okiiee...well i have come to accept that i have soem unresolved issues with the female species of ur ff, except P and G...
D wants his bro to get hooked to someone, so that he doesnt poke his nose in D's wild activities...N seems to be planted BY D with a purpose to divert M's attention from D...
dadima seems to be indulging D too much and not understand thegravity of her actions by letting D continue with his wayward lifestyle...
N cud be a competition to G...though i dont think so...as much of N is elegant , classy , but she doesnt seem to have the natural innocence and depth that G has...well the last few words...ALL mine was def not meant for the pleasure she had in meeting him, it was like she was saying that HE is all mine...so she cud be a vital character who cud change the dynamics of M&G relationship...
for the first time i felt the into in prologue containing the four lines, wer meant for G and is from the POV of G Alone... the third second line which was the point of contention between me and
cloud9 few days back as to from whose POV it is...i feel it is from her POV...
she seems to be physically attracted to him and finds him irresistibly handsome , so much that now she fears that her growing attraction/feelings cud end up being disastrous for her...which means she wud be the villain of her life
Is it impossible to find the one true heart amongst millions aspiring to be by your side because you are blinded by all the beauty?i dont know how much of sense i make...but do i presume she means that she is blinded by his beauty that she feels that she might not be able to find a true heart amongst ppl who want to be by her side...i dont know how much of vital role V is going to play...but i feel he isnt redundant...
i feel all the lines in intro wer from her POV...MSK's pov was never there...
well again i seem to make no sense...but nevertheless ppl torture themself by reading this crap of mine...
@CLOUD9.....what r u views now about the second line...wud like to hear from u
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