MG FF: Femme Fatale (2) - Page 67

Waiting for tonight...I mean tomorrow ...for the update

Originally posted by: MeghPiyashi

loved the part...😊

Thanks Piyashi! 😃

Originally posted by: honeygrape

loved the part...last summer?? waiting for more...thank u for updating dear

Thanks Hun! 😃

Originally posted by: sona-rai

awesome update loved it a lot yar

eagerly waiting for next update(but i'll be able to read it after 15 days b'cause i'm going on vications with family)

Thanks Sona! Hope you enjoyed your vacation 😃

Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan

awesome superb update

loved the interactions of maaneet

Thanks hun! 😳

Originally posted by: --Neelam--

lovely one...
waiting to know the next...

Thanks Neelam! 😃

Originally posted by: impoojaverma

fab update di...

specially dat underwear convo b/w them was hilarious🤣🤣🤣

from where she founds such topics?????

geet really surprise me in evry update

Thanks Pooja! 😳
LOL glad you enjoyed the underwear convo! 😆

Originally posted by: tushti-kiran

awesome update...

so Maan and Geet both are feeling for each other...

Geet knows very well that he is her childhood friend but Maan don't know yet...

thanx for pm...

Thanks Kiran! 😃
Yeah...they were really close...
And no, Maan doesn't know yet...

Originally posted by: rubimad

SUPERB UPDATE.

LOVED IT.

Thanks Rubi! 😃

Originally posted by: -Manashi-

😳The underwear saga unfolds.😆

You know after I read the teaser, I was waiting for a mad, crazy update where Geet would be in her elements.😉

But only one thing remained with me and that is Geet's secret wish to be just a girl to be loved by her Ma(a)n.😳

I had a flash of that famous Notting Hill dialog,😳

"After all... I'm just a girl, standing in front of a boy, asking him to love her"...Anna Scott.😊

Beautiful 👏

Underwear saga!?😆 ROFL!
Awww...I totally forgot the Notting Hill line but went back and realise how similar it was...😳
But yes, the sentiment is the same.

Originally posted by: namita25

amazing update...loved reading it.

Thanks Namita! 😃

Originally posted by: Gcs-girl

Awesome

Thanks dear! 😃

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Hi dear..u r a brillinat writer ! Thanks 4 da fantabulous hilarious update! Loved it! Rocking convo between Maaneet n sizzling chemistry! Rajiv looking at them! Geet is amazing! Maan @ ease wid Geet! Wen will he knw tht she is Pari! Update soon

AWww...😳 Thanks hun! Glad you enjoyed!

Originally posted by: Ubiquitos

All one liners are awesome.nothing less nothing more. Just very apt. I have to read it twice thrice to get a complete hold of the story. I am already dreaming about d day Maan will come to know Pari is alive (I hope it happens). Eager to know why Maan thinks Pari is no more? Geet is surely an out of world and my favourite character!!!
Hats off to you for such a brilliance.

Thanks hun 😳
Really appreciate the lovely compliments!
Why does Maan think Pari is dead? Well wait and see😉

Originally posted by: Tyro

the mask also sometimes fails to hide the emotions inside...

the act that u put on..it is to make sure the other does not c u who u really r...

waiting to know how pari became geet...

continue soon..

thnx for PM,...

True...some emotions will burst out...
Remember she was always Geet...she became Pari but had to become something different all together.

Originally posted by: leverne

awesome update...

Thanks Rennie! 😃

Originally posted by: sweetie25

geet is hilarious poor maan none has asked size of his undies

Thanks hun! Glad you found her funny 😆

Originally posted by: Miss.Mars

Awesome update!
Dance was awesome!
So she did feel something with him being close! Love!!
OMG their teasing is terribly killing me now laughing🤣
Hopefully Rajiv's wish comes out true:)
OMMGGG undies????🤣
Continue soon!

Thanks dear! 😃
Glad you enjoyed!
LOL keep laughing...