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Anjali

@Gurlygirl

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#71

awesome OS. Loved it alot. Awe...so much of love between maaneet. M just speechless. Realy liked ur writting style. Thanks 4 pm. Keep on writting on maaneet:)

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Tamalika Basu

@sukklover

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#72

...😃

4 PMing me..dear...😳

ur updates...😊

keep the up dear..👏..

dear...

keep ing dear...😃

lov,❤️

Tama

P.S.: plz don't copy paste my comments...i only make it 4 my frndz...if anyone do it again as i saw many of my comments r copied i'll report it...u guys plz make comment urself...u can use my componets indevisual...but don't coppied it whole as my post...😡

P.S.S.: Plz guys also comment on my stuff...i tried to post comment in everyones...but my most of buddies didn't comment...if u not liked tell also...plz guys...😲😕

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guys...me sad...i PM ed almost 500 but comment only...17-18...😕

i said u guys ealier if u don't like plz tell me...but it really hurts a lot...me try to reply each of u...many serials i don't watch but i read ur ff's ...checking out ur updated stuff's...n try to make a sweet comment which u guys liked...but u never check my any stuff...i really busy wid my studies...but also don't want to hurt my frndz...i try to comment ecah of u woh Pmed me...but only few of u ans my Pms...if don't want me to bother u...plz tell me...i never pm u.4 my any update...

but i updated 4 whom woh waited...i know just few..but i updated for them surely...but that surely ime said..that me really hurt abut u guys...😭me uncontorled sob.sob..😭

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Beena_g

@Beena_g

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#73

lovely..beautiful OS..u have written so well,n loved the flow of story..thanks for PM.

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Abreshmina

@Abby-GC-Crazy

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#74

Sneha di...
what a touching and soulful OS...
it absolutely resided in my heart..
i love u for giving this OS... ❤️

I loved how u described Maan's POV...
how his heart was empty without his Geet...
how his arms felt lyk embracing the one he wanted n needed in his life...
How his face didnt light up because he didnt have his Geet beside him..
how his eyes just searched for his love whenever he looked outside...
yet he knew thay his Geet wasnt gonna come back...

I loved d flashback part of Maan's proposal... hw serene it was... lyk the nature wanted to bind them together...
their fingers entangling and expressing aloud that love is boundless...
beautiful moment... ❤️

n den d flashback... how Geet n Maan parted away..
omg ... it ws sooo painful...
hw Maan suddenly juz said dat he cnt be wd her...
gosh it ws sooo heart-wrenching... though I knew Maan definitely would have a proper reason but den still it really pinched my heart..
den hw Geet never questioned him.. jz askd him... if her love wsnt enough... omg... a drop left my eye as soon as I read dat moment...

It was very proper and beautiful how you took forward the story n showed previous events in a very systematic way through different POVs...

I loved to see how Geet remembered that night seeing the Rainy December xactly like the unusual december rain had blessed their beginning of love... similarly she knew its goin to bless them today as well...
it jus made the whole scene sooo beautiful .. pretty n remarkable... i simply loved it...

den u very beautifully took off d cloth from the reason behind Maan breaking Geet's heart...
how well he knew his Geet... that she would give up her dreams for him... but he loved her... he could have never let her give up her dream for him...
THE PERFECT TESTIMONY OF A SELFLESS RELATIONSHIP...!!!!
I absolutely loved the significance of the unsaid .. unbound ... non viewable love in their relationship... Maan didnt tell her the reason but she felt the reason... she understood his unspoken heart... he couldnt let her give up her dreams n so he shattered his n her heart n took the risk of engulfing emptiness... A PERFECT PORTRAYAL OF TRUE LOVE...!!!!!

I loved hw in the end you showed them goin for a walk in dat rainy december n putting and end to their three years long separation...
I loved the serenity n purity in that long kiss...
definitely .. TRUE LOVE DOESNT NEED WORDS...!!!!!!!!!!!

lastly... I absolutely the poem u hd written n the title of the OS... 😃

love you Sneha di... ❤️ ❤️
hugs n kisses