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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: 18mypride

loved it loved it loved it...

poor souls... 🤣
oh little gudiya dreaming about prince charming .. sam about dev
ha dev maan scene was really nice..
hmm precap reallly interesting... i think he remembers...


hehehehehe dat was bst clasifctin fr the wobbly shobbly game 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Nasioush

Hehehe...maza agayaaa...jaldi nxt up de...


maja aaya
meleko b aaya 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24

Very beautiful update dear...


Loved Geet and Sam convo... So sweet...
But Dev ... He is the best....So sweet and smart ..Too good...
Thanks ...




aowww i luvv the flrs 😳
n dev ROFLzzz i to luv him as my fav punching bag 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ritusoni2233

sam loves dev i guess it before


bt den loves nt hmmm ye guess ni kiya tha...

dev ki to band bjte njte rh gyi...

hop maan ko sb yaad ho


hehehe atlst kuch suprisng to tha 😛
n wo mela fav punching bag hai isslie 😉
hope for the bst😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
thnxuuu evryone for you love and spprt
really overwhelmed with it

divzi bow down in gratitude for everyone
hate off to evry single person here


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Posted: 13 years ago


Heart Of Heart

Part 10


maan shook his head and murmured idiot
and dev made a grumpy face to it

now get ready soon'I do think we have a school today...there's no holiday and we need to go back home and get ready also
make it fast now


maan was about to leave when he stopped and turned to look at dev

hesitated a little asking

wo...

Hmmm...
who was that girl with me last night...

Who girls bro'dev asked all confused with who his bhai was talkin about

Hmmm

The same who told you about me'he asked all flushed looking here and there

Wo'

haan wo to shehzadian thi'dev again sat relaxed crossing his legs on couch arms folded behind his head

Unhone hi aapko dhunda'aap tp mere sath hide and seek khelne main busy the'

Shehzadian'??...!! maan looked all confused now

Was she anyone of them'??..!!...

No'never'he mentally kicked himself for thinking that

That monsters'nopes no ways'never ever simply no..

Sh was an angelic princess from heavens but these two are deadly devils from hell

Goshhh I pray main unhe kabhi naa dekhu

Wo sunn ne main itne dangerous lagte hai dekhne main to

God kill me before that day'

But if she was really there who was it

Will I ever be able to meet her again now..!!

God that's not done na'ur doing it all wrong

I wanna meet her'but see here I don't even remember her face'

His sweet chain of thoughts and self scoldings was broked wid a slight tap on his shoulder

He looked above just too se a silly dev grinning foolishly

What'he asked all frustrated

So can I think my bro was with a girl last night'dev smiled idiotically towards maan

What'!!!... maan made a face thinking he is caught off guard

So did you had some funn tym I guess'dev winked

Ohhh'the time I was hell tring to find you out you were busy enjoying with a girl

O M G'maan thinking how to hide his flushed blushing face now

Hayeee divzi drooling over this blushing maan

Dev'that's it'maan faked anger to hide his blush

in the car now'saying with a glare he moves out of the car

what'bro'.wait'lemme dress properly atleast

njoyment aap karo badnami main lu

dev ran behind maan pulling his shirts down

not done what will dadi think looking at her sweet sweet Grand Son in this condition

he shrieked as if he saw a live nightmare

waittt''''.he yelled on top of his voice

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Dressing up in his norml white shirts and black tight fit trousers stting his hairs back

Something stuck his mind

Ooo man'wo to main bhul hi gaya

His eyes almost pooped out in fear

god dadi ne dekh lia to'

and he ran with his full power directly towards laundry

and took his pants out from the basket and quickly fished for something

after a while he sighed in relief

so princess I was about to get caught by your sweet silly antics now

he smiled to himself and made his way back towards his room

the soon he enters back his room he sat on the corner of the bed

and looked at the platinum finger band in his hand

atleast I have a remembrance of are sweet time

he smiled weakly to it and kissed it sweetly

will I ever be able to meet you again

wishhh you to thinking the same

and hit his head with his head

Maan you lost it kyaa kar raha hai

Get ready'you'll get late and MSK never gets late

And again got back to his dresser

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Sammm'''.geet made an angry face to sam who was busy nibbling her pranthas

While sam just made a baby face to rano maa and maa just rolled her eyes looking at her two dolls

It was same routine in HM

Geet tune to breakfast karna nahi hota isko to karne de aaram se'rano patted Sam's head lovingly

Geet just showed her tongue to her

Isko school nahi jaana hota atleast mereko to late matt kar

Saying she made face and looked away

Waise mereko bhi btaa itni subha konsi class hoti hai teri'maa teased her

While sam smirked looking geet's petty face

Are you both done or shall I go'geet stomped her foot and left the room

Oyeee geet rukk''sam screamed holding prantha in one hand and kissed maa's cheek bidding her bie

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Geet paddled her cycle still angry

Geet sorry na'breakfast to karne diya kar'sam made a baby complaining face

I was geeting late'you know it'geet made a baby angry face

Yaa yaa'for your drooling session'sam teased making faces

Geet gave her a deadly glare

And both burst out laughing all the while paddling the way to school

Precap: Geet v/s MSK and Maan v/s Monsters 😉


Prev:Part 9 Next:Part 11

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Edited by dazzlingdivz - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
maan has a reminder of that time...nice...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
cool cool cool...muaaah loved it..
patinum finger band... hmm... maan is dreaming of princess...
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Posted: 13 years ago
he remembers a girl was with him..but he dont remember the face...
gr8..just gr8..!
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Posted: 13 years ago
interesting

maan thinking abt her cool!!!

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