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Posted: 13 years ago

ONE SONG DEDICATED TO YOU MERI JAAN 😉

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yhIAn1ISL_8[/YOUTUBE]
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks for the lovely song jaan
loved it
wha kitna suit karta hai na hamein😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Mariam94

thanks for the lovely song jaan
loved it
wha kitna suit karta hai na hamein😆

Absolutely suits us 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

me waiting for the update ...jaldi jaldi ...

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Dilsay

Absolutely suits us 😆



main tujhe dhond ti hoon aur tu mujhe
uff we never catch eachother like the found each other in the song
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Dilsay

me waiting for the update ...jaldi jaldi ...



bas thodi deer aur jaan
plzzz
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Posted: 13 years ago

Thank you sooo much guys for liking the update and commenting, I am really very sorry to keep u all wait this long for this update, but was going thru very bad time and was not at all in the mind of typing this update, hope u understand me. Anyway here is the next update, hope u all like it like the previous one, but don't know ho will its written as i didn't really paid attention on wording it, this time, so sorry about it.

Love u all

-Unforgettable Memories Part 22-
"Oh come on Geet ji aaj jum aap ki ek nahi sunege, aap hamari saath chal rahi hai tu bas chal rahi hai" NT said as she pushed Geet in the washroom and handed her one of her simple salwar kammez to change. "Par NT hamein" and bang, NT closes the door not letting Geet say anything, Geet halfheartedly changes her dress and come down with a long face as she didn't wanted to go for shopping but NT forced her to today.
NT- chale
"Hmm" Geet nodded and they both left. They went to so many different mall, one after another but didn't find anything that suited Geet or NT. "Geet ji hamein tu kuch samjah hi nahi a raha hai ki hum kuan si sari le ine main se "NT said making a confused face as she held one light blue and one red sari in front of Geet. "plz aap baton na kaun si wali sari lo main" NT asked looking at the sari. After looking at the sari for few min Geet pick the red sari and hands it to NT and says "NT this red one will look really nice on u, aap ye hi le lo"
NT- theek hai tu hum red hi wali lete hai
After NT did her shopping for herself she forced Geet to buy some new clothes but Geet was least interested in that so NT did her shopping as well. Geet stood by NT as she selected few dress for her but not for long as Geet eyes fell on the kid section, Khushi instantly came in her mind she tells NT that she is going to kid section, telling her that she goes in the kid section and does lots of shopping for Khushi, Luckily Brij had opened her account in Delhi for her and her account was always filled with money so she didn't worry about the money, As she goes to the reception while she pays for the shopping she remembers the day when maan had come and told her about this and she got angry at him coz her account was not opened as Geet handa_____
FlashBack:
"Geet...Geet...Geet" Maan came in her room almost shouting her name, Geet who was in the washroom jumps up hearing his voice and drops the thing she had in her hand, she looks up making a baby face and says "Aab main ne kya kiya" as Geet was busy in her talk with Baba ji Maan gets scared hearing the sound coming from washroom, he walk to their and knock on door "Geet tum theek tu ho" Maan asked after knocking few times
Geet (st) Dust Dhanav, dara kar poche te hai ke main theek hoon ya nahi
"Geet are you Ok" Maan asked again as he didn't get any answer from her
Geet- haan Maan main theek hoon
Maan- tum washroom main kya kar rahi ho
"Cricket khel rahi hon" Geet replied.
"Geeet" Maan snapped, just then Geet opens the door and came out saying "Kya geet, aap thodi deer wait nahi kar sakte the kya, itni zor se shout karne ki kya zarorat thi pata hai main kitni zor se dar gai thi"
Maan- dar gai par kyun
Geet- have u ever heard ur vocie, jab bhi bolte ho tu aisa lagta hai ke kitne gusse main hoon aap" just as those words escaped from her lips Maan in a jerks pulls her close to himself and says "Acha ji tu aab aap ko hamari awaz se bhi problem hone lagi hai"
Geet- haan, mujhe tu khud se bhi problem ho ne lagi hai, dekaho na meri wajha se sab padishan hai" then she looks at him and says "aap bhi tu ho mujhe le kar padishan" they both stared at each other as Maan slowly tucked her curl behind her ear, Geet closes her eyes feeling his touch, "Geet tum aisa kyun sochti ho ke sab tumhari wajha se padishan hai, main tu nahi hoon"
geet- aap jhot bol rahe ho
Maan- nahi geet i am not lying
Geet- jhot" Maan roll his eyes and says "Geet we will talk o n this topic later before i forget why i came here"
Geet- ji" then Maan takes his wallet out and takes out a credit car from it and hands it to her
"Maan ye kya hai" Geet asked as she flipped the card
Maan- Geet this is credit card, Brij had send it for u
Geet rolls her eyes and says "Maan i know that this is cred card par is pe tu Mrs. Geet Khurana likha hai, ye tu..." before she could complete her sentence Maan interrupts her saying "Geet I know ur name is written as Mrs.Geet Khurana, actually Brij told me not open ur account with ur real name, I don't know why he told me to not open ur account as ur real name, So i couldn't open ur account with ur real name as Geet Handa, I didn't had any other option other then to open ur account as Mrs. Geet Khurana" Geet knew why brij has said that but still she was not happy with it and looked at him angrily, Maan knew she must be really angry right now and says "Geet here take this and Dev will bring in some paper in the evening for you to sign so just sign it as Mrs. Geet Khurana"
"I am not signing any paper with this name Maan, smajhe aap" Geet angrily said and handed him the card back and turns her back to him, Maan sighed and turned her back facing to him and says "Geet plz zid mat karo, take this and sign those paper as Mrs. Geet Khurana" saying that he left leaving her angry____( this is the paper they were talking about is last update)
Flash Back End:

