She kept begging for him to listen, and to hear her whole story. He didn't...his head kept pounding with the words "I am Pregnant". He had felt as if the ground had slipped from beneath his feet. He fell into a dark, emotionless, black pit. From which even she couldn't pull him out of. All because he kept pushing himself back in.

Kuch toh hai tujh se raabta
Kuch toh hai tujh se raabta
Kaise hum jaane, hume kya pata
Kuch toh hai tujh se raabta
Tu humsafar hai, phir kya fikar hai
Jeene ki wajah hi yehi marna issi ke liye
Kehte hain:
Khuda ne iss jahaan mein
Sabhi ke liye kisi na kisi ko hai banaaya
Har kisi ke liye

He entered the house smiling for the 1st time in many. Smiling because it was raining, and he knew that she loved the rain. And he loved her. He had been a coward. Yes, he had let her go, and not stopped her. Oh, how he wished time would go back and he could stop her. Alas, he couldn't. He would give his life to have her back in his arms. Coincidentally, it was the only way too. The only way he would get to meet her now would be if he was dead.

hmm Meharbaani jaate-jaate mujh pe kar gaya
Guzarta saa lamha ek daaman bhar gaya
Tere nazaara mila, roshan sitaara mila
Taqdeer ki kashtiyon ko kinara mila
Sadiyon se tarse hai jaisi zindagi ke liye
Teri saubat mein duaayein hain ussi ke liye
Tere milna hai uss rab ka ishaara
Maano mujhko banaya tere hi jaise kisi ke liye
Kuch toh hai tujh se raabta
Kuch toh hai tujh se raabta
Kaise hum jaane hume kya pata
Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta

She was gone. She was dead. At least, that's what people said. In his heart, she was very much alive. His heart wouldn't believe it because everywhere he looked; she was there. Her presence was everywhere. From the chiming of the wind chimes to every breath he took, to every beat his heart gave.

He knew she was his true love...The one created for him. He was ignorant; she was taken away from him...But he also knew that he will get a chance. Next time he wouldn't be foolish, he'll find her, keep her close to him, and he won't let her go. And with that thought he clutched even tighter to the photograph of her in one of his hands, and with his other hand he cut his vein with a sharp piece of glass...

Hoping, Believing, and Knowing, that he will get a chance. And with that chance they will be together.

Tu humsafar hai, phir kya fiqar hai
Jeene ki wajah hi yehi marna issi ke liye
Kehte hain:
Khuda ne iss jahaan mein
Sabhi ke liye kisi na kisi ko hai banaaya
Har kisi ke liye

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This is my very first Os ..Hope whoever read it...liked it

So please do leave comments...good and bad... Comments and criticisms are welcomed ...


----Hope 😳




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Posted: 13 years ago
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Aww Soo Happy for ya Hopy 👏Congrats for ur first OS 🤗Resv will read it later..Btw U Need to give english subtitle for those Hindi lines 😆Or else u need to appoint Rosh aunt to do this job for me 😆

Edited ...Its so beautiful OS Hopy 😭 U Kn i always like to read sad OS...Its really beautiful ..Keep writing more without killing them 😳😆
Edited by --Thush-- - 13 years ago
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beautiful os sista...😳 congrtazzz on ur first OS...🤗
Edited by gmsRk - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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res---
for English translation
..sorry i couldn't located one ...
Edited by hopehot - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awww! Shona is so beautiful!!! COngratz!! Hope you write more and more--loved the song selection too!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hope😭...please put a warning saying that it will be a sad love story next time😛...but you write very well...i loved the whole thing except knowing that she died and that he commits suicide at the end😳...please try a happy love OS next time😍

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: undisclosed

hope😭...please put a warning saying that it will be a sad love story next time😛...but you write very well...i loved the whole thing except knowing that she died and that he commits suicide at the end😳...please try a happy love OS next time😍


aw...🤗..this was my 3rd draft...in the 1st he finds her ...in the 2nd ..she dies, but he doesn't commit suicide...some how it evolved to be this ...😆
thanks for reading and commenting ...😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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..thanks 😃


Originally posted by: sweet coco

awww! Shona is so beautiful!!! COngratz!! Hope you write more and more--loved the song selection too!!

.hey..thanks for reading hetu dear
🤗


Originally posted by: gmsRk

beautiful os sista...😳 congrtazzz on ur first OS...🤗

.aw...thanks marie dear...m inspired by u all 😳😉🤗

Edited by hopehot - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it was an awesome os
loved it
hopehot thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: abinash079

it was an awesome os
loved it



thanks😃

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