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part-5

He never felt his name would sound so complete with hers...Geet Maan Singh Khurana..
He was choked ...after long time he was feeling this way,a sudden contentment ,she was blowing in him ,a past in agony of which he always wanted to live,feel and die ...

she was pulling him out of it...unknowingly forcing him to come out of the very feel of his past and welcome his new life awaiting for him...but this was not helping him...all of sudden his heart was throbbing to give up...and embrace the beautiful change...he was hating this feel...how could he even think of it...he lives only by his rules...follows only what he had decided for himself and no damn person can change him,even if he decided a self destruction ...nobody can stop him...and here a mere gal
was urging him to something where he never wanted to go...he only wanted to see evil defeating and crushed beneath him...and love has no place in his life...he knew attachment only brings grief and he
will never follow that path again...



Sheela left after serving geet when designers were off. Here geet was still lost why they called her Geet Maan Singh Khurana when she is Geet Handa...she didnt had her meal and juice which maid had kept for her ,which she never wanted to have and was only gulping till now out of fear looking at maan .She was rolling on bed not having an ounce of sleep skipping her medicines ...her naive mind was not sure though, that this change in name means she belongs to Maan Singh Khurana...but something she does know was, the man giving her shelter was Maan Singh Khurana...and she is now his slave or say a servant whom god wants her to serve after his brother brij .somewhere she was relaxed as the feel of this place and people was atleast much better than the hell she was placed before.It was strange nobody hits her...or shouts at her,she was not even forced to do anything...something which was scaring her to hell...as if some tornado was waiting for her...as she knew this alien treatment will fade with time as she was not meant for all this after her father's death.

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Maan grabbed liquor from his flat fridge coming out of gym...and thumped it on a glass table in a hall ...since geet was staying in maan's room and he wanted to change his clothes...he was pacing furiously
gulping a neat drink thinking how to get his clothes as this needs to face her agin and he'll dare not see her and lose his senses.No matter how hard he was trying to control himself...but her eyes were haunting him and making him lose his control...he drank one more peg to bring himself out
of her effect...what an irony ...ppl drink and loose control ,here he was drinking to keep himself in control...

No liquor can affect his senses and make him do something which he don't want to...he only drank to feel good and relaxed and never to be gripped by its affect.he had the 5th one and thumped a glass on table
ever so loudly making his mind to get inside his room and took out his belongings.

Geet jumped after hearing the lound sound and sat straight on her bed taking the duvet close to her when maan entered her room with a gush of air opening her door and went straight towards his cupboard ignoring her badly...he could feel she was all awake but ignoring her he threw all his stuffs on a sofa kept beside cruely, frightening her even more...she got up all trembling and slowly moved towards him in order to help him
being his servant...she was standing behind him not knowing how to help him noticing his scary,hard physique moving dangerously.

He was still in her spell even after having 5 pegs ,he could feel her gaze burning his back as he knew she was standing behind him...He spun wildly only to see her moving back closing her eyes and holding
his long kurta which she was still wearing which was now pulled down from one of her shoulder due to her clutches exposing it without her realization...

he observed her closed eyes and trembling petite figure ...which was irritating him and then observed her exposed shoulder ...he looked away from her only to find her dinner nicely kept covered on a small table
along with juice and realization hit him hard , she didnt had her meal...and a layer of concern again covered his brains and heart capturing his original self.she opened her eyes slowly when she didnt felt
any harm on herself to see what is holding this man ,only to see he was moving towards her slowly and naturally out of fear she started moving backwards ...with his every spell bounded step towards her, she was taking a step away from him behind.when he looked into her eyes ,the liquor was showing its effect and he was not sure if he was scaring her...shaking and frightened she moved until she hit the wall behind
,but before her head could hit the hard wall ...maan kept both his palms securely ,one around her back and another around her head and she strucked her entire back folded in his arms captured between
His arms and chest ... she was breathing fast while maan lost his breaths looking at her angelic ,innocent face ..her eye lashes slightly looking down confused as to where she shud cease her stare...his rock hard chest,
His throat or his face...puzzled ,she again ended closing her eyes ...unaware of the fact ,this is the only thing which arouse the very destroyer in him...moving his hand from her back,he pulled her chin up in an urgency using his index and middle finger ...her face was up but her eyes were still closed,breathing hard now,she could sense a smell of liquor,Which was not new for her,she was scared of the smell... an indication that something cruel is abt to happen to her.