"Ma'am...Ma'am" the receptions called Geet breaking her trance and says "Ma'am ur payment is done

Geet- thank u" taking the bags she went back to NT who was still shopping for Geet, seeing Geet with so many kids shopping she was at first shocked but then she was happy to see her that she is at least showing some interest in shopping
Geet- NT meri shopping ho gai aap ki
NT- Geet ji hamari bhi hogai hai bas hum payment kar le then we will go home
Geet- ji

KM-
"agaya mera bacha "Dadi said as she took Khushi in her arm
"Haan" Khushi said and kisses Dadi
DM- Hmm dada ko kitna tang kiya
"Itna" Khushi says and spred her arm showing it to Dadi
DM- sachi" Khushi nods in yes
"Ohh tu its you ju ise office jan boujh kar beajh ti hai" Maan said as he came in KM and heard DM and Khushi talk
DM- haan and what else could i do if you don't take care of ur self, bahi kisi na kisi ku tu aap ka take care karna hi hai aur Khushi se achi disrtaction aap ke liye aur kya ho sakti hai"
Maan- Dadi do you even know what she did today
DM- kya
Maan- Dadi aaj isne phir se Sahsa ko bother ki and today she dropped glass of water on her dress
Khushi looks at Dadi making a baby face and innocently says "Dadi galti se"
Maan- Galti se, I know very well when you do thing accidentally and when not..."before Maan could say anything else Khushi gets off of Dadi arm and run to Geet room.
DM- Maan you know it very well that Khushi doesn't like Sasha, tu phir tum use uske pass ane hi kyun dete ho
Both Dadi and Maan goes and sit on the couch and Maan says "Dadi I know that but its an office, aur mere cabin main sare staff ate jate rah te hai, how can i just tell her to not come in my cabin, that won't be right"
DM- waise aaj kya kiya sasha ne jis ke liye Khushi ne unki dress kharab kar di
Maan- kuch nahi Dadi we were just looking at some blue prints together and she was like standing next to me and Khushi didn't liked it and then i went out for just few min but when i came back i saw her dropping water on her dress and during metting Shasha found her presentation papers were all over doodeld with color and when i ask Khushi she said she was looking for some paper and she foudn this paper their and started coloring
Dadi started laughing and said "ye ladki bhi na kabhi nahi sudhre gi"
"Dadi wo..." before Maan could say further he heard Khushi crying voice, Dadi and Maan both looked at each other and ran up and when to Geet room as her voice was coming from there and when they reach their they found her sitting on the bed holding Geet duppata and crying non stop.

