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Posted: 13 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: nahtani88

Superb Os
Thank You So Much For The PM



thanks a lot dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: anu13

Hi,


Nice OS Neha. Good start. Looking forward for your next update and am wondering how Maneet story goes ahead.

Keep writing😃.




thank u so much anu...
😃 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: todayzstar

Aww..mindblwng yaar..
luvd itt..😳



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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shraddha.sinari

Nice yaar ye maan toh superfast speed me baag raha hai .n exited 4 precap plz add me.



thanks shraddha...
hahaha maan ki speed kafi tez hai...

okay dear will add u..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi,

OF COURSE I WANT...waiting already...update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: anu13

Hi,


OF COURSE I WANT...waiting already...update soon...



hii dear... yup updating in some mins... just adding pics...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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updating.. just now adding pics...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#98




part-4




Drashti hugged him immediately unknowingly.. gurmeet stiff a bit with the sudden hug' First he hesitates a bit with her hug but she is crying , she is afraid from all this.. gurmeet too hugged her back for consoling her' caressing her head' his shirt getting wet by her tears'. Tears welled down from her eyes' she has passed from a worst part of her life.. she never felt like this' he cupped her face and wiped her tears' she looked at him with teary eyes blinking her lashes couple of times'. After some minutes , She realized that what she is doing..she is hugging a totally stranger.. ' she immediately back off from him looked down, looking here and there but not able to meet the gaze with his'. She doesn't know what he is thinking about her.. may be some bad thoughts' or may be some good or may be he is showing some mercy on her after seeing her condition' no no drashti is a very strong girl she can't broke down like this' after some time there is photo shoot and that is very important for her' there is an awkwardness for both of them' , both has some weird feelings' Gurmeet knew the state of mind of hers.. from which condition she went through'. He doesn't want to made her feel awkward' he tried to console her but doesn't want that she will feel miserable'.she said sorry to him' gurmeet looked at her with a questionable face..why she is saying sorry to me'? You should not be.. there is no fault of yours' gurmeet said to drashti.. drashti smiled a liitle to him' how sweet he is..!! she thought in her mind' gurmeet wants to lighten the environment so he tried to speak her.. he coughed a little for gaining her attention'

Gurmeet-what are you doing here? He asked a normal question, didn't expect any answer form her.. if she wants then she can answer him otherwise it will be okay for him'

Drashti-nothing much' I was going for my photo shoot but in mid.. you know rest about this' she replied him immediately' gurmeet looked at her.. ohh she is a model'

Gurmeet bluntly asked to her.. are you a model or actress? He pause for a sec then again said' don't take it wrong.. I have never seen you before in this industry'

Drashti-yeah I am model and actress too and did many advertisements' I have worked in a show dil mil gaye' she msiled a little at him'gurmeet looked at her.. ohh wow so she knows acting great and model too' but why he didn't saw her till yet' well he is film star that's why'

Drashti asked to him- and you?

Gurmeet-this is gurmeet chaudhary' before he said further about himself drashti cut him and asked'. You are the producer gurmeet chaudhary na? he nodded a little while smiling' and and your new movie is coming yaar mera rab warga' he again nodded' I heard that you are going to produce a movie and will act in that as a lead character' right? Drashti asked to him'

Gurmeet- you heard correct.. my next movie is coming but nothing is final till yet'

Drashti-ohh' thanks for saving me and sorry for troubling you'.

Gurmeet- no thanks and no sorry' this is my duty as a humanity'

Drashti-no one fulfilled their humanity here in this city, Mumbai' but today I felt that good person are still exists'

Gurmeet smiled shyly' thanks'

Drashti-aap kyo thanks bol rahe hai.. thanks to mujhe bolna chahiye'.

Gurmeet-it's okay.. Can I drop you somewhere? He asked to her'

Drashti-thanks for asking.. I have my car' she is going when gurmeet called her'

Gurmeet-excuse me miss?? Oops gurmeet doesn't know her name'.

Drashti smiled at him' drashti.. drashti dhami..

Gurmeet-ohh.. nice name drishti'.

Drahsti-no no.. it's drashti' not drishti'

Gurmeet-according to me it should be drishti' not drashti'

Drahsti-it's drashti' not drishti.. finally gurmeet gace up.. okay it's drashti'

Drahsti-okat bye.. I am going now.. she sat in her car but her car broke down.. what the hell'!! Why it is not starting'.? Gurmeet came towards her.. what happened?

Drashti-see' my car broke down' ab mai kya karu.. mera photo shoot hai' gurmeet immediately called someone and called a mechanic who works personally for him.. gurmeet is also a very rich guy' actor and producer too' in 10 mins mechanic is there' gurmeet said to mechanic that after repairing the car, left this car at this address' drashti gace her address to him.. mechanic nodded'

Gurmeet-come I'll drop you at your respective place' she smiled and nodded' both sat in his car'where are you going?

Drashti-GORKY's studio.. there is my photo shoot..(I don't know about any famous photographer so this is my imagination name.. if there is any famous photographer, you know the name of him then you can tell me.. I'll add replace the name')

Gurmeet-great.. he is my buddy' lets go there.. both smiled at each other' and drove to the GORKY's studio'. Both reached there'

Gurmeet-hey GORKY'

GORKY-hey gurmeet.. after a long time buddy.. both hug to each other'

Gurmeet-yup buddy.. after a long time.. I was quite busy.. sorry dude'

GORKY-not at all' so hows you and hows life going on?

Gurmeet-I am fit and fine.. in-front of you.. and life is ok ok' you tell me' gurmeet forget that drashti is also there' then GORKY's gaze fell on drashti'

GORKY-oops.. sorry drashti' hi'

Drahsti-no.. it's ok.. hello' how are you?

