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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: namita25

DIVZZZ...are we going to get an update today..


ye...yee...yesss
divzi shivrs wid fear
kal la hu
thola sa tym pulease
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Posted: 13 years ago
diii...
kaha ho
skype b on nahi kar rahe
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: dazzlingdivz


ye...yee...yesss
divzi shivrs wid fear
kal la hu
thola sa tym pulease

hmmm...but babes you better set everything right...
remember Geet ko kuch nahi hona chahiye...
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Posted: 13 years ago


A Life For You

Part 10


Doctor closed her eyes to gather wits and answer

Mr Khurana we lost her


That was it'he moved his furious gaze towards her

Anger, frustration, anguish, devastation, destruction, rage

Everythin was just enough to burn anyone more than the fire of hell

Doctor gulped her saliva down and again tryn make her point clear

She is no more Mr. Khurana

We lost her

please


He closed his eyes to bury his rage, his anger, his furry knowing he have better and more important work to do then kill this doc with his own bare hands

he signals everyone to back off with the his hand
and his single gesture was enough...everyone moved back and turned their backs towards them

he opened his eyes when he felt his heart is back on pace...calm knowing he need to do it...and determined he will do it
he moved his gaze towards the lifeless body lying in front of him
he sat near his lifeless life and took her hands in his and gently pecked her hands

jaan you know I never knew I would love someone madly to an extent were insanity would look sane...

but you made me fall for you mishthy

I love you with all the love I have

I love you more than a single word love means

I love you with all my worst side

I love you with the slight goodness if I ever had

I love you


I love from where the word love starts till where it ends
I love you how much a deaf loves music

how much a blind loves colours

how much heart loves his beat

how much veins love the flowing blood

how much this body loves his soul

how much nature loves his creations

how much morning loves it's dew

how much sun loves his fire

how much moon loves his calmness

I love you how much god loves his children
I love you jaan
I really do


he bends down a little grazing his lips slightly on hers...MSK is nothing without his mishthy

jaan...your life fills my life come back...

He slowly took her lower lip in his and slowly starting kissing her with hot wet lips with all his power to make her feel alive

a simple seductive kiss...a simple kiss made to die for
a single kiss anyone would born again n again

he cupped her face in his palms and kissed her with all the love the longings the desire not just for a day but all the unknown buried emotion from all these years

he nibbled, sucked, licked, laced her lips...with all the love care affection he ever had

he brought her face near himself

tightly holding her as if he was holding his life in his hands which would drift away the time loosens his grip

still very carefully not willing to hurt the fragile structure in hand

jaan come back na please...I will die without you
please

he kissed her passionately holding tight her face close to his

tightly, passionately, lovingly, caringly
please jaan...he pleaded in her mouth

And then out of blue he smirked in her mouth...

what did you thought I would say all these to you...he bitterly smirked and harshly bites her lips making it bleed...
A sudden gasp escaped her mouth and a single jerk in the ventilator monitors
doc and the whole staff stiffened not able to digest was it true

he closed his eye
knowing he have to...have to do this

you thought you could ditch MSK this easy...he sucked her blood and kissed her again letting her taste her own blood
another gasp with a swift jerk in monitors
doc looked baffled not knowing what to do now

he left her lips licking the blood and made his way down her crook
you really thought so Mrs. Khurana...he bites roughly on her crook
she coughed with another swift movement in the monitor graphs
doctors just wanted this earth to swallow them
they knew they need to check her but no one could dare move away from their seats

huh...he smirks...you'll fail miserably Mrs. Geet Khurana...
he bites and sucks on her chest right above her heart feeling her dead heart again pumping blood in her
he closed his eyes feeling contented in his heart listening those beats
doctors felt restlessness but didn't knew what else to do
just waited for a single order of MSK they can't afford to go again The MSK

he moved to her jaw placing wet luscious kisses all over her jaw...Mr. Geet Singh Khurana you have to come back...come back to me...at any damn cost...you know it...
She gasps for air again and constant minute readings on monitors...A severe pain in her chest was visible but he wasn't ready to leave her
doctors were confused and even fear engulfed them what will be his reaction now

Coming back to her lips he again started sucking her lips, nibbling

again passionately kissing her making her stiff in response...her body started responding...her hands moved a little and she clutched the sheet tight...You know I get what I desire...what I need...I don't know how to crave and I wont...I'll get you...he said between his full mouth kisses...Mrs. Geet Maan Singh Khurana I'll burn the bloody heaven of yours in the scorching fire of my hell to get you back

you have to come back...geet moved her chest up with pain to get sufficient oxygen for lungs...
Doctors moved the faces towards them just to encounter a breath talking scene...

A man...

A man with no emotions, no morals, no words, no feelings

was fighting with her for her life
created a battle with fate...to defeat god, for his life
they couldn't believe was he the same man...the same MSK...

Yess he was...MSK...who can do anything he desires for, anything to get his life, anything to burn his needs, anything to fulfill her requirements
anything...just simply anything to get his life, his geet back to his life

he left her lips and buried her face into the crook of her neck and kissed her ears and them bite her making her shiver...you know what...he smirks...Mrs. Geet Maan Singh Khurana if you won't come back to me...this time this Maan would die forever and this MSK won't be good for anyone...I won't leave anyone nor even you GSK...

He looked into her closed eyes and again moved his gaze towards her lips
you'll have to pay a life for making MSK cry mishthy...you have to live a life to bear with this harsh, heartless, feeling less, merciless, beast...you have to come back to live upto my needs...you have to
he kissed hard on her lips
you know I am not born to loose, and You can't see me loosing...can you

and she gapped with full power with scorching pain in her entire body, feeling needles in her chest, burring in her heart
maaannn...
She screamed gasped filling her lungs with oxygen, heart with blood

her scream gave him life back, souls back to his body
he immediately stood up and still holding her hands tight not willing to let her go

doctors checked and made injected her with morphemes to reduce her pain
she again drifted of to sleep but this time with a pumping heat and flowing blood

Doctors treated her for long 2 hours all the while maan watching her with a tear rolling down his eyes holding her hand'

She was now shifted to her room

But was sleeping'

He opened the ICU doors and enters slowly

Looking at an angelic little fairy'his sleeping beauty

He gapped at her

he drops her head back to the door

Clicking it shut

And smile

A smile of victory
A smile of life
A smile of joy
A smile of defeat
A smile of hurt
A smile of pain


he sat on the floor just beside the door and tears made their way down his eyes

holding his knees close to his chest

smiling in his tears

yess defeat of his fate acknowledging she is not used to his love
hurt of knowing and bearing her hurt when your love is not reciprocated the same way
pain of her longing knowing she couldn't recognize his love
all she was able to feel was his harshness, his coldness, his mean words, his cruelness
all she knew was MSK'she long lost her Maan in this MSK
he was the one who made her walk out of him

he smiled at his destiny...what's in store for him
when he recognized his love he lost her...she was far...too far from him that he could see her but was far away from him
tooo far from his reach


Precap: Now guess Geet's reaction

I would love to read what you all think


Prev:Part 9 Next:Part 11


so now give me my comments and like

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Edited by dazzlingdivz - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
😳😆😆Ahhh...Divzzz...shabash bachche...you saved your life by saving my kudi's life...😆
love you for that...
n hats off to youfor bringing out Maan's emotional turmoil...he cried his heart out for geet
moi so happy...he got his Geet back...😃
but moi don't wanna geet to forgive him easily...


or else.........hope u understand...😆😆
after all he tortured her to core..never gave her the love and affection.
n now it's his turn to face the music...😡
but at the end I wanna see them together...😳

waiting for the next part...😳
update soon...





love
Namita😳


Edited by namita25 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: namita25

hmmm...but babes you better set everything right...
remember Geet ko kuch nahi hona chahiye...


😃😃 now mela comnt 😃😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sweat_poison

diii...

kaha ho
skype b on nahi kar rahe


CUM SWTU
M DERE MOW😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: dazzlingdivz


<font size="4" face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" color="#6600ff">that is true soo true i shall say</font>
<font size="4" face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" color="#6600ff">it dos brk the entire existance of a human</font>
<font size="4" face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" color="#6600ff">n sumtyms kills sumone inside</font>
<font size="4" face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" color="#6600ff">u will have to wait a lil just lil lil more</font>



If you plan to reconcile maan and geet...toh maan ko pehle BAHUT suffer karao...
Update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
great part he bring her back awesome thx for update i am silent reader sorry for late reply
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Posted: 13 years ago
grt update
i dont want geet to forgive maan so easily
abt geet's reaction cant say anything bcoz i m not good in imagining things
bt have faith in u u wil plan something great
thanks for awesome update

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