When khushi went in geet room she didn't find her, so she comes and sits on her bed and waited thinking she must be in washroom as her dupatta was on the bed, after waiting for 5 more mins when Khushi didn't hear any sound coming from the washroom and neither geet coming the only thing that came in her mind whas that Geet had left her, she ran back to her room still hoping to find her their but she she didn't she came back to geet room held her dupatta in her hand started crying thinking she has really left her again.

Maan goes to Khushi and takes her in his arm and says "Khushi what happend, why are you crying" Khushi didn't answered him and kept crying
Maan-beta Dada ko bato why are u crying" Khushi just hugs him and starts crying more, the more he asked her whys she is crying she srtared crying more, Maan brought her down in the hall while Dadi went and got a glass of water for her, "Khushi plz stop crying, you will fall sick if u cry like this" Maan said as he patted her back to calm her down but she was now here calming down and says between her sob "naiii (nahi) sob Mmm (Mama) sob" and started crying more, Maan couldn't understand a single word Khushi said. "Khushi here drink saome water" maan said placing the glass near her lip but Khushi pushed back the glass dropping the water on couch and some on Maan. "Khushi what is this hun" Maan snapped as he got off of the couch, Khushi started crying more seeing Maan shouting her.
DM- Maan aap use chup kara rahe ho ya use aru rola rahe ho" saying that Dadi took Khushi in her lap and says "Khushi aap Dadi ko bato aap kyun ro rahe ho" Khushi looks at her and says "Mer (Meri) sob Mmm (mama) sob cho (Chor) sob" neither Dadi understood her words and looked at Maan_______
Mean while NT and Geet gets held up with some of NT freidns, so they decided to go for a coffee treat for meeting after such a long time, ang by the time they were done talking and drinking their coffee it was 6:30 pm NT looked at Geet making a baby face and says "I am really sorry Geet ji meri wajha se aap ko itni wait karni padi par they are my best friend and we met after such a long time"
Geet- its ok NT hum ghar chale late ho raha hai
NT- ji

IN KM
Khushi was still crying non stop but just a whipper but sometimes she would start crying louder as the thought of Geet had really left comes to her. All of them including Dev and Vicky treid asking why she is crying but she didn't tell them nd each time either Dev or Vicky went close to her and tred giving her things that would make her stop crying, she would just trwo that back at them. She has been crying for now a quite long time and still their was no sign of Geet
"bro stuff something in her mouth, I can't take her cry anymore.
"Shut up Vicky" Dev said as he smacked Vicky on his shoulder and went to Khushi and said "Khushi beta won't u tell ur chote Papa why are u crying for" Khushi nod is No as she was tired of repeating the same thing and as no one understood her she just decided to keep quite and cry. After a while Maan comes in KM with a boy following him, he goes and takes Khushi in his lap and said "Khushi look what Dada has brought for you, Dada bought u your favorite ice cream" and pointed toward the boy who was holding her favorite ICe just like the way she likes, "don't u want to eat your ice cream"
Khushi- Nahi
"But khushi look this is ur favorite ice cream" Maan said as he took the ice cream from the boy and gestures him to leave, as the boy left Maan tires to give the ice cream to Khushi but she Just takes it from his hand and throws it back on the floor and starts crying more, stamping her feet, Seeing her getting out of control like this Maan stands up looks at her angrily and shouts at her saying "Khushi if you don't atop crying in 2 mins then I will lock u in the dark Room" Khushi starts crying more as Maan said as she was scared of dark
DM- Maan use chup karane ki bejaye aap use dara kyun rahe hoon
"Dadi what can i do she is asking for it, she is not telling why she is crying aur nahi chup ho rahi" Maan said looking at Khushi, Khushi saw him looking at her angrily and on top of it shouting at her, she gets angry at him and gets down from the couch and goes to Maan and starts hitting him on his leg saying "Gande da (dada) Sob khu (khushi) Sob nooo sob drk (dark)" and starts hitting him harder with her soft fist.
Just then NT and Geet comes and the driver parks the car right in front of the main gate of KM, As Geet & NT got out and were about to take their stuffs out of car Geet heard Khushi voice, she observed it for a while and for sure she knew Khushi was crying and says "NT ye tu khushi ke rone ki awaz lag rahi hai"
NT- haan hai tu par ye itna ro kyun rahi
Geet didn't even waited a single min their and ran in KM, after NT tells the driver to bring in the shopping back she also run in. As they came in km they both stood at the door shocked seeing Khushi hitting Maan with her swollen eyes and tears covering her face, and hitting Maan saying "bad Dada". Geet looked at Maan and then back at Khushi and thought "why isn't he taking her in his arm, and why is she crying like this" "KHUSHI" Geet said as she couldn't see Khushi cry like this any more and neither Maan was doing anything to make her quite. as soon Geet voice reached Khsuhi ear her hand stopped in mid from hitting maan and she turns toward the door and saw Geet standing their with moist eyes. "Khushi" Geet called again as she found her staring at her as if she has met her after ages and the next moment Khushi ran to her while Geet sat on her knee and took her in her arm, as Khushi almost threw herself in Geet arm and hugged her tightly, Geet patted her back to calm her but she was still crying and said "Ma...mama" between her sob.
"Shhh" Geet said as he found her chocking on her words, she goes and sit on the couch taking water from Dadi and tried making her sit on the couch but she just hugged her more tightly, seeing Khushi not letting Geet go, Geet makes her sit on her lap and tris giving her water to drink, at first she refuses to drink but then drinks it, her cry turned into little sob as she stayed in Geet godi resting her head on her chest.
