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Melvina Preece

@angel-ki-shona

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Posted: 13 years ago

#221

Originally posted by: ajenn
Maan's emotional was well portrayed. Thank youWhat he did what something should be forgiven. He buried his love. Geet is really hurt with his act. He made her turn into cold heart.

Maan in coma!!!! Finally they sit and talked. That was really needed. Thou Geet is hurt she couldn't turn cold towards Maan even she wanted. Hearing Maan's story made Geet realize how Maan's situation was placed.

10 years leap.
Maneet getting married to Sally!!! This is wonderful.. I think jelousy worked well. hahahah sally should thank Ruchs
Me and Maneet are Agent!! This is mind blowing.. Awesome Mel totally Awesome. AM loving my Agent job u know 😉 yeah
Roopali's Tiger own a suit. It is working as an personal bodyguard like Salman 😆 OMG good one of course tiger the bodyguard company of shera hahhahah
I think soon Ruchs's name will be nominated in iifa awards 😊 I was thinking more in the direction of oscar's what say😃

It is really wonderful.
Am little bit surprised you've choose to end it so soon.
I was expecting little bit dragging on Maaneet's part. But since you choose this way, ill support you as well 😉 Great doing dear.
Eager to read you new story. aww thank you that means a lot Ajenn love you a zillion😳

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---nishu---

@---nishu---

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#222

how could u

ok i m my father daughter

but that not mean

you can show finger on my mom character

chal ab apni pakki wali katti

main nahi tujhe se baat karni

tu toh bad girl hai

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Melvina Preece

@angel-ki-shona

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#223

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9
how could u
ok i m my father daughter
but that not mean
you can show finger on my mom character

chal ab apni pakki wali katti
main nahi tujhe se baat karni
tu toh bad girl hai

Aucteully I was talking about your dad's charachter I heard ke maan ka charachter is deela no joking take you kuttie back no bad jokes anymore come on yaar I made you one off the leads in my story ab to kathi waapis lehle

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504887

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Posted: 13 years ago

#224

Originally posted by: ajenn
@ Ananya : Hey babe... What happen to you? Anything serious. How the accident happen

I was trying to learn scooty and i lost control while crossing road!!

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---nishu---

@---nishu---

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#225

Originally posted by: mel420

okay done pakka but I will write that one😈

i want to go to sleep

not in to coma

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Melvina Preece

@angel-ki-shona

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#226

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

i want to go to sleep
not in to coma

😲

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Tabinda Areeb

@t_areeb

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#227

finally he assured her he wont hide anything

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Reshu

@mayapari

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#228

loved it...

sorry could not comment...

thanx for including my name...

luv ya😊

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Bhanu

@Cherishh

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#229

Great and very refreshing story.

Super Duper ending for a lovely, amazing, great, wonderful, truly breath-taking, and many more to the list, FF...just loved it to the core dear...I loved it so much so that I finished reading it in one go and had a very great time or say had a blast. Loved it. You really are an amazing writer.

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Melvina Preece

@angel-ki-shona

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#230

Originally posted by: anu13
Great and very refreshing story.

Super Duper ending for a lovely, amazing, great, wonderful, truly breath-taking, and many more to the list, FF...just loved it to the core dear...I loved it so much so that I finished reading it in one go and had a very great time or say had a blast. Loved it. You really are an amazing writer.

OMG thank you I ams feeling flatterd