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Posted: 13 years ago
EK AJAB PREM KAHAANI


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PART-8



In the night maaneet avoided convo as it may lead to world war again...geet is all the while busy with priya..both became very close to each other..soon they started talking on different topics..all the while maan n rishab were left amused also they came to know this new side of priya...it seemed to them that priya n geet know each other from ages..sometimes maan also got lost in them espcly in geet who seemed very new n different to him from other girls...he alwayz saw the girls who drooled over him wheneever he is near to them n tried to converse with him but this girl is totally totally different from them.



Geet has to shift beside maan as priya felt sleepy n she laid on that berth n rishab on other...now maaneet are sitting beside each other even when they don't want..wheneevr they looked at each other it was only a glare...maan again started working on laptop to avoid geet n here geet is feeling very restless as she didn't talk since 15 minutes..she looked at her watch n then found that...she is feeling like she is alone in some desert where there is no human being around her...it became impossible for her to stay silent..."kya kar rahe ho aap"she spoke finally as her tongue is itching like anything...maan just ignored her n continued his work even when he heard...she peeped in to lappy screen to see what he is doing so that she could pass her time...she is taken back when maan passed a glare to her..



"dustdanav kaheeke"she mumbled.."babaji kese insaan se milwaya aapne muje..he is not dumb but behaves like that..aise kese bait sakthe hai chup chap.."..but maan could hear everything...he just smiled but didn't showed it to her...again there was a silence for few minutes...maan who is busy in doing something felt weight on his shoulder..he turned n found geet sleeping on his shoulder very peacefully with a smile adorning her face..her face seemed very innocent n cute..she frowned as a hair strand continously tickling her...maan chuckled looking at her innocent face...he was lost in her for a while but soon came back to his senses when he heard msg tone that too from naina...she asual sent some stupid news regarding some problem which irked him..."these people cant even handle simple things"maan mumbled...he lifted geet's head n made her sit properly... he crossed his arms n closed his eyes..after a second he felt weight on his shoulder again...


geet again placed her head on maan's shoulder n this time she hugged his arm tightly...maan felt irritated.."ye ladki soothe waqt bhi teek se nahi reh sakthi"


n he turned just to lost in her innocent face with a pout on her lips as maan held her hand to release her grip from his hand..it left him chuckled unknowingly..he was irritated with her behaviour just few minutes back n now he is enjoying her antics..but he is not ready to accept it...he closed his eyes to catch some sleep...


next morning,geet woke up n found herself lyng on maan's shoulder..she felt embarassed n straightened herself..in between the talks priya n geet came to know that both are gonna attend the same wedding..priya n geet are more happy than anyone as both can spend more time now..priya became so close to geet that she felt very sad only at the thought of leaving her..geet too felt an unknown attachnment with her n she felt the same.


Even in taxi maaneet started their cold war..rishab took the front seat..priya,geet n maan with geet in middle of mom n son...priya felt vomiting sensation due to stress in travelling so geet have to sacrifice her favourite window seat..geet intentionally occupying more n more place so that maan cant sit comfortably..she thought that it is nice chance to take revenge on maan...maan passed his regular angry young man wala glares but it had no effect on her instead she looked here n there but not maan..she giggled looking at him sitting uncomfortably li'l cuddled in himself..."geet teek se baito...mein jaantha hoon ki tum moti ho zyada place chahiye lekin muje bhi toh baitne do "he said finally making her gasp..



"hawww aapne muje moti kaha...aap bhi..hmm..wo..ha..buffalo,ox,elephant sab kuch ho"her mouth zipped immediately when she received a dangerous glare from maan.."aap bhi toh muje moti kaha..."she mumbled sitting properly pouting her lips.maan looked out avoiding her but chuckled at her innocent face when she mumbled thateven priya n ram enjoying their fights now as they both seemed cute to them espcly their son who always seems to be an angry young man..



Finally they reached the destination n soon geet n priya became busy with ladies in the house.geet don't have a big family so she is feeling like this is her family n enjoying the time spending with them.even everyone in the house loved her a lot..everyone from old people to small children became her fans,fans to her innocent cute talks..priya started loving her more n more.




Maan as always stayed away from everyone locking himself in his room..he didn't want to come here but priya is the reason for his arrival..everyone knows about maan so they didn't disturb him much..in the night all the children occupied geet's room..she told stories to them n patted them to sleep..after few minutes she found that her room is full of children n there is not even an inch for her to sleep"hey babaji ab mein kaha so jau..muje toh bahut neend arahi hai'ek kaam karthi hoon..saare kamre check karthi hoon shayad koi jagah miljaye sone ke liye" n she checked almost all the rooms just to find them filled'now there are only two rooms left for her to check'she opened the door of one of the room n found someone sleeping alone on bed'"thankgod yaha koi nahi hai..finally jagah milgayi"..the person who slept there covered fully with duvet'she shrugged it when she saw a saree pallu 'she thought some lady is sleeping'


But in actual our maan babu is sleeping on priya's saree which she left on bed'without knowing it geet laid beside him n slept peacefully as she was hell tired'next morning,geet opened her eyes slowly n smiled as she saw the most beautiful scene in front of her maan sleeping peacefully with a smile adorned his face...

geet:hayeee ye dustdanav sothe waqt kitna cute lag raha hai...she smiled with her droopy eyes...her eyes widened in shock when she realised that it is not her dream but reality...

she gasped n tried to get up from there but couldnt as he held her waist tight not letting her move...

