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lovely character sketch
loved it
waiting for the update
continue soon
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Congrats on new FF
interesting concept
thanks for pm
update soon
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liked ur charecter sketch...could have included meera for dev.
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MAKE SUE THAT U WAS READ PROLOGUE AND CHARECTER SKECH

Part 1 SHART : RANG GAYE TERE RANG ME

Location : st. xavier's collage , play ground



Geet , dev ,Arman , ridhhima (ridz) ,nupur , mayank , khusi , arnav , samrat ,gunjan , udayveer (uv) ,manyata (mona) all gathered there and playing TRUTH OR DARE ???

(Rachana ' ab me har baar ye sab junglio ka name nahi lene vali

We should give their group a name

Think think rachana hmm we shall call them as jungal grop nHI I thik JOKAR PARTY )

The whole JP gathered at play grond and playing .

That's their fav game thruth or dare ?

They sited in circle .. an empty bottle is kept in middle of circle.

Dev made turn round the bottle .

Round and round , Round and round , Round and round , Round and round ,

Bottle stopped .

Bottle's derection is in side of geet .

Every one started clpping ..and cheearing geet .

JP : GEET GEET GEET GEETTT

Geet : okay okay

Tell me , muje kya karna hoga ???

Dev : ummh , its my chance to give u PUNISHMENT

Geet gave an angry glare to dev by hearing tat word "PUNISHMENT" .

(Rachana ' ooo MISS GEET HANDA and PUNISHMENT ?????)

Dev gulped hard seeing her anger .

He immideatly correct his mistake .

Dev : I mean what u want to choose between TRUTH OR DARE ?????

Geet (with attitude) : dev , tum jante ho ham kya choonte (choose) he ; geet handa hamesha dare choose karti he ???

Dev often scared from her .

(Rachana ' lage raho dev babu )

Dev : hmm , okie okie

Dev started thinking .( for 1st time he is thinking)😆

That time dev's eyes caught attantion of maan's entry .

Maan is newbie in collage . he sifted hear in midway of 2ndsamester becoz of some personal reason .

He is lokking damm sexy and every seniour & junior girl drolling over him .

But maan didn't give any attantion to them .

Dev noticed that.

Nd an evil plan came on his mind .

Dev : geet , I ll give u an intresting task .that u can never complite .

Geet : ek baar keh kar dekho

geet handa kuch bhi kar sakti he .. nothing is impossible for geet handa .

do u understand that ??

dev again scared seeing her anger .so he tried to cool down her .

dev : okay okay . cool cool

pehle us task ko sun to lo

geet cool down her tempare .

geet : ummh no let me think first '.

I think the task is I have to get up at 5 in the morning .

Dev : No

Geet : to muje thande pani (cold water) se nahana (bath) padega .. rit ???

Dev : No baby vo to tumne phle hi kar dia he

Geet : so proffeser ko thappad (slap) marna hoga ??/

Dev : no baby vo bhi tumne kar dia he

Geet : to kisi buddhe(old man) ko kiss karna hoga ??

Dev : no vo bhi t to tumne phle hi kar dia he

Is baar kuch naya he '.

Let me tell u that

Dev made her turn to maan's derection .

Dev finger out on maan .

Dev : see geet that guy

Geet sees maan .

Its first time geet sees maan .

Geet kept straing at him .he looks like familier she thought .

Gungunati hain yeh hawayein

Geet ki ankhe(eyes) vahi ki vahi dhaher jati he .

Gungunata hai gagan .

She felt

Gaa raha hai yeh saara aalam

Zoobi doobi param pum

Her heart felt llike she want to dance

Zoobi doobi zoobi doobi naache kyun
Paagal stupid mann

Zoobi doobi zoobi doobi pum paara
Zoobi doobi param pum

uske baal hava me lehra rahe he ,

, Shaakhon pe pattey gaa rahe hain
Phoolon pe bhanvre gaa rahe
Deewani kirine gaa rahi hain
Yeh panchhi gaa rahe

jamana tham sa gaya he , sirf vo he and uska maan he , or koi he hi nahi

Even she can not seeing her gro p and dev

Ohhh..
Bagiya mein do phoolon ki
Ho rahi hai guft-gu
Jaisa filmon mein hota hai
Ho raha hai hu-bahoo

She felt like hava dheere chalne lagi he ,,







Iii iii..

Zoobi doobi zoobi doobi pum paara
Zoobi doobi param pum
Zoobi doobi zoobi doobi naache kyun
Paagal stupid mann

Zoobi doobi zoobi doobi pum paara
Zoobi doobi param pum
Zoobi doobi zoobi doobi naache kyun
Paagal stupid mann

She felt that baris hone lagi

Rimjhim rimjhim rimjhim
San san san san hawaa
Tip tip tip tip boondein
Gurrati bijliyaan

Jaisa filmon mein hota hai
Ho raha hai hu bahoo

Ii ii iii ii

Listen this song while reading .

Head phone most welcome

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yJ1uLVgv3Vg

Dev : geet geet

She didn't listen

Dev patted her solder

Still she didn't anser

Everyone wonders that what happen to her suddenly .

Everyone(jp) : GEETTT

Geet snaped back from her thought .

Her drolling seasion can't compete .

Geet (embaressingly) : ha ha kya hua ..

Samrat : kya hua ?????????????u r asking to us '.. ye to hame puchna chahiye kya hua

Geet : hmm vo vo vo

Nupur : geet vo k ssge kuch bologi ????

Geet : ha dev vo task batao na !!!!

Dev : ha so vo boy dekh rahi ho . I think he is new in collage .

Geet : ha to

Dev ; so he is ur task .

Geet didn't understand his meaning .

Geet : matlab ????

Dev : matlab , ye ki tumhe us ladke ko apne pyar me girana hoga .

U have to fall him in ur love that's ur task .

Geet : are u out of ur mind ???

Why you want to breck an innocent's heart ???

I can't do that yaar .

Dev smirks

Dev : so tumne haar manli na !!!!

Ms GEET HANDA

Geet : I don't say that dev

Dev : geet u have only 2 choice

1st complete ur task otherwise apni haar (defact) maan lo

That word HAAR pirkd in her heart .

How can she confess her defact .

Bcoz of her so called ego she can't do that .

Usne kabhi harna sikha he nahi tha .

UV (udayveer) : dev , I can bet on this , she can't complete this task .

Forget that yaar

Samrat : yup I am also agree with you , uv

Dev : ya guys , forget that task and all .

We should play further .

Nupur : I don't want to play , this is cheating yaar ..

She have to complete her task.

Gunjan : ye aap kya keh rahi he di ??

She can't do that ..

Mona : right I m with u gunjan

Mayank : yes she can't

They all started fighting

Geet (angrily) : stop ittt guys ,

She cool down her temper .

Geet : okie fine I ll do that .

So want to SHART(bet) kon jeet ta he ??

6 days ''.. only 6 days''..

She showed 6 fingers to dev .

6 days and I ll complete my task ,

6 din & ladka in ..

In 6 days I ll fall him love with me .

All shocked to hear her sudden dissison .

So who want to bet with me ???

Khusi : pehle ek baar pirse sochlo geet

Geet : I made my dissison , now noone can stop me .

So tell me everyone's dissison

Samrat , udayveer , dev , nupur , ridz , arnav are with geet that she ll complete her task

And gunjan , mona , arman , khusi , mayank are against to geet that she can't do that .

Arnav : bada maza ayega isme

Khusi show her funny angry eyes to asr

He couldn't say anything furthere.

Uadayveer : so okkk ab jo harega vo kya karega ??

Sam : hmm let me think

Haaa jo harega vo dusri team k sumar camp ki fees dega

Done ????

All agree with samrat ,

Geet : ok so task start now ,,

Ex cuse me guys '

Be ready Mr shart

Maan was serching for principal's room ,, he asked some students but they all teasing him , so he tring to serch by himself ..

Geet comes from back and patted his solder ,

Maan turned to see who's that

He saw her 1st time

He also kept staring at her ,

Geet (wondering) : Isse achanak kya ho gaya ??

Geet : hello Mr shart

Geet (st) : iska naam kya he ??

Geet waved her hand infront of his eyes ,

Bt still she found him, lost ,

Geet patted his solder bt he again didn't replied and kept stearing on her ,

Geet(shouted) : hellooo

Maan jumped out from his thought ,

Maan : ha ha kya hua ???

Geet : kya hua ?? ye to muje puchna chahiye kya hua kha kho gye the ??

Maan ( embarasingly) : wo kuch nahi bas ese hi ,

Geet :any way forget that

you was serching something right ?? may I help u ???

Maan : yup actully I was serching principal's room , can u tell me where is it ????

Geet : yes its right behind library ,

She showed her finger to the direction

Maan : ok thanksss

Geet : so u r new student , ?/

Maan : yess , hi I m maan , maan singh khurana

2nd yeur

He offer his hand for shakehand

Geet : hi I am geet , geet handa

I m also in 2nd yeur

They shake their hand ,

Maan : woww that's great

Geet : yup we are in same class

Geet offers her hand ,

Geet : so let's be frnd

Maan ( hassistantly) : ummh , I am sorry but I don't know you , its only 5 min before we meet , how can we be frnds ??

Sorry

Its hurts geet's ego ,

Geetmake her face harder to contol her anger ,

She snapped her hand

Geet : its ok , I can understand

Maan : thanks for understanding me , see u in class room , now I have to go ,

Bye

Geet : yup sure byee meet u latter

Maan goes from there

Bt now geet is in full of anger ,

Geet : ab tak to muje tum par daya aa rahi yhi ,

I was thinking am I wrong ? but nw u proved it mr maan singh khurana that I am right , I am not breacking an inoocent heart ,

U deserves that,

Tumne , tumne geet , geet handa ki frndship dhukray he maan , now u wait and watch what ll I do ??

U ll finished soon dear ,

Ab tumhe mujse koi nahi bacha sakta ,,,

U ll fall in love with me in 6 days then I ll breck ur heart ,

She smiles evilly ,

Her ego took over her heart so she is now blind , can't see anythinhg ,

Precap :

Reging of maan by frnds of geet ,😭

Maan wearing sari😆

And geet comes to save her 👏


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Edited by Rachanachag - 13 years ago
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awsome yar hats of to you mind blowing love you gurmeet arnav is sweet😃😃😃😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice yaar... Lovely update... I want to request u something... Plz maan ko jada week mat dikhana... Falling in love with geet is alright bt his character should be strong... Dis is jst ma request.. Rest its ur story
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loved the update..
aww maan wearing sarri
waiting..cont.soon
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part 1
OMG Geet is betting on Maan...
cont soon...
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awesome update...

so in this FF Geet and Maan nature is complete opposite...

Geet is angry and proudy young woman and Maan is naive and innocent damsel in distress...who will be saved by The Geet Handa...

continue soon...


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