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Limerance

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Posted: 13 years ago

#221

Originally posted by: zaara2212
oh gosh Ragini is such a pain 😡

poor geet, had tears when i read this

Not only is she a pain but has caused everyone else so much pain too.

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Limerance

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Posted: 13 years ago

#222

Originally posted by: anupm04
Wow awesome update
Loved it
Continue soon

Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it.

It's going to be a busy week so I can't give you an exact day this time, but not too long I assure you.

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Limerance

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Posted: 13 years ago

#223

Originally posted by: luvraj4ever
oh that was so emotional..i actually had tears in my eyes while reading this..i can't believe that a mother can do this to her own child just because of the gender...but i guess this is the cruel reality which exists even today...
fab work dear..cont soon

The fact that mothers do things much worse than this for no reason at all is absolutely despicable. When I come across things like that I think of the line, just because you can have kids doesn't mean you should. What a better place would the world be in if people were responsible enough to not bring life into the world if they were to only conduct themselves in this manner? But like you said, it's a sad reality...

Thank you for your thoughts :)

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Limerance

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Posted: 13 years ago

#224

Originally posted by: crazydream
Its one of the most beautiful update in this ff.
Geet's story is Heart broking. Her pain is much more than Maan.
This pain was inflicted upon her since childhood.

I liked the way Maan supported her and letting her past out of.
It was necessary for Geet to let her pain out n breaking down in order to have a new start.

I love this Maan to core. The way he behaved practically n was a good listener to her.
Geet's desire to be loved will be fulfilled by Maan.

You have ended this part beautifully by "you are not lost cause, but you are only lost.." amazing line.

Luved it.

Geet's pain is very deep indeed. Especially after the loss of her father she has been left to endure it alone. With no mature love for such a long time it's no surprise Geet doesn't want to accept it. Furthermore when you are mentally and emotionally abused especially when that young it's hard to overcome the lies that have become the truth.

Maan realizes Geet needs help and wants to be the one to give it. He finds Geet's painful past and the anguish within her equally unbearable and wants nothing more than to take it all away. Now all is left so see if he will be successful.

I'm surprised yet I know I shouldn't be that this Maan is gathering such a fan club. Yes, who wouldn't want such a caring and concerned companion whose priorities are not himself but others?

Often when I start writing I come up with a few okay lines and few good ones. I'm glad you found this particular one to be towards your liking.

Thank you for your thoughts, I appreciate them very much so :)

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love2_soma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#225

awesome n mindblowing update...

its amazing...hw a 8yr old can cope with d things happened to her...hw can a mother can behave like dat with her own child...maa bhagwan ka doosra roop hota hai...magar yahan toh maa nehi...shaitan hai...kash yaise maa milnese pehle bhagwan uss bachhe ko maad de...kaise koi maa aisi ho sakti hai...chhhiii...

thank u sooo much fr such a lovely update...

really loved it...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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punam2712

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Posted: 13 years ago

#226

THE TITLE IS APT QUANTUM OF SOLACE

HOW MUCH SOLACE CAN BOTH THE BROKEN SOULS PROVIDE TO EACH OTHER

IT IS A TYPICAL STORY SEEN SO MUCH IN OUR COUNTRY - THE GIRL CHILD IS ALWAYS LOOKED DOWN UPON

BUT RAGINI TOOK THE CAKE

NOBODY LEAVES THEIR CHILD TO DIE

AND TO MAKE THE CHILD FEEL UNLOVED AND WANTED AND TO PUT ALL THE BLAME ON SUCH FRAIL SHOULDERS

I HOPE NOW THAT GEET HAS MAAN AND CAN RECOVER AND GET BACK HER LOST SELF BELIEF AND ESTEEM

FINALLY CAUGHT WITH ALL THE BACKLOG

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Limerance

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Posted: 13 years ago

#227

Originally posted by: honeygrape
awsome part😊

Thank you

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Posted: 13 years ago

#228

Originally posted by: tushti-kiran

oh that was so painful...but beautiful update...

painful because of Geet's past...Geet's father really can't save his daughter...he was a failure...he should have admitted Ragini into mental hospital...it was not hard to do that only evidence of her cruelity towards her daughter and her mindset is enough for it...then he don't have to send Geet to hostel and part from Rohan in the name of divorce...Ragini can be easily declared by LAW incapable of taking care of her children and hand over children's custody to Mohinder...then he can appoint governess for children...

but very happy that now Geet has got love from Maan and vice-versa...they are QUANTUM OF SOLACE for each other...

waiting for next part...

thanx for pm...

Geet's father indeed wasn't able to save anything for his family. His inaction towards Ragini's constant abuses did result in Geet's current situation but I guess in a way he felt responsible for his wife also and couldn't just leave her. It's hard to grasp sometimes but love is twisted like that. He had a tiny ray of hope that maybe just maybe he would be able to change Ragini but that definitely wasn't the case and resulted obviously in not only his demise but everything that he dreamt of for his family.

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Limerance

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Posted: 13 years ago

#229

Originally posted by: Soapoperasrfun
For once I curse my vocabulary, the lack of having a good one that is. I really dont know how to tell you how beautifully this story is shaping up. Loved it, absolutely loved it.

Oh now stop...I'm sure you have a wonderfully good vocabulary, but I'll give you a pass this time :)

Thank you for your thoughts though, I'm flattered you are liking the direction of this story.