O Re Piya_OS_ - Page 10

Originally posted by: vibhashekhar

Sadiee kyo mujhe itna rula dia yaar second part me toh i was totally a cry baby :'(

Originally posted by: megh_piyashi

i m blank..!!!!
totally blank..!!!!
first i thought it may be a sweet, funny, cute story..
but when i finished reading i feel my vision is getting blur...
then i realized i was crying...i always thought you write only sweet & funny thing...i never though you could write something so emotional & touchy... but i was wrong...you proved me wrong yaar...but i don't feel bad that i was wrong...its just touched my heart yaarr...i don't know what more to say...i just don't know how to say...anything i say it will be less what i want to express...i love you yaar sadie..!!!!

Originally posted by: Maaneet_Vidu

Haan you did...okkk
Hehe...chamak challo...me too yaar...even i dont understand what she sings.

Originally posted by: PerfecT..GaL

Amazing os

Originally posted by: Anu-Ananya

@Sadiie: lol! Poor your back! and phew! I thought may be something is wrong on my side!!
Ah i do have PC and yeah no lappy wappy or tab!! but PC is virus-ated right now lol! So I am free from updating he hhe! You know what there's a ff named deceived by mel420 and I am a character in there! he he! And I am a cursing and dhamki queen there! And i do have all sorts of pets with my devil sis lol(rsroopali) !! butterfly(cobra)
biteyy(dog) blueyy(blue poisonous frog) puppy(piranha)goldeyy(scorpion)
lol!

Originally posted by: AbbyluvsMaan

Sexo... gosh.. u made me cry man...
though nt as much as Zee would have cried...
(u knw y I dnt cry... )
but den.. hats off to u babes...
I didnt shed a few tears n trust me dats an achievement... 😊

okay.. m starting with the scratch...
I loved the banner...
u knw d moment I read... "Not all love stories have a happy ending" ... i had a slight smile on my face... d smile of pain n damage... this single line... took away my heart...
so missy u took away my heart... with just d first look... 😉

den... d way the OS started was brilliant...
Geet dancing in the rain...
whispering Maan's name...
then n there I knew.. Maan was no more in the world with her...
he wasnt there to spread his arms for her and hold her safely n smilingly in his arms...
the feeling of a shattered heart instantly started creeping into me...

I loved the way Geet thought of Maan's effect on her...
how everything about him made her heart race... how his smile, his words made her smile... something that wasnt permanent...
I absolutely loved the point where she was dancing and the only thing that kept her going was the confidence that Maan had in her... the confidence that Maan alone instilled in her...
Her heart only wanted to make Maan proud... Maan.. to whom her whole life belonged...
unaware of the fact that in true meaning... Her life belonged to Maan...

den dat part really made me shiver when Geet was goin away ... n Maan kissed her forehead... promising her silently to take care of her... n to be with her...
yes... though he ws goin to leave her to blank eyes but he did promise to be with her... to take care of her... to give her strength...that part honestly made me shiver...

My heart really raced the moment Geet heard Maan's voice n realised it was a tape...
a silent tear dropped out of my eyes... when Maan said dat he had fulfilled Geet's dream of seeing the world and from them she'll see the world through his eyes...
My heart shattered to know that Maan had given her eyes to Geet just like it stopped Geet;s breath...
n den... he said...

'But, by the time you get this; It'll be too late'

I closed my eyes and tears flowed out of my eyes because I knew Maan was no more ... he had fulfilled Geet's dream n given away her life...

The moment where Geet was trying to wake up Maan...
first she was trying to be playful n slowly the realisation dawned upon her n her voice started to choke... that moment just took my breath away...I had tears glistening my eyes...

Geet screamed for Maan... n I felt like screaming too...
though her screams we could read... but my screams died in my throat...
The pain of ur loved one going away is immense... when you see the one you loved the most going away right in front of your eyes... that pain is just indescribable... but u wrote it beautifully Sexo... amazingly well expressed...

again Geet heard Maan's voice... revealing the secrets he had kept from her...
his brain tumor... dat they didnt win any competition...
my heart just stopped beating...
DOES THIS LOVE REALLY EXIST...??? NOOO...
but reading it... just wrenched my heart...
he spent the money he had on her dreams... on her desire...
he gave up his live to make Geet see the world...
The point where he was begging Geet not to harm herself n not to cry was heart shattering... how even after he had left the world... he never left his Geet... he never wanted her to be unhappy... he loved her immensely...

tears dropped down my eyes when Geet was being taken away from Maan's body... her screams came out of my eyes as tears... it pained my heart...

Geet gave up her life...
the scene where she says that shes breaking her promise because she couldn't live for 17 days without him... her dream was to see him ... but he wasnt thea for her to see...
she couldn't have survived without her Maan...
n so.. she took herself above to her Maan to stay with him till eternity...!!!!!!!

Beautiful OS Sadiie...
beautifully shaped... beautifully proceeded... beautifully framed... beautifully emoted...
it truly touched my heart...

I really loved the last line u wrote...

Not Every MSK is a business tycoon with money to buy the world...

Brilliant Job Sadiie...
love you sooo much... ❤️
urs.. Abby... 😉

Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan

wonderful os
sad but beautifully written

Originally posted by: kawaii_geet

bEautiful os dear... I loved it so much and trust me i didn't cry...being da tragic lover tht i am...i just loved the whole thing...esply da last line "NOT EVERY MSK IS A BUSINESS TYCOON WITH MONEY..." and da song...it created magic...!! And the way maan fulfilled all her wishes yet taking away her very life with him unintentionally...and geet's last act...when she says 'maan don't cry...' highlights of the os! Hats off to u!

Originally posted by: bhanu_rekhag

simply heart touching n amazing OS

Originally posted by: kuhu18

a beautiful OS but really a sad one .. i am speech less
death of a love one is the ultimate pain ... then we realize that we are no one in frount of God what ever we do how ever we progress but God will is supreme and we become helpless
but you know what to die with someone you love (may it be any realities ) is the easiest way out to live without them is the toughest one