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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ritusoni2233

dev ko yo koi na koi hila hi deta h lolll


chahe sam ho ya geet ...

wah wah kya dlg mare geet ne i laugh heartly...

waiting 4 next


hehehehe main apni saari kasar nikal rahi hu LoLzzz
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: 18mypride

Cho cute... Loved geet drilling in maan...uff

dev u better call nahien toh gudiya se bachna paavoge...


hehehehe he bttr do it 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: swetha10

Nice update..

luved the way geet asked dev to call her..
continue soon


hehehe bechara dev swtht
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Maaneet_Vidu

hehe...lovely update.
Poor Dev...bechara.


LoLz bechara 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Nasioush

Hahaha...superb up baby..waiting for nxt...jaldi dena...


heheh luv u swty 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kamiya


thanks for the pm dear
continue soon


thnxuuu 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: zohafarheen

wow amazing dear
so i hope maan remember her face yaar


hope so 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Heart Of Heart
Part 9

Take care'

apna nahi innka'she looked from the corner of her eyes while dev just smiled at her antics

Ohkiz...good night shehzadio'

he shook his head at her cute silly antics And asked driver again to drive back the car to penthouse

And geet just stares at his trailing away car

Shall we go now'sam asked highly pissed off and geet just dreaded the volcano which was suppose to burst the next moment she enters her room

**************************************

Sitting on the corner of the bed'looking down hands clutched together tight

Eyes shut

Praying god to keep her alive knowing the thunder which was about to knock her down

She slightly looked up to witness an angry, anguish, frustrated, fuming sam pacing restlessly in the room

Demanding the same answer

She looked up with one eye to see whether her gussa was calm or not

But her slight move was enough to catch sam's attention and she turned her direction

Don't'don't you dare move your face now

I saw you'

Geet just made a puppy innocent face looking down and murmured,'sorry...

Sorry for what'for loosing yourself'for dancing like that in the middle of the party

For hugging a someone'for kissing a stranger'

He is not a stranger'geet corrected

Yaa right'he is your prince charming how can I forget that

I am an idiot here who is blabbering like a jerk

Who is trying to knock some sense into you willing to know what and why did you kissed him

she said with that scary angry face with hands on her hips not willing to give up this easy

Ohkiz forget everything just one explanation

What do you have to say for that kiss

It wasn't a kiss'it was a simple peck'I dint knew how to kiss back or reply'she smile like an idiot looking down blushing remembering that

Oohhh great'she gave up her hands up in the air'.

What the hell I am trying here'when someone don't want to word anything

Don't wanna see the reality' Don't wanna know the right and wrong

God demit geet he don't even know you'he don't know who the hell are you

Is there any girl called geet who is such a big freak, maniac, insane behind him

For him this princess does not exist at all'he don't knew the presence of an angel beside him in every phase in every turn of life

she shook held her arms in her hands and making her look into her eyes

Geet for god damn sake just for once

For once face it'

If he don't know me that doesn't mean I forget him'she answered looking straight in her eyes

Geet'she gasped in helplessness

Gudia I know you like him

Demit sam how many time I told you'I clear it'I LOVE HIM'I SO DAMN LOVE HIM SAM

Madly irrevocably, irreversibly, unconditionally in love with him

I can't let go this feeling soo easily it's simply not me

I can't'it's not in my hands sam

I love him'I love him

The poor little soul broke down with tears on the floor

I love him

But sam she was in rage'angry watching her gudia like this

She can't see her like this'never

Then why the hell you don't tell him you love him..

Why you don't say him how much you love him

You never even uttered a single damn word in front of him

Sam roared like a hurt lioness

You know I can't'I can't word it

Wo mujhe bhi baaki sab droolers k jaise samjhega

He'll hate me as well'and you know I cant take it..

Main uski eyes main nafrat nahi dekh sakti sam

Kabhi nahi'geet cried holding her heart

I cant

And sam lost it now'completely lost it

You don't love him demit why don't you get it'you don't

It's just a teenage infatuation'the crush you have on him

A strong crush'

You are too young to fall in love with someone

It's just the age you thinking your crush to be your love

You know you can't love him now

And you don't

Not just him it's too early too fall in love with someone

No one can fall in love this early baby'try understand na

Pease'understand princess

Please'she screamed on top of her voice looking away not able to see her like this

Sam you too love dev'don't you'in a single question geet made her words clear

Left sam speechless

even you're of my age

And you love him more than I love maan

You love him sam'we both know it'.