He cupped her face moving his thumbs softly rubbing her cheeks so that she open her eyes,she twitched her eyes not knowing what he was trying to do...he slowly rubbed his thumbs abov her her beautiful closed eyes and on her dark circles in concern...she let him do what he was doing clutching his shirt from sides but still not opening her eyes...being restless he demanded authoritatively but huskily...

Maan: aankhe kholo...(as if his life depends on one look of them)

She clutched his shirt even more hearing his instruction...she ever so slowly opened her eyes quivering only to meet the most passionate and concerned pair of eyes piercing her soul.she didnt wanted to look into his eyes but she was scared to not follow his instructions...he was still cupping her face drinking her beauty from her eyes...he lifted her in a swift movement from ground in his arms which scared her again and...

Geet: wwwooo..mmmaaai aaapki hhhelpp kkarney aayi tthii

Maan kept looking into her eyes and now her shaking lips which were uttering heavenly words..he was happy She atleast said something else instead of " mujhe mat maro"...
He slowly kept her on bed ,moving his kurta above her exposed shoulder..

Maan: pehle kuch kha lo ,phirr meri help karna...

He placed the food in front ...she quickly had avoiding him...he shifted his stuff from his room to another one till then, ofcourse catching a glance of her again and again.when she was done with her dinner she started
Cleaning her bed picking her used plates when maan reached to her in lightening speed..

Maan: rakho sab kuch yahi...

She blinked her lashes looking at him..to which he looked away from her thinking god to have some mercy on him...she has the powers to burn him...and he never wanted to burn in sweet pain of hers...coming out of his thoughts he passed her the juice which she again gulped looking into the glass ,He passed her the medicines she was prescribed ,he cleans her used plates and other stuff...and left the room ...

Medicines took a toll on her and her heavy eyelids finally closed in a deep slumber.

Morning 6 am

Door bell rang to which geet open her eyes...maan cudnt sleep entire night and had finished 3 bottles of liquor to get some and was not in a position to even listen
to the door bells...

Geet was scared to come out of the room but when door bell rang for the 4th time now she cudnt stop herself slowly moving out of the room towards the hall only to see maan lying on a sofa of hall sleeping,with liquor bottles and ashtray on a table and foul smell which again scared her...


Ting-Tong

She comes out of her panic state when door bell again hits her hard...she moved towards the door and opened it slightly...

Cc smiled a big one...ear to ear

Cc: poora darwaza kholiye na didi ...mai hu ,chota chetan...sir ne aapko bataya he hoga mere barey mey..

He again grinned


She was scared to open the door ,she looked back towards sleeping maan and again to cc

Geet: aapko kkya kkaam hai?

Cc kept the milk packets in front of her

Cc: ye doodh laya hu har roz ki tarah...

Geet took a deep breath realizing he is doodh wala bhaiya...she opened the door taking the packets from him
...cc wanted to come inside but she again closed the door on his face to which cc was shocked...

Cc : (blabbering as always in elevator): hadh ho gayi...mere muh pey darwaza band kar diya,Haan haan...ab meri kya zarurat,biwi aa gayi hai to wahi coffee banayegi na...Nayi shaadi ki mithai khilana to door ki baat ,mere barey mey bataya tak nahi didi ko...aise dekh rahi thi jaise mai koi chor hu...(he looked at his face in elevator mirrors in concern)..

Geet searched the kitchen in flat and kept the packets in a refrigerator ...she came out and realized the hall was too cold and smelly ...she moved the bottles and ashtray away from table,cleaning it and kept it according to her understanding in kitchen,throwing waste in dustbins...

next: Geet behaving like a servant and angry maan



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part 6 :
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/2904420/ibadat-mg-ff-part-7-pg-50


Edited by varshr - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
update was superb n vl b waiting for next...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow update after so long ! Loved it u know wat yesterday i was thinking about this ff n today u updated it ! :D plz continue soon !
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oww it feels really great reading ur story aftr this loong,
Me jst love ur writing, nd this one is truly awsm.⭐️
Me love the way unknwingly Geet started affecting Maan. She is too naive.
hmm so she is Geet Maan Singh Khurana now for others, haaye! yeh real mei kb hoga

Pls dear Continue it soon nd PLs PLS PLS update DOL tooo😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
so now she will try to do work making him more angry...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey buddy,
good to hav u back..
Congo 4 ur engagement..
Awesome update..
Loved it..
Cont soon..

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