Completed Deceived 3 suprise P 36 - Page 13

Originally posted by: mel420

🤣 acha wah geet ke babaij sun li ya meri zebaan ko kya hogiya hai yeh madame mutje upper bech ri hai or meri zebaan ki baat kari hai.
😲 you called me pagel just wait for the next update if you hated this update I don't now what you will do when I post the next update😈

wahtever u did...

Originally posted by: aakritisri1111

Hey mel wat i m reading yaar... Pls dnt do dis ok ok i agree i too was nt mch happy wid d twist bt being a writer i understand dat twist is needed in every story bt probably d thing which is right 4m our pov doesnt mean dat it'll lyk by our readers too... Their reactions 4 our updates cannot b always as we expected... Ananya nd 9n9i9s9h9u had reacted d way dey felt ok i agree dat it is discouraging bt jst look at d other side of d coin it'll help u to improve ur nxt update nd in dat u can clarify ur reason to gve dis twist... So dnt b sad nd trust me dear i truly luv ur story so pls dnt think i lost my interest in it... It was jst mst of d tym no scrath dat almost everytym m ol thru cellphone nd wen i get ol thru pc i just update nd log off thanx to my busy schedule datsy couldnt able to comment on tym bt i read each nd every update of urs even wen m at office... So nw chillax take a deep breath refresh ur mud nd start writing d nxt part... M dyieng to read it...

@9n9i9s9h9u i understand dear bcoz at d end of d day m also a reader apart 4m writer so can easily understand d reac of readers especially den wen it comes to separation of maaneet

Originally posted by: mel420

👏 good one you and afraid acha joke that

Originally posted by: aakritisri1111

@9n9i9s9h9u i understand dear bcoz at d end of d day m also a reader apart 4m writer so can easily understand d reac of readers especially den wen it comes to separation of maaneet

@nishu ha ha ha dnt worry wo bhi samajh jayegi... Abhi upset hai na bcoz she didnt expected dis reaction... She'll b fine soon

Originally posted by: anupm04

Pls don't do this yar
Want to see maneet happy
Update soon

don't worry the story will be the way I was planning it all along just irritating mine crazy friends

Originally posted by: aakritisri1111

Hey mel wat i m reading yaar... Pls dnt do dis ok ok i agree i too was nt mch happy wid d twist bt being a writer i understand dat twist is needed in every story bt probably d thing which is right 4m our pov doesnt mean dat it'll lyk by our readers too... Their reactions 4 our updates cannot b always as we expected... Ananya nd 9n9i9s9h9u had reacted d way dey felt ok i agree dat it is discouraging bt jst look at d other side of d coin it'll help u to improve ur nxt update nd in dat u can clarify ur reason to gve dis twist... So dnt b sad nd trust me dear i truly luv ur story so pls dnt think i lost my interest in it... It was jst mst of d tym no scrath dat almost everytym m ol thru cellphone nd wen i get ol thru pc i just update nd log off thanx to my busy schedule datsy couldnt able to comment on tym bt i read each nd every update of urs even wen m at office... So nw chillax take a deep breath refresh ur mud nd start writing d nxt part... M dyieng to read it...

😆 I have no problem with criticism but In have a problem with killing geet in AMAK so I decided to grab her back don't worry me just irritating them

Originally posted by: rsroopali

oyeee meri pyariii bachiii

naraz mat hooo reee

happens whn everything happy turns sad all of a sudden

comon if people didnt like d sad part

it means u hv written it sooo welll tht it made people feel d pain

n u rockkk melll

dnt get sad for these thingsss

promise I won't