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Posted: 13 years ago
this line very much

Geet "Sir how do I know Sir. I am just an idiot box meant for 'pure entertainment'. Sometimes I don't realize when the channel is changed. No prices for guessing who carries the remote Sir. "


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Posted: 13 years ago
Absolutely freaking awesome update . sheesh , must compliment for writing such brilliant stuff .👍🏼 🤗👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
geet n r super workd up brain...
loved it
missed maan pov 2de..bt geet s lines more thn made up 4 it
"Sir how do I know Sir. I am just an idiot box meant for 'pure entertainment'. Sometimes I don't realize when the channel is changed. No prices for guessing who carries the remote Sir. "
awesm!!👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
~Edited~
Where should I start with 😆...I kept searching for the 'Pink' part in these two updates..but I guess we need to wait for that! 😆
How can anyone not think of MSK in physical terms! Geet is different...but when it comes to the MSK..he can make anyone weak..wait wait...weak as well as strong!Haaye!! 😍
He is truly amazing!!

"He kept staring. She just lifted her hand and clutched her phone as if clutching his hand. He seemed to notice. One by one his lines of worry started to ease.
Finally his face and eyes relaxed. And he gave a small smile. Geet wiped her tears and smiled back."

Please don't kill us with such lines!! 😍(Well don't take this literally please...you continue with such lines in your updates 😉 They are nothing less that a rocking treat!)

I love it when Sir says..."Geet now go home"..I have been noticing this line frm many updates and I absolutely love it!! 😆
Here Geet seems like a little kid!!
So she was again thinking about the two most important men in her life while swimming..Her father and Maan Sir!! I love her swimming sessions!! 😃

Do I need to mention that I fell in love with that line 😍
"Sir, might I add you look very cool in casuals Sir."
Strangely in this FF..I'm falling in love with the dialogues and monologues more than anything else!!😆

Hmmm..coming to the other part ...well I wasn't sure if I should write this thing or not..but since every word you type needs a lot of thinking work..I felt that it's your right to know what impact your updates have on your readers. 😛
TBH after reading the whole update..I read ,re-read ,re-re-read Romeo-Geet convo especially those lines Maths being an absolute truth and then the line about Money being in the mind-set of the societies.
This part of the update seriously reminded me of my college seminar...hmm..well how do I put it..Actually when we have seminars for both undergrads and postgrads together we don't easily get all the things that prof talk about ,so we usually write down all those terms and then God knows what all we do after that 😆...I felt the same after the update.
When I read that line about the money what I did was I started re-reading one of the readings of my course where there is a para about working on the basis of trust!! I kept reading that one and I started re-reading all my assignments and then here comes the other line..

Men of science rarely made it big in terms of money. Probably because they did not understand the language of money or simply did not care. Their joy lay in finding the absolute truth. And nothing could be farther from truth than money.
I don't know why this line caught my eye..this one seriously reminded me of something and I again indulged myself in reading some random articles ,after reading all that..I started pointing out mistakes in my own assignment making me realize my stupidity..Now again I called my friend to discuss something regarding that and all this because of this update..You are Freaking Awesome!!!! I mean you can seriously make any-one think!!! I absolutely loved this update!!😲 I don't even know how to express my excitement and all!!! 😆.
..Ermm.. I feel so stupid after writing all this ...'coz it might not make proper sense but again if I wouldn't have written this I would have felt this comment being incomplete or something like that!!! 😆
Lastly...I loved the update but I'm eagerly waiting for that This part!!! 😆

Edited by World-of-Dreams - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

There are two major parts I loved in this update. First one is her reaction to Romeo's revelation that he isn't good at Math. I adore Geet for this quality of hers. She sees what others don't at times. And one more thing about her is, she saves everything in memory and ever random, disjoint sentence would be saved for future reference and be solved. To me Geet is a person who expects a solution for every problem. She questions, because she wants to understand. She keeps on thinking, because she wants to solve the puzzle. I love this aspect in her. SO, anyway her reaction to Romeo was beautiful. The way she connected his simple sentence, and Meera's expression few days back and formed a theory was beautiful.
The second scene I loved was hands down the scene where her eyes fill up watching her Sir in distress. You know few days back, when i was not so sure about the ending, and was scared about her heart break, what worried me more was not that her love would be unrequited or he would be a womanizer. My worry was purely what she would be after the heart break. Because, she cares for him so very much that sometimes it scares me. Look at this scene for instance. Your may get hurt seeing your dear ones in pain but when you don't know the reason for their distress, yet if your eyes water seeing them in such a state, it shows the amount you care. Also the kind of person you are. Geet here is naive in her own way. How much deep her care runs was shown in the scene i mentioned above. Overall amazing update.