GORKY- I am fine.. come.. we'll start the shoot in half hour.. everything is ready..

Drashti-okay..

Gurmeet-you guys carry on.. I have to make a very important call.. excuse me'

GORKY and drashti left for the photo shoot' drashti get ready and harry also with his camera' her photoshoot starts'






here gurmeet went in waiting room and call to someone.. luckily the phone got connected'

Gurmeet-hey' where were you from yesterday.. I was so worried' and why your number was going unreachable'.

Calm down calm down' itne sare sawaal ek sath.. I am fine gc.. said geet' geet and gurmeet are best friends' actually their parents are best friends so both knew each other from the childhood' she addressed him as gc because his name is too long for her' she called him gc from childhood' because bachpan me gurmeet is too long for a little girl' so she got an idea and told him that she will call him gc and he agreed' actually maan called her for the dinner.. he want to propose her.. so he prepared everything for her.. whole restaurant he booked for her' and here she took her call' maan heard that gc' and thought who is this gc? Gc what a name..!! and she is sweetly talking to him' him..she is talking to him or her? Gc to kisi ka bhi naam ho sakta hai na..

Geet-achha bata kya baat hai? Itna pareshaan kyo hai? Ohh she is talking to him in front of me..wo bhi itna sweetly'. maan thought' he patiently looked at her.. may be he will get some attention from her'

Gurmeet-where were you? And why were your number going unreachable?

Geet-nothing. May be some network problem hoga' oops she forget that maan is also there' tell me why you called me?

Gurmeet-nothing.. haan woh ek proposal hai'.

Geet-don't tell me again you trying to give me a chance'. Chance' what chance? Is he geet's boyfriend? No no maan geet ka boy friend.. aisa nahi ho sakta' maan thought'

Gurmeet-pehle poori baat to sun le'

Geet-dekh gurmeet' maine pehle bhi kaha mujhe koi filmo me kaam nahi karna hai.. mana ki you are an actor and producer too but I ma not interested.. finally maan got a relief.. she is talking about films' nothing more'

Gurmeet-ek last time soch le.. meri new movie aa rahi hai.. bas actress select nahi ho rahi hai..

Geet-jo bhi hai' I am not interested' tu audition rakh le.. koi achha face mil jayega teri new film ke liye'

Gurmeet sighed and replied.. okay..yahi karna padega.. chal bye'

Geet-okay bye sweetheart'. Both cut the call.. gurmeet went inside and watched drashti's photo shoot.. how easily she is giving different pose' very nice postures'. There is no fear on her face' so clean and perfect pose'. And looking so pretty' and maan is furious now at the word sweetheart'

Maan-why are you calling him sweetheart? he asked the straight question'

Geet-seems maan singh khurana is jealous'

Maan-no i am not jealous'

Geet-really..!!

Maan-yes of course'

Geet-wo to chehre se hi pata chal raha hai'

Maan-ok ok i was jealous.. i can't see you with anyone' happy now'

Geet-hmm very happy but why? she knew the answer but now she is pulling his leg'

Maan-because' now what to tell her'

Geet-before you propose me'.. you have to answer some questions of me'maan looked at her.. how she knows that i am going to propose her' and what questions' finally he sighed and said.. go ahead' both stood in-front of each other

Geet started her questions'remember rapid fire hai' maan nodded..

1st-akshay kumar or tom cruise? geet asked

Jacky chain maan replied immediately'she took a step ahead from maan'but maan is rooted on his spot'

2nd-rajma chawal or chicken curry?, geet asked'

Pasta, maan replied, she took one more step ahead'

3rd-gajar ka halwa or kheer?, geet asked, she is impressing by his answers'

Chocolate mouse maan replied, one more step she took towards him'

4th-suits or short skirt geet asked

Saree maan replied,, she is taking steps towards maan when he replied' both are little far away to each other.. she thought if she like his answer then she will take a step towards him'.

5th-yoga or exercise?

Tai-chi' geet again took a step towards him'now she is two steps away from him.. and maan is in his full confidence'.

6th-katrina kaif or angeline jolly? Actually she wants to know his likes and dislikes' so got an idea' and maan also knew her trick'.

Geet handa.. maan replied.. she overwhelmed hearing his reply'.

7th-family or love?

Both.. maan replied..maan also knew that why she is asking these types of questions.. she wanted to know his feelings about herself'.

8th-friends or girlfriend?

You' , and he is replying which is in his heart' honestly replying to her'

9th-college or garden?

Bedroom'. Maan replied..maan is going naughty now... she shied and again took a one more step ahead.. now she whispers in his ears'.

precap
last question...😉
and drashti caught love birds..


tell me friends hows it?
waiting for your response..
love to reading your suggestions and views about it..
pls support me for writing it further
and i have convert it into SS bec my frnd told me...
love neha





Edited by neha5058 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thank you so much my all buddies...
thanks for loving me and supporting me...
keep supporting me and commenting on my work...
hugs to all of you...
love
neha

Edited by neha5058 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi Neha,

Awesome update.

Woww...so Gurmeet-Geet and Drashti-Maan are friends..Nice combo.

Well, guess, Drashti is going to starr in Gurmeet's movie😉.

Hoye..hoye...Maan Singh Khurana is jealous😆...and Geet caught him red handedly...so niceee...

Loved the way Maan was answering everything...cho chweet...and what the hell...why did u stop there😡...just not so fair yaaar 💔😆😆

Update soon...wanna see Maneet together☺️.

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