"Dadi why is she crying like this" NT asked as she goes and sits next to Gee.
DM- pata nahi, past 3 hrs she has been crying like this, poche ne jao tu kuch bata ti bhi nahi hai" hearing that Khushi gave Dadi a glare and said "Jhoti Dadi" everyone mouth fell ope hearing Khushi. Geet cupped Khushi face and says "Khushi kya baat hai aap ro kyun rahi" Khushi didn't answer her but just hugs her tightly. Geet looks up and as her eyes fell on Maan standing their giving glares to Khushi, "Lagta hai Maan ne hi ise kuch kaha hoga, tabhi ye itna ro rahi hai, Ye Maan bhi na sachi main dust dhanav hote ja rahe hai, koi aise bachi ko danta hai kya" Geet murmur to herself but NT hears it and looks at Maan, he was looking at Khushi angrily, but knew he can never shout at her and then she decided to ask khushi and said "Khushi beta kya baat hai, aap choti Ma ko bhi nahi bato ge aap kyun ro rahe the" Khushi still didn't said anything and just nods in No, Then Geet wipes her tears and cupped her face in her palm and makes her look in her eyes and says "Kya aap MAMA ko bhi nahi batao gi" Khush still didn't said anything and just stared at Geet, Geet puts Khushi back on the couch and gets up and says "Theek hai tu phir, Mama chali jati hai, agar aap Mama ko kuch nahi batana chathi tu"
"Nahi" Khushi almost screamed as she held Geet dupatta tightly in he hand, fresh tears rolled down her eyes, Geet sat back and took her in her lap and hugged her tightly seeing her crying again while other watched her helplessly now more scared of what really happen to her that is making her cry like this as she has never ever before cry like this
Geet- shhh, aap ro mat Mama aap se kuch nahi poche gi, hmm
"Mama sob Khushi sob dar gai "Khsuhi said between her sob and hugged Get tightly fearing she might lose her again, other looked at her shocked, coz this the first time she was scared of something to this instance that made her cry like this and they didn't knew what it was.
Geet- kyun
Khushi- Mama Khsuhi ko laga Khushi ki Mama phir se Khsuhi ko chor ke chali gai" a tear escaped from Geet eyes, feeling guilty for being the reason for her tears, Dadi looked at Maan scared of where this all lie is taking Khushi too, Maan made a sorry face and looked back at Khushi feeling sorry for shouting at her.
"Khushi Mama tu aap ke liye shopping karne gai thi" NT said as Khushi looked at Geet and Geet nodded in yes telling NT is saying right "Deakho Mama ne kitni shopping ki aur wo bhi sirf aap ke liye" and points toward the bags that was kept near the couch. Khushi warped her hand around Geet neck and says " Mama khushi ko chor kahi kabhi nahi jaye gi na""Nahi kabhi nahi jayegi" Geet said and took her to her room before her tears were seen by others. Geet sat in Khushi room hugging her feeling guilty for being the reason of her tears, being the reason of her fear, but she couldn't do anything, it wasn't her fault either if Khushi mistook her as her mother, it wasn't her fault that no body made an attempt to tell the truth to this little angel that whom she is thinking as her mother is not really her mother, even she herself don't know who was Khushi mother and where she is that Khushi doesn't even know about her_____
After a while Nt came in khushi room with her dinner and fed her as and then changed her as she wasn't letting Geet go anywhere away from her, after Khushi got changed Geet putted her to sleep_______ After a while when Geet felt Khushi has fall slept, she carefully got up from the bed not disturbing her and was going toward the door when her dupatta accidentally gets stuck in one of the drawer, as she tried to remove the dupatta she accidentally opens the drawer, and her hand automatically stop removing the dupatta as her eyes fell on the photo frame that was inside the drawer and had her and Maan pic together in a beautiful frame and written World Best Mama & Dada,

