MG FF: Femme Fatale (2)

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shreya

@.Lilith.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#511

Just read all the parts in one go...

Maannn...WHAT A STORY!!!! 👏

'Femme fatal' the name says it all... had kinda 'Basic instinct' feeling when I read the prologue 😳

Right from the start it looked promising n just went on to surprise/shock/amaze (and God knows what not)

Honestly all this time I kinda grew tired of the 'Maan being the teaser n Geet being the teased n cribbing to her Babaji' 😛...I'd rather LOVE a crazy, insane yet a perfect Geet with so many colours 😉

N Maan...well I pity this one 😆

For a change I can't guess what cud b the 'horrible past' that Geet went through...but the friendship both these guys share is beautifully portrayed 😃

Loving this story yaaarrr...

Continue super-duper sooonnn!!!!

Love

Shreya😳

Edited by shelly_08 - 13 years ago

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mysteriousmilli

@mysteriousmilli

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#512

awesome one...
looking forward to know the next...

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Shalini

@shalini01

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#513

i actually had hopes we would get the dance in this update 😆 but these two i tell you are so funny, Miss D-cup 🤣 i couldnt stop laughing, im sure my parents think im going do continue soon. love this story.

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286pearl

@286pearl

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#514

thx 4 d interesting update...

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#515

part 11
awesome dear...
the kids were so lovely and adorable...
Maan still has that pic with him...
Geet as his sect is really entertaining to everyone...
cont soon dear...

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nazsij

@nazsij

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#516

awesome one...daadima and geet's meeting was super...lol...

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priyanka

@doublecross

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#517

what an update!
loved the update!
she is special!
hell yes she is!
i'm loving this geet!
update soon
will be waiting for more!

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zaara2212

@zaara2212

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#518

oh this is so hilarious 😊😊
the photograph of geet n maan was nostalgic and ofcourse nice twist 😊

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Sanjana

@maan-ki-sanjana

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#519

Originally posted by: lovelycutietedy
awsome one dear ...

thanks for the update

Thanks dear! 😃

Originally posted by: t_areeb
why maan had to intervene between them .. i was expecting some nice answer from geet

...and she placed camera in maan's room?

LOL don't worry Geet will have better comments😉
And the camera is for protection.

Originally posted by: jyoti_l
i love her replies...they r amusing...entertaining n well...🤣

she is indeed special..in every way...

n maan in her company seem to be diff...

continue soon...

thnx for PM..

Thanks Jyo!😃
LOL glad you are enjoying!

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Sanjana

@maan-ki-sanjana

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#520

TEASER:

Maan rolled his eyes, "Look, as much as you want to deny it, I have an effect on women. They flock around me, want to be with me and would do anything for a moment with me. All women are the same, they want a piece of the Khurana name and fame" There was trace of cynicism in the comment that told Geet that sometimes he didn't appreciate the fake attention.

"Sir, I am a woman as well, so do you think I am like that as well?"

For some reason that comment touched Maan. "No, you are different." Realising that he sounded too serious he quickly backtracked, "After all you can't be really called a person. You are this freak of nature, an alien force."

"Are you sure your pant isn't ripped and they can see your jocks? That would explain the staring better than your so called effect" Geet giggled, pulling her boss's leg as usual. "Maybe you are wearing ugly underwear. By the way, what size are your undies? "

Maan managed to answer in a voice choked with laughter, "Why do you have this fixation with undergarments"

"No sir, secretaries are meant to give presents to their bosses. What is more useful then underwear? Everyone wears them!"

"Yeah, why don't you go around asking everyone their underwear size. Go ask my Dadima while you are at it!"