~Edited again~

Oh by the way, did i tell you i love love loved the scene where she whispers his name "Maan". I so wanted to know how much did he hear. And I prayed to god that he should hear it. Oh, I do love that name too. I like short names. Reva is the only exception of course🤣

Edited by Cloud9. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh Gaaawwwddd! Dis geet is the 8th wonder of the world.. 🤣 seriously man, was she less insane b4 so dat she needed to saw dat painting.. Hahahha 🤣 Geet's brain is likely to burst out sum day cuz of overwork.. 😃 And Maan looks cool in casuals.. Bahahahaha 🤣 Wat else can he do than just staring at her, hearing such statement.. 🤣 It's too good just too good going.. Thumbs up.. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: pawandeepk001

Oh Gaaawwwddd! Dis geet is the 8th wonder of the world.. 🤣 seriously man, was she less insane b4 so dat she needed to saw dat painting.. Hahahha 🤣 Geet's brain is likely to burst out sum day cuz of overwork.. 😃 And Maan looks cool in casuals.. Bahahahaha 🤣 Wat else can he do than just staring at her, hearing such statement.. 🤣 It's too good just too good going.. Thumbs up.. 😊



Hahahaa... caught ya here Pawan! 😆 Seriously... that painting, I agree can be interpreted in very many ways, but Geet toh na... omigod, usko leke baithi hai like in Art flicks! Angle badal badal ke dekhing painting ko sir ko apne aap ko painting ko sir ko meera ko apne aap ko painting ko sir ko meera ko vicky ko apne aap ko 😕 😕 😆

I so agree! This girl's brain will burst into smithereens one day! But then, our Maansir honge na to put it all back into place 😳 😳 😳

I know! You look good in casuals? 😲 😲 Yeh Geet toh chalti philti disaster nahi chalti phirti entertainment hai re 😆 How I would have loved to be in MSK's place! And let me tell you, I have NEVER EVER wanted to be in MSK's place EVER! I have ALWAYS wished to be in Geet's place! But for once for the first time since the show's beginning and expiry, I'd like to be this Maan and enjoy Geet 😆

Jussshhttt imagine, what will this girl do when MSK declares he just might love her at some point. Their romantic conversations would be such a hoot re! 🤣 🤣

Will he teach her to be a woman? 😍 😍 Will she ever go shy and blush in front of him and be stuck for words when he whispers "Geet" like he did earlier? ☺️ ☺️ Sigh 😍

I am SO FASCINATED by this FF! Jesus! I need to read it from the beginning once again! We get just bits and pieces of Maan's pov on her 😭 😭 (all in good time, I know) and I so want to see if I can dig out anything more on him... dig, dig, dig!

Bring it on milady!

And Pawan, see ya 😳
Edited by SiniHanda - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh My God! Dun make me imagine of their romantic talks sini.. U knw I become impatient.. Hehe 😃 And abt her being "stuck for words" I think u shud say "stuck for thoughts" after all thinking is the most often work she does.. 🤣 And and u want to be in MSK's place? Marna hai kya? 🤣 it seems adventorous but dun get tempted to be MSK, m telling u 🤣 u may not idea what he might be going thru.. 🤣 awww poor MSK.. 😃 And she indeed is a "chalti firti entertainment" 🤣

Originally posted by: SiniHanda



Hahahaa... caught ya here Pawan! 😆 Seriously... that painting, I agree can be interpreted in very many ways, but Geet toh na... omigod, usko leke baithi hai like in Art flicks! Angle badal badal ke dekhing painting ko sir ko apne aap ko painting ko sir ko meera ko apne aap ko painting ko sir ko meera ko vicky ko apne aap ko 😕 😕 😆

I so agree! This girl's brain will burst into smithereens one day! But then, our Maansir honge na to put it all back into place 😳 😳 😳

I know! You look good in casuals? 😲 😲 Yeh Geet toh chalti philti disaster nahi chalti phirti entertainment hai re 😆 How I would have loved to be in MSK's place! And let me tell you, I have NEVER EVER wanted to be in MSK's place EVER! I have ALWAYS wished to be in Geet's place! But for once for the first time since the show's beginning and expiry, I'd like to be this Maan and enjoy Geet 😆

Jussshhttt imagine, what will this girl do when MSK declares he just might love her at some point. Their romantic conversations would be such a hoot re! 🤣 🤣

Will he teach her to be a woman? 😍 😍 Will she ever go shy and blush in front of him and be stuck for words when he whispers "Geet" like he did earlier? ☺️ ☺️ Sigh 😍

I am SO FASCINATED by this FF! Jesus! I need to read it from the beginning once again! We get just bits and pieces of Maan's pov on her 😭 😭 (all in good time, I know) and I so want to see if I can dig out anything more on him... dig, dig, dig!

Bring it on milady!

And Pawan, see ya 😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks for the double update

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Posted: 13 years ago
well honestly i am not in a mood to type anything...coz i am busy feeling mushy😆😳...i loved the first part of the update...whereby she gets distressed seeing him so stressed out and sad...the way she had shed tears for him, staring at him and both sharing smiles and that one smile of her had managed to bring smile in his face...for me it was a clinching moment, which had managed to make me feel happiness,pain for them and make me blush too...it was such a beautiful moment...and so far this has been the best scene in ur ff...it was lovely and just made my heart goey goey😆
Edited by mollycoddle - 13 years ago

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