"hawww ye kya hai babaji mein is dustdanav ke kamre mein so gayi.."she then saw that he is sleeping on saree..she cursed herself for thinking him as someone'"isse pehle ki ye utjayee aur chillane ka program shuru kare mein yaha se chali jaathi hoon..chal geet bhaag.."she again tried to free herself n in this attempt of her's maan woke up n he stood with a jerk when he saw her on his bed'

"tum!!!!...tum yaha kya kar rahi ho'aur tum yaha ayi kese aur kyun???"maan asked with irritating tone'geet gave a weak smile to him as she is caught red handed but still trying to save herself from his scoldings'"wo'mein..ha o saadi lene aayi thi'aur aap us par sogaye the aur mein use lene ki koshish kar rahi thi tab aap.."and she went on saying some stories which irked maan more'"shut up!!"he said irritatingly with droopy eyes.."tum kuch der chup nahi reh sakthi..jab dekho bak bak bak'.lo"n he threw saree on her face'she thanked god for not letting him know that she too slept in the same room'maan again laid on bed as he is very sleepy'geet pulled the saree n again half is under him she sat on her knees n trying to pull it..it was very hard for her as maan is heavy for her to handle'she is trying it very sincerely as if she is doing some task'maan felt irritated as it's disturbing his sleep..he stoop up suddenly n geet is standing on bed now to apply more force'


becoz of his sudden move both lost the balance in the process n landed on ground with geet on top of maan...



someone suddenly opened the door n geet's eyes widened in shock n fear thinking wat if they see him like that...

but maan in a quick moment rolled along with geet...now geet is under him n both are under the bed hiding from the people there...

"ye aap.."geet tried to spoke but maan closed her mouth'he moved close to her ear..his breath is falling on her nape sending shivers down her spine.."these people unnecessarily create rumours if they see us together so keep quiet..waise I don't care if they do'if u also don't care then u can go.."maan spoke huskily audible to her..she is not at all listening to him but lost in his spell'maan is waiting for the people to move from there..he just want to throw them out for using his room becoz he don't like anyone using his room..if he was there alone then he would have showed them stars in day time but now geet is with him so he don't want to create any scene now'he is busy in his thinking about them where as geet is totally lost in him..she started smiling like a mad at him n his proximity is making her mad'



After 5 minutes they left the place rather say escaped from hungry lion hungry to pounce on them..maan almost lost his patience n thought to come out'he just cant take it now as that people are making his room a mess which is intolerable to him..he just hates this..he is about to storm out to pounce on them but they escaped in a second'



He quickly came out not even thinking what effect he had on her he was only worried about them angry on them for making his perfect room a mess..geet stood on her foot but still she is in his spell n stood smiling at him lost in him.."sab tumhari wajah..tumhari wajah se these people made my room like a dustbin'"n maan went on in his mood..but it had no effect on geet as she is not at all listening to him'he shook his head when she didn't move when he asked her to move out from his room now'he held her arm n sent her out..poor geet still not able to realise that he is literally throwing her out of his room'he closed the door with a bang that's when geet came back from her la la land n reality hit her.."hawww muje bahar phenk diya..u'.ye dust danav hi rahega'"dustdanav she shouted loudly so that he can hear n left from there with grumpy face not forgetting to kick the door with her leg'

Precap:

Maaneet locked in store room..😉😳

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Edited by MonaLovesMaan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved the update
great going
hiw much dey fight lyk dog nd cat
laughing lyk hell
Ek hi bed par soo gye
lolzzz
waiting for next
but try to update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely one...love maaneet's tom n jerry fights...
Slept on the same bed...lol...
Interesting precap...
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Posted: 13 years ago
dat was awesum...!!!
geet can't sit silent even for 15min...!!!
i jst luv'd deir tom n jerry fight...!!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
I was waiting for d update...
Nice part... Oh hi maan smiling at geets antics...
Good dat bond btwn geet n priya is becoming stronger...future k liye accha hai... Wink...
Awee geet maan k saath uske he bed par so gayi...
Geet in.la la land with maan .. Hayeee...
Precap sounds intresting
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved the update
great going
waiting for next
but try to update soon plzzz

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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved the update awesome one
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome Update
Continue Soon
Thank You So Much For The PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow update yeee😆😆😆
lovely yaar
lv maaneet tom jerry cute fight
haww get maanu ke sath so gyi hawww chi chi babaji..😆🤣
awsmm yaar
lvd it..
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Posted: 13 years ago
love d update...
geet is sooo... cute in ur ff...
just became fan of her...

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