It was the same picture that was taken during their college competition taking her to the night when she learned that what she felt about Maan a parting from him was called "Love at First sight" well that what Brij had told her but she never believed him_____
FlashBack the night she returned to home from college:
"Geet tujhe kya huwa, tu itna kyun chup hai" Meera asked her as she found her so quite all the way from college to Haveli, and that too when they won the competition which was totally unlike her, by now the HP would have known that they have won but she was all quite and sad. "Kuch bhi tu nahi" Geet said coz she herself didn't knew what was happening to her all of sudden, her mind was still thinking about him, her heart still wanted to with him, in his embrace, her eyes wanted to see his and only face and get lost in those dark eyes, Geet held her self in and embrace but it didn't felt gud at all coz her arms carved to embrace him forever. She herself didn't knew why all of a sudden being away from him killed her within herself, why all of a sudden all these happiness around her didn't mean anything but his just simple smile meant more then these happiness. Why suddenly her thought are only filled with his, why all of a sudden she started thinking about him when she just met him few times and that too only for a while, they don't even know each other, other then their names. Geet thought were broken when Raji came and hugged her saying "oh Di your the best, I knew it you will win this competition" Geet just gives her a smile and then they all moved into the house. Geet and Meera goes to Dar ji and takes his blessing, Dar ji hugs both of them and says "I am very proud of u both" as they broke of the hug Meera goes to Rano and hugs her from behind resting her chin on her shoulder and says "Chachi aap ko pata hai hamein tu laga we will lose this competition" Rano puts her hand on Meera cheek and says "Kyun beta" then Meera tells them the whole nok-jhok that happen between Maan & Geet, Geet gives Meera lok of saying I will kill u with my bare hand, Meera shows her thumb at her and says "pahle Chachi se tu bach le phir mujhe mar na"
"Dar Ji" Geet cutely pouts looking at him, then Rano says "Geet when will u learn to control ur anger, its not good for u beta" Geet was still in Dar ji hugs, she rest her head on his shoulder and says "Ma aab is main meri kya galti, unki bhi tu galti hai na, unhone ne mujhe itna kuch kaha ki mujhe gussa a gaya aur main ne unki car ki headlight tod di" Seeing geet finish her talk so innocently Dar ji couldn't hold back his laugh and a laugh escaped from Dar ji catching everyone attention and everyone looked at him shocked as he hardly smile and here he is laughing "Dar ji aap ko hansi a rahi hai, instead of scolding Meera, ur laughing, jaye hum aasp se baat nahi karte" and turns facing her back to him, Dar ji quickly tires to control his laugh and once he was done he says "Putar agar aap hum se baat nahi karo gi tu" before he could finish his sentence Geet interrupts saying "TU"
Dar Ji-
tu phir aap apna gift kaise loge
Geet peeps from corner of here and sees there was two box wrapped in gift rapper on the table. "Wow Presents, Geet gussa baad main hona, abhi present tu le le" Geet mentally says to herself and then she quickly turn and pick her present and runs away from their shouting
"gift le li tu is ka matalb ye nahi ke main gussa nahi hoon, main abhi bhi gussa hoon" and bang closes her room.
Rano-
ye ladki kabhi nahi sudhregi, Jhali kahinki
Geet came in and fell flat on her bed, closing her eyes but only face that came was Maan, she lay on her stomach resting her chin on her hand and drowned herself in him, his dark eyes, his M shaped lip, was just making her wanting to touch them, feel them under her finger" as she was lost in her self, Brij came in her room and saw her laying down like this, he without disturbing her laid beside her facing the ceiling and stared at Geet, who was blushing and smiling, seeing her like this he just wanted to pull her cheeks, but didnt wanted to disturb her, so he thought to wait for her to open her eyes, he waited for 5 min, 10 min, 20 min, then he gave up on waiting for her to open her eyes and notice him, he sits up on the bed with a thud, enough for Geet to open her eyes, she looked here and their and then her eyes fell on brij wo was sitting their with a long face,
"Veer Ji" Geet said and hugged him "aap kab aye main kitni deer se aap ka wait kar rahi thi"
Brij-
Yah right, I am seeing that, I have been sitting here waiting for u past 20 min and ur saying you were waiting for me
"Par Veer ji aap ko tu main ne abhi Dekha hai" geet innocently says making the cutest face ever, Brij just wanted to kiss her both cheek
Brij-
aankhein band kar ke kya kisi ne kisi ko dekha hai kya aaj tak
Geet-
Main aap ko aankhein band kar ke tu kya aap ko dor se bhi pehchan longi
Brij makes her sits face to face and says
