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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: SONU_29

Awesome ss.
Add me in ur pm list.


thnxuuu n sureyyy
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: jssood

you said you love all our jutiyaan and galiya

but dear i want to give you
and this


aowww
i luv it
luv it
luv it

mmuuahhh
huggsss n kisses to u as well swtht 🤗🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ritusoni2233

m crying imagine maan cnditin


awesome part

maan cant shw his emotions bt y yar??????


maan cant show his emotions bcoz he nvr got to know his own emotions
he failed to realis his own love
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: swetha10

Nice update..

awww poor maan.. felt really bad for geet..
past is painful..
waiting for more..
continue soon


thnxx n chorry...😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Nasioush

Ummm...me sadddy sadddy...jaldi geet ko theek krde...do some miracle...


sheeshhh let me do my magic den😉
abra ka dabra geet theek ho jaaaye

howww kuch ni hua
chal ane aap ho jaayega 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: pearlnarang

please recover geet quickly and let maan shower his love on her

Nice update and ff
update soon



aowww dis is the frst cmnt were
sumone wants maan to showr his love
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: anshra

loved itawesomefab


*supr blush*
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tintinu

awesome awesome ss dear,i just read it in one go ,poor geet n maan he realise the imp of geet in his life very late hope for a happy ending

ur writting is beautiful dear like a flim ,crystal clear to undearstand,the way u mix the past n present is awesome dear


O M G
u know i was flying on cloud 9 reading dis cmnt
hayee rabba
it is one of the bst cmnt i evr got on this fourom
thnxx a lott missy
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: smallville

Awesome !!
Loved it !!!
Update soon !!!


thnxu 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

A Life For You
Part 6

gather yourself not for yourself but for them..doc patted his back to sooth him

but his inner war was nowhere to be stop before he gets to feel his life'his geet

but for the sake of her'there love'he wiped her tears and got up

Where's are baby...he asked looking down the floor tiles

can I see her'he looked towards doc with pleading eyes

yess but with certain precautions'she smiles a little and calls the nurse and told her to help him

he enters the children ICU...


He enters ICU quietly'it was dark but just a little illuminated with red lights'the incubator was kept in the middle of a colorful room'he slowly enters the room and see the little angel sleeping peacefully inside surrounded by pink puffy pillows and her naked fragile body to get heated with the rays of light He stared at her adoringly'He stood there in amazement'He recalled the moment when he first saw her mumma'she is the exact carbon copy of her

A little geet was lying there with all tubes, wires, oxygen mask surrounding her in an...a tear threatens to fall...He touched the soft cotton ball with his hands...he carefully caresses her cheeks it just reminds her of her mumma...she was a little geet he thought a smile crept his face...her eyes, lips, those cute small dimples her milky soft skin'same color, same nose, same features...just like her mumma but nose...that was definitely mine he thought...She frowned just like him in her sleep and he chuckles a little looking at her little baby frown when he took her hand'

Suddenly a she jerked a little and maan came out from the chain of thoughts, and saw her worriedly, looked at the nurse who was smiling and moved his gaze back to the little cotton ball but she was still fast asleep,

Nurse moved out giving some privacy to father daughter to rejoice there first meet

he stood there for a moment, he felt like the world stopped, he was stunned by her daughter's beauty. He bent a little

Maanvika...Maan ki Maanvika...Maan or Geet ki...Maaneet Ki Maanvika...he called her ever so softly...with proud filled in his eyes looking at his daughter...with all the love affection he had remembering there cute nock jhock while deciding her name

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maan agar beta to geetansh or agar beti maansi

no...beti hi hogi and uska name manvika'he bent down kissing her cute little bump...

Nooo...Maansi...and that's finale...she made a baby angry face pouting

Kaha naa nahi'mera baby mera rule'she looked away

Mera contribution bhi hai'he teased her'so mera bhi equally utna hi baby hai'

he held her tightly from waist and said huskily leaning in her ears...beta hua to tumhaara choice beti hui to meri...n dekh lena beti hi hogi

Maan ki Maanvika

Geet ka Geetansh nahi uske lie thoda or wait

He winked at her with a smile'and kissed hard on her lips

And she just blushed

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That was the first and the last time he actually did smiled full heartedly with her

Showed some emotions

Now he knew why she was so happy that day

Why she couldn't stop smilling

tears threaten to fall and eventually made their way down his beautiful dark brown eyes'soaking his cheeks again'the man who never melted seeing someone's tears, was himself crying for his love, his life today'for whom there precious pearls were always mere salty waters was now feeling the pain while shedding them'Divzi wonders it's ironical na'isn't it'life teaches us certain crucial aspects of life in ways we can't even imagine

He felt his eyes getting moist, he did not stop it, and he smiled'you know baby only you and your mom posses the power to make me shed these'he traced his tears'look what you have both have done'he frowns a little'that's not right'but I know I deserve the worst'he said in little voice

He tried to touch her, but did not'.She was so fragile and he feared that he would harm her just like her mumma

He came next to the incubator silently, not making any noise just shedding tears looking at the other angel of this earth and again falling for the most beautiful girl again'

He was crying for the first time'doing something he never wished or even thought he will'shedding those salty waters was more than difficult than doing any damn thing in the world for him

Guilt, remorse, anguish, anger, ruefulness, self hatred, grief repentance'he couldn't take it anymore

His self conscious was stabbing him so hard that it felt chocked in his heart'as it might burst out any moment

He sat next to the incubator facing his back to the little angel'not able to meet her little innocence reminding him how he brutally snatched her mumma's innocence day by day with his cold harshness

It's all because of me'sab meri galati'I am sorry baby'he sobbed

I did this'meri wajha se sab kuch hua'I am at fault'I am your culprit'I did it

Maine galati nahi harr kadam pe gunah kie hai humesha uss pari ko dard dia hai

Usne to kabhi ek cut ka pain nahi saha tha and maine'huh'maine use dill ka dard d dia

Sab meri galati sab'I am at fault not her

You know na angel'sab meri galati thi'fir kyu

Why god is so unfair with her'I never believed in him but she always did

Then why she is suffering all this

Usko kyu'his sobs turned into wild hiccups

He remembers his each mistake he committed'


Precap: I really dont know...😕...me a little confused

stuck between two things so...


Prev:Part 5 Next Part 7

You guyz know what

mereko aaj se pehle itni galian kabhi nahi padi😕

imagine yaha hi nahi FB pe b threats mile

mummieee me scared now🤢


hehehe LoLz I an really luving the reaction you all giving me

wat eva it may be

bt m luving it trully


thnxx fr all the support means a lott

really

AND WHO ALL WANT PMz PLEASE SEND ME BUDDY REQUEST

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Edited by dazzlingdivz - 13 years ago

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