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Posted: 13 years ago
ye lo muski offline!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

god knows wen wil be the nxt update
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update! Now Plz Plz Plz update bandishein also =)
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congrats for new thread!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

love their cute nok-jhok

nd love geet being J...

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
now m waiting for today s update
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congrats for new thread..
update soon dear..
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part
awww poor maaneet both were jealous but couldnt tell
n slept cribbing to each other
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesum part..
I cant believe that maan s still unaware of his feelings..!
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Posted: 13 years ago
speechless...really i donno what can i say...i just want to eat this sweet couple...agre v karte hain kitna sweet se...maan itna kuch keh rehi hain lekin sabkuch geet se cruddle hoke...somebody called "ur wife"-why geet didnt hear this yaar...bechari ko aur v tasalli ho jati...aur dekha wo ladka shyly whole day apne mistimia ko drool karte he bt he didnt know that all know abt that...

bt precap is scary n the thread video song...

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Posted: 13 years ago
i was so happy😛

seeing ur updating status🥳

i waited

n waited😍

n waited🥱

bt now i am🤢

shayad mera number kal aayega🥺
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Posted: 13 years ago

Dhundlae aks

PART 186

Maan hugged her from behind & laid next to her.. babaji iski baat nahi sunna, she doesn't care for me.
Umm..
she cried..
he kissed the back of her head before dossing off.
She hated herself being reminded of that stupid girl.. how she was drooling over her puchki.. for once she had no doubt he is only hers.
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Geets college started & maans new project success gave him a lot of additional responsibility.
Geet's final year in college..it was different for her. College without him, she knew it would hurt.. but didn't know she would miss him so much. Him possessively driving her, fights in canteen..dragging her through the parking lot.. bus stop!! there little moment in the bus stand ...in the hall way.. corridor!! everything just reminded of him.

Maan got his hands full, he even got a roll of team leader. Well with that came the offer to take up the role in NYC. He was supper excited more abt the team leader roll. That was pretty unexpected. Just couple of months on the job ..that too as a trainee ..& now this promotion was something very exciting. He was in cloud nine. He took mistimia for a dinner.. & this time she knew he had something to celebrate. She hugged him dearly & congratulated him without even him telling her the reason. He chuckled cutely.. & told her he became a TL. Like always she didn't indulge much into his job.. plane & simple she hates it!!! selfish majnu avoids it. Doesn't want to see mistimia khafa khafa.
Next few weeks were busy for Maan preparing for his documents. It was all happening side by side with his over load of work. He first broke the news to Daadi abt his project in NYC. Daadi was heart broken. Yash didn't even acknowledge the topic.
His dad felt even the last hope of getting him back in KC sinking. Some how this topic didn't reach Geets ears until it was just a week before he left. He had his tickets, visa everything in place. He was not realizing wat he is not thinking abt. Actually he had her so much taken for granted.. he being there when ever he walks back in to the outhouse!! he had no clue wat will happen to him.

Don't know why he didn't have the guts to tell her either. He was fearing something.. questions or anger..or the simple fear of leaving her.. or the fact of facing the reality!!!

It was over one of the weekend brunch when Daadi asked Maan, when he was going for his shopping.
Daadi ' Maan agar aap yeh week end free ho tho shopping karlo
Dev ' have u got ur tickets?
Geet was not sure wat they were talking abt. She suddenly felt left out. She looked at Maan. He seemed super excited
Maan ' haan Daadi, I was planning to go with Geet today.
he looked at Dev.. hain bhai ticket hogaya
The talks struck Geet strangely. She lowered her head hiding the choke she felt in her heart. Yash being oblivious to the whole conversation only frightened her more. She lowered her head further in a subdued voice.. like she feared to hear it, kanha jaa rahen hain.. she whimpered..no one could hear it.
It was not strange she didn't know anything abt him. Well that was abt their relation, something that hurts seems it all very superficial, shallow, but that was the reality too. She smiled weakly & went to the out house.

Maan came in ' challo
she just faked a smile
he felt it pricking his heart..first time able to clearly distinguish her smile.
Tum naraz kyun ho?
Aap kanhi jaa rahen ho?
She asked meekly walking towards the car
it felt like she was accusing him of not telling her, well that was the truth. He was guilty deep with in..
he pounced back main en tumhe kaha tha I got promoted, hum dinner bhi gayen the
she dipped her head lower in pain ' aapne promotion kaha tha, trip ke baren main nahi kaha tha
zahir se baat hain Geet, the client is based in NYC, tho TL ka rle bhi NYC main hoga na
her eyes filled up with feeling choked & remained unconscious for few secs before regaining her breath again, shaken up ..but an awe that sunk in was his care dam attitude. Like it didn't matter to him he was going away. She choked as she swallowed, coughing until her eyes watered. Maan pounded heavily on her back in concern. He ordered the watch man to get some water.
She drank some water.. he stood worried until she composed herself ' wat happened? Tumhari tabyat teehk nahi tho hum kal chalten hian
she smiled weakly ' I am fine
infact I am really excited abt this whole thing
. Rest of the week Geet helped him with all his shopping & packing. She didn't say a word. Her silence was killing him, like he expected a different reaction. That was odd!! she was being practical.. so was he.. then wat is he wanting suddenly. It was like he would have felt much lighter had she been mad at him.. but her taking to all cool ..not just cool.. helping him pack his bag all silently without any complain was killing him. He tried his best not to get distracted..well he didn't have much time either.

Precap
saying Good bye
-PREV PART 185 NEXT PART 187-
thanks for the lovely comments & likes
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago

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