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Posted: 13 years ago
#81
hi thanks 4 da note..update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ab jaldi se update de do na...Plzzz...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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story kab start kar rahi ho?????????????
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Story sounds interesting. Am all willing to be one of your besharam reader.😉
When will you be updating.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wen are you gonna update???
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PASSION

My heart is beating faster than it ever has, Babaji. I know, it's because he is coming back, but, isn't this stupid? Why do I always go crazy whenever he is around me? It's not normal, is it? I know, that even Daadima, and Annie make fun of the whole thing, but, I can't seem to control myself from'

"Geet?". The voice stopped her pen on the page of her favourite diary.

Geet quickly got up from bed, fixing her dupatta, and ran to the door.

"Jee, Daadima?", she said, obediently, with a smile.

"Bete, Maan has already started from the airport. Can you please check whether the dinner is ready?" Savitri Devi grinned, seeing the flustered and blushing Geet in front of her, who nodded her head, and moved away, towards the kitchen.

She looked at her, till she disappeared, and thought with a smile, Agar kabhi, I succeed in making her Maan's wife, yeh toh sharam se hi mar jayegi.

Geet reached the kitchen, holding her heart in her hand. She saw Maan and her mother working on the salad, and said amiably, "Maa, main kuch madat kardu?"

Pavitra, Maan's mother looked up, and said, "Hain, bete, could you check whether the table is laid or not?"

Geet nodded her head, and walked out to the dining table. Everything was in order; everyone was getting ready to receive their eldest son, who was coming back after 2 whole months, with the success of 3 projects, and almost 25 crores profit. The Handas and The Khuranas were friends for almost 25 years now, and they were going to celebrate this immense success, by having dinner together, with Maan in Handa House.

Geet wiped her sweaty palms on her dupatta for the umpteenth time. She gulped down the fifth glass of water, to calm down her ruffled nerves. Sab kya sochenge, Geet? Yeh sab karna baandh kar.

"Geet", Rano called, causing her to jump up in anxiety. Rano stared at her in surprise, and placing the dishful of chicken on the dining table, said, "Tujhe aaj ho kya gayaa hain, Geet? You are full of nerves today. Jaa, jake dekh, Pavitra ne salad kat diya ya nahin!"

"Jee, Maa", she murmured, and scuttled off, scolding herself mentally, yet again.

Geet entered their kitchen, and saw Annie perched on the counter, with Pavitra washing some dinner knives.

"Geet, are you excited?" Annie said, with a chuckle, and started laughing loudly, as Geet turned a deep and embarassing shade of red.

"Kya hua? Is your throat dry? Yeh lo, paani pee lo!" she grinned, as she handed another glass of water to Geet. "This is your sixth glass, haina?". Annie went off into bursts of laughter, almost falling off the counter, as Geet's hand froze on the glass.

Isska matlab, she saw me drinking that amount of water, and probably, heard me muttering to myself ,too' Geet felt her ears burn, as she realized.

"Kyun taangh kar rahi hain bechari ko, Annie? Jah, take this salad out", Pavitra said, with an impatient click, and handed the bowl of green to Annie, who winked widely at Geet before leaving.

Geet stood there, her eyes lowered in shyness, as Pavitra, looked away, trying to hide her smile. Everyone in the household, especially, the females could sense a kind of restlessness, and nervousness in Geet. Though she was fairly introvert, her features were extremely transparent, and the nervousness and anticipation lined in every movement, gesture and action of hers was fairly clear.

"Maa", Annie burst into the kitchen breathless. Looking at Geet, and fluttering her lashes very dramatically, she screamed, "Bhai shayed aa gaye! Mohinder uncle keh rahe the, ke the car just entered the lawn."

Geet unconsciously held the counter for support, as her heart threatened to burst out of her ribcage. Pavitra and Annie left excitedly, leaving a breathless Geet behind. She ran her hand through her hair, and smiled shyly, feeling her heartbeat pick up again. Dragging her feet, she walked out of the kitchen, and into the dining room, her eyes on the floor all the time.

The whole house had suddenly become alive with activities. Everyone was there. Rano, Pavitra, Annie, Savitri Devi, Mohinder, and ofcourse, Geet. Aditya, Maan's father was outside on the phone. Geet stood there, nervously, fiddling with the things on the dinner table, and listening to the indistinct conversations going on.

" Does it take so long to park the car?"

" Kahaan reh gayaa yeh ladka?"

" Bhai shayed'"

Annie never finished her sentence, because all of a sudden, the whole room was plunged into darkness.


I am really nervous. I hope you all will like this FF (or SS).😳

This part is like, really small, but I hope you got the setting of the story clear. The hero will come in the next part, 😉. Meanwhile, do give me your feedback about the first part of this new attempt of mine. Will be waiting desperately.

My FF Corner- Do refer to this for future update notifications.

Please hit the like button. The next part will be longer.😃

Love

Sarzah

Edited by sarzah - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#87

yippeee!!!!!!!!!!!
me first!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
so glad that you updated!!!

loved the update
seems like geet is already smitten by OUR MSK!
already under his trance!
waiting for maan's dhamakedaar entry now!
will be waiting for the next part
continue soon!
Edited by doublecross - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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geet is already excited.n nervous...😆

jab aayega tab kya hoga...☺️

continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey lam loving this ff.geet will surely die of shyness one day .plz try to update ur other ffs especially a sudden change of heart i really love it

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Posted: 13 years ago
#90
Superb update yar!
haye! geet is so shy

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