"Hmm tu lagta hai meri Gudiya kisi ki yadon main itni khoi thi ke apne Veer Ji ke ane ki ahat bhi na suni" Geet felt her cheek burn just thinking of what she was lost in thinking that she didn't even noticed her Veer ji was here, and she also knew she will get cought by Brij very soon so she quickly says "Nahi veer ji aisa kuch nahi hai" Geet gets up from the bed and says "Bhala main kyun kisi main khone lagi" Her voice sounded so low, Brij knew something was bothering her "Gudiya" Brij calls as he stood from the bed
Geet-
hmm
Brij-
ek baat pocho" Geet turns toward him and says "Veer ji aap aise kyun bol rahe ho, aap ko jo poch na hai pocho na" saying this she hugged him
Brij-
whatever i ask u, u have to answer me , hmm
Geet-
aap pocho tu sahi
Brij-
I know u want to tell me something, par tu bol nahi rahi, Gudiya u know u can tell me anything
Geet-
hmm
Grij-
tu phir
Geet moved away from him, she did wanted to tell him everything that was in her heart and that is what she has been doing from child, she shared everything with him, she is like an open book to him, she could never hide anything from him, Brij knew when she was upset, happy, when she wanted to tell him something that bother her, he just everything of her, He was her secreat Diary, where she would tell him everything and he would keep it to himself only, like a Diary keeps its word to itself, it never shows it to anyone but u still have fear of that it will been seen by others only, but in Brij case it was only her that was allowed to be see anything that she told him.
Grij-
Gudiya bol na kya baat hai
"Veer ji aisa kyun hota hai ke jise hum ek bar deakh le use bar bar deakhne ko dil chatha hai, uske ek jhalak ko deakhne ke liye ye dil tarasta hai, usi ka chera har jagha nazar ata hai, bar bar usi main kho jane ko dil kare, kyun ek hi mulakat main aisa lata ke hum unhe barso se jante hai, why does his happiness mean more then anything, why does it pain seeing pain in his eyes, why does being away from him feels like this world doesn't mean anything without him, it doesn't have any meaning to it in life" Geet finishes her talk as she picked a crystal statue of two couple dancing, while Brij stood their listening to her calmly trying to figure out if she is talking about herself or someone else.
Brij-
hmm lagta hain meri Gudiya is in love
"What" Geet almost screamed as she turned toward Brij and says "Veer ji aisa kuch nahi hai samjhe aap, I just asked u this coz my...my..." as she struggle to find word she was Brij nodding in yes with a smirik on his face, Geet gets angry and snaps "Veer ji, i just asked u this coz my haan my friend asked and i didn't had answer to her question, isiliye i asked u samjhe aap" Geet mentally felt proud of her finding the friend excuse but only short lived, while brij was on the verge of losing his control over his laugh but he did and said "par Geet main ne tu tujh se kuch pocha hi nahi, is bare main" and smirk at her, Geet for a friction makes a baby face ans stammers saying "Ha...haan tu...tu wo...mai...main ne isliye bola" Seeing her confused face Brij inttrupts saying "kis liye bola", Geet gets really pissed off and in one go she says "main ne is liye bola taki aap koi aur matalb na nikal lo, Haan" Geet sighed taking a deep breath, while Brij made his face into O like now he understood her, and says "ok...ok, wiase naam kya hai"
"MAAN" Geet closes her eyes tightly as she could and bits her lips realizing the name that just escaped from her lip and says "Geet tu, tu pakka gai" she slowly turns to brij and innocently says "wo veer ji, i meant to say that MY Friend BOY FRIEND name is Maan" Geet stretched on "my friend boyfriend"
Brij-
Hmm, mujhe laga ki tu apne BF ke, anyway leave all this aside and let me come to the point
"What point" Geet asked making a confused face
"
the question ur friend asked" Brij said stretching on the word ur friend
Geet-
hmm
Brij-
then the anser is "Love at First sight"
"What Rubbish" Geet said and sat on the bed facing him
Bri-
pagli ise hi tu kah te hai "pahli nazar ka pahla pyar" aisa pyar jo hamein pahli mulaqat main ho jaye aur jo tujhe huwa hai" saying this he ran out of her room for his life, while Geet chased after him "Veer ji main aap ko chorungi nahi" Geet shouted as she ran after him
"Pahle mujhe pakar ke tu dekha" Brij shouts back throwing a pillow cushion at her, and started laughing at her as she cutly pouted and soon she also started laughing as she chased after and soon the Handa Haveli was filled with their laughter, their voice echoed in Haveli making everything come to its life________
Precap: Geet shouting at Maan, Maan flashback (depending on how long its get will try to give more of Geet past)

New OS on Maaneet
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byt the Idea os this OS was Given by Abinash079 and is also posted by her
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Edited by Mariam94 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Mariam94



bas thodi deer aur jaan
plzzz

me waiting

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Arre, me to yaha waiting msg post karne ayi thi and yaha to update hi mil gaya. Will comment after reading.
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Originally posted by: anuandavi

Me too waiting Mariam



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