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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Speechless


Oh i refreshed that thread many times for your replyHw are you?😳


power cut hogaya tha... am just totally held up with guest... but free from today till day after
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats for ur new thread di
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: shrutheAjay


power cut hogaya tha... am just totally held up with guest... but free from today till day after


Oho Busy with Guests hw was your day 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Me too
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Dhundlae aks

PART 176

She was shivering within with her own audacity. With strong trust he pushed her against the wall.. framing her face with his hands kissing her until her head spun. Over joyed .. tipsy only with her kiss now.. he kissed her again & again.. not wanting to .. slowly pull away.. I need a shower.. he whimpered between the kisses.
She shied fluttering her lashes.. the happiness in his eyes was magical. Suddenly he seemed so happy like he got all the happiness in the world. Like her wishing was the greatest happiness he ever wished for..his eyes glittered in gratitude like he never knew how this would feel until he felt it.. his eyes were still longing to feel it again, touch his heart, his soul..bringing together the most wonderful day of his life. He never thought anything would be more impt until he felt that emptiness in him through out every step of his little celebration. But now when he has her in his arms..her flushed cheeks.. her little submission ..he could feel his heart overwhelmed nothing else mattered... still failing to understand thats everything!!! she quivered under his gaze.. the way he kept looking at her. He kissed her again & again.. before he could force himself to take a shower.
She passed him the towel.. blushing.. leaning against the wall. She managed to get into the bed..waiting restlessly for him. He came out & hugged her from behind.
Tum bahut ziddi ho
she smiled leaning back into his embrace.
Tum roothi ho tho kuch bhi aacha nahi lagtha
tum pas nahi hoti.. tho lagtha hain main khud se dor hoon
he snuggled into closer.. nibbling her ear lobe.. lost in her curls
kyun aisen pareshan karti ho mujhe
she turned to face him.. searching his eