OS- VOH DEKHNA MEIN KITNI SEEDHI SADI LAGTI

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😃HEY BUDDIES THIS IS ISHA...
I AM HARD CORE FAN OF MAANEET
THIS IS MY SECIND OS...I LUVED THE SONG FROM LONDON PARIS NEWYORK...WHENEVER I HEAR THAT SONG MY MIND QUICKLY GOT DIVERTED TOWARDS OUR VERY OWN MAANEET
SO HERE IS A PIECE OF MY IMAGINATION
HOPE U LIKE IT
NOW LETS START...


MAAN AND GEET studied in same colleage and was best friend.. after colleage they both came to know they are in love with each other..after settling their carrier..they got married with wish and ashirwaad for thier parents...they married for two years..but still their is no change in their strong and lovely relation ship...same small dog and cat fight...same roothna and manana..and same spending time with each other...

one fine day..they got a letter from their colleage as their goning to be a renioun party
they decided to go...
on the day of the renioun party
geet was dressed with white sari with backless blouse..just a total angel and breath taking
on the other side maan was dressed in black suit.with black shirt and tight fit jeans..looking ravishing
they reached their colleage from where their luvstry started
they entered the party..
all the girls were geeting jealous of geet
while on otherside boys was getting jealous of maan
teachers was praising the made for each other couple...
as they entered the hall
they were greeted by their old friends and even enemies...
the head gave the introduction speech
as the time passes ...all were enjoying the party knowing about their friends and thier were-about

in maan and geet group
they were two couples
geet- maan
yash and meera
while other are still unmarried and single

romeo ,the most naught person in the group annouced that
every single husband have to sing for their beloved ladies
maan and yash was totally shocked..
they just wanted to kill romeo
while meera and geet was enjoying their husband faces

the chalenge started
each husband sang for their beloved
only left was yash and maan
it was yash turn
yash gave a wonderful peotry to meera
meera was blushing badly..while other were teasing her

now it was the turn of maan
geet pushed him forwards and give him an angry glare
as if saying - if u dont sing you will sleep on floor
maan just gluped his saliva...seeing his wife glare
and prayed babaji to save him
he moved towards piano
no one present there knows the fact that play a wonderful piano

he started singing
(credit goes to site who upload the lyric)
(
do play the song while reading)

maan-
Ho ho ho..
Voh dekhnay mein kaisi seedhi-saadi lagti
Hai bolti ki woh toh kuch nahin samajhati
Andar se kitni tezz hai
Kabhi ajeeb si, kabhi haseen lagti
Kabhi kisi kitaab ka hai scene lagti
Philosophy ka craze hai
Ho kehti hai yeh ik phase hai


while eyeing geet and giving her smile
all including geet was suprised
he continuied

maan-
Voh dekhnay mein kaisi seedhi-saadi lagti
Hai bolti ki woh toh kuch nahin samajhati
Andar se kitni tezz hai
Kabhi ajeeb si, kabhi haseen lagti
Kabhi kisi kitaab ka hai scene lagti
Philosophy ka craze hai
Ho kehti hai yeh ik phase hai
Ho kehti hai yeh ik phase hai


all was getting shock of there life
all were teasing geet while she was blushing hard
she was hearing each and very word
maan continuied

maan-
Shh.. pa pa pa.. para..

Yeh kahan main aa gaya
Bolo kaisa yeh tayaan hai
Dil kisi ka ho gaya, na isspe ikhteyaar hai
Karoon toh kya karoon, kaoon toh kya kahoon
Yeh gaana bhi toh usko paas laane ka bahana hai
Woh chup chup mere dil ke raaz kholti
Aadat ke ? mere khwaab bhi tataloti
Possessiveness ka case hai


geet was smiling and blushing hard
maan was enjoying her plight

maan continuied
Jaan-e-jaan jaan-e-mann
Toh har gaane mein aata hai
Parwana Romeo har ladka hi bann jaata hai
Likhun toh kya likhun?
Banu toh kya banu?
Yeh filmon mein ladka hi kyun ladki ko phansata hai
Main chahoon bhi toh main sabhi woh kar jaata hoon
Woh aaye saamne toh main sudhar jaata hoon
Ladki ik full-on chase hai
Haan kehti hai yeh ik phase hai


geet was lost in her husband's voice
and still blushing very hard
unable to stand maan's gaze
she turned herself
maan noticed that

maan-
Voh dekhnay mein kaisi seedhi-saadi lagti
Hai bolti ki woh toh kuch nahin samajhati
Andar se kitni tezz hai
Kabhi ajeeb si, kabhi haseen lagti
Kabhi kisi kitaab ka hai scene lagti
Philosophy ka craze hai
Ho kehti hai yeh ik phase hai
Ho kehti hai yeh ik phase hai


geet didnt notice
maan had came near her and sang the song
while cocooning her in his arms
both were staring each other

finally song ended
they broke their eyelock
and heard the round of plause from every one..
present around

geet and maan remain like this forever
and this night was the best night for geet and maan
the night which they cannot forget
...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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small and cute one..
loved it a lot..
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thanks...hope u like it!!😃😊
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😃

Originally posted by: Remya_Pillai

small and cute one..

loved it a lot..



thanks...hope u like this one!!😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome dr!!!!!!
loved t...
maan singing for geet!!!!
playin piano...
wow...
nice os dr...
i ve'nt read ur first os...
could yu pm me the link or post it in ma scrap plzzz
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: mayapari

awesome dr!!!!!!

loved t...
maan singing for geet!!!!
playin piano...
wow...
nice os dr...
i ve'nt read ur first os...
could yu pm me the link or post it in ma scrap plzzz

ya sure..just sending u pm!!!
hope u like it
and thanks 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
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THANKS😊
HOPE U LIKE IT
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THANQQQ...😉
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Originally posted by: anisha_maaneet

awesome os...

cute one...



THANK U...😊😃
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THANK YU...
LL BE WAITING

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