She looked above to see sam in tears

Did you try to say it to him'did you word it

He knows you'he respect you'care for you

You are his best friend even more closer than me

But he love di'sam gasped'

Uska sweet little secret'sam smile in tears

While geet just closed her eyes cursing herself for blabbering such things

Sorry na ab meri jaan le legi kya

Uff kitna gussa karti hai'see baby got sacred

She pouted her lips trying to divert sam's mind away from this and sam just couldn't help but smile at her little antics

Both hugged each other in helplessness knowing they both will not word there feeling whatever happens

Crying, sobbing at own betraying hearts'

While on soothing each other's pain to make the other feel lighter knowing the pain the heart give when your love is not reciprocated the same way

They both were bearing the same pain but couldn't see the other in this pain how ironical isn't it

Sam pulled out a little with the buzz of her cell

she picked it up widout looking at the id knowing who is it


as soon as she hanged up the call

she walked near her princess and wiped geet's tears'cha lab melodrama bahut ho gaya

Band kar ab yeh ganga jamuna bahana'

Nahi to tere uss maan ka band bjaa dungi morning main

Geet pouted folding her arms round her chest

And sam just rolled out laughing finally saying

Chall bed wait kar ra hai sone chale

Morning main school bhi hai

Tu hi late hogi apne maan ko dekhne ke lie mera kuch nahi

And both made their way back to bed

Snuggling closer with geet putting her head on sam arms hugging her like a huggy bear

And whispered softly placing a kiss on her cheek

Sorry'cutely making sorry faces

Sam kissed her forehead and replied...sorry...

And both drifted off sleep again after a long tiring day

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A beautiful morning got disturbed by a loud thunder

Dev'''..

Maan roared on top of his voice as soon as he woke up in penthouse bedroom

Mummieee'''dev jerked open his sleepy eyes sitting straight on the bed looking up knowing he is soo dead now

He sweet little praying moment ended with a loud banging on the door just to witness an angry maan standing at the door with furious eyes

Bro...bro...sachi...main kuch ni kia...dev got up the bed and ran behind the bed back hiding himself
mereko sachi nahi pata yeh sab kaise hua


but maan was out of any explanation or words
so yeh kaise hua...maine change kia
ohhh ho sakta hai koi ghost ne kia ho

may be...dev made a thoughtful face

or mat be you did by means
and charged to catch him and kill him on the spot

but baby dev was quite swift to drive of saving his dear life from his angry bro and hide bihind the couch

bro why don't you trust me
I hate you
you never trust me

dev threw fake anger

yaa right you will hate me coz now you won't be alive to love me

and he ran behind couth to catch him but again dev moved away from his angry bro

bro kasam se

gudia and sam ke bhi change ho gaye the


hell with your gudia and sam...
Ohhh so your idiot friends might have given you this idea... he ran again to chase dev but again got ditched by dev's sudden move

bro don't you dare now...you know they don't know you
they hate MSK
n they don't know you are MSK so why would they fuel me for this

dev was now frustrated with the sudden upcoming names of his shehzadian

so that is all your plan isn't it..maan was this time fast enough to catch him and charge him with his hands
holding his neck tight in his fist


bro don't you know me...and more over once I'll do it with you

maan glared angrily at him but he was in no mood to take the blame knowing it's not his mistake wriggling in his grip to get it off

don't show me this face
do you think I would have done this with annie as well

now that blew man some sense he loosened a bit his grip

and dev coughed inhaling sufficient air

bro you really choked me...

Maan gave another look to him and jerked him away making him land on the couch with a loud thud

bro sachi...it wasn't me...
Wo the time you guys were busy teasing me...dev feigned anger crossing his arms on his chest pouting
knowing now the ball is in his court and bro will not fuss to kill him now

waiter swiped off the drinks by mistake
that wasn't my fault it was you two...saying so dev looked away

maan closed his eyes calming down his anger knowing dev wasn't at fault

annie...

Mansion...dev sits down comfortably crossing his legs on couch knowing no more danger to come now...i send her with driver back...i dint wanted her to witness you like that
what would she have thought about you

dadi...

She knows we both having night out at some friends home...some of your...dev pressurized on your letting him know it's all because of him
while maan just gave him a deadly glare

your friend was having a party so we both over there for some time we will be back by tomorrow morning

penthouse'

or main aapko kaha le jaata mansion...dadi ko reply aapne dena tha...
aap to Kumbhakaran ke jaise to soo rahe tha...

Maan rolled his eyes at his silly brother

keys'

dev smiles foolishly...unka kya you know na I am too smart

maan knotted his eyebrows

yaar...kya hai aapka bhi na
watchman k pass spare keys hote hai na
bass firr unhi se lia or kya

maan was still waiting for him to complete

yaaa they don't know anything...unhe bola aapka tabiyat theek nahi so we are here

maan's face got a little relaxed
and dev smiled at his victory

see I am too smart you know

maan shook his head and murmured idiot...
and dev made a grumpy face to it

now get ready soon'I do think we have a school today...there's no holiday and we need to go back home and get ready also
make it fast now


maan was about to leave when he stopped and turned to look at dev

hesitated a little asking

wo...

Hmmm...
who was that girl with me last night'


Precap: what do you think Maan remembers her and the kiss 😳😉


Prev:Part 8 Next:Part 10


so here is a longgg up😳

so 😳😳 dis tym i demand my big big cmnts yaar😳


and yap another news

I wont update tomorrow now

my moti (bhua) 😆coming India after 3 whole months I really have a lott of talks with her pending😉

so need to spend some time with my golgappa as well now 😃

so me on a day leave

mera chutti 🤣

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Edited by dazzlingdivz - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

it's a FF it wont be shrt one it's quite lengthy😕
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks for the pm
awesome n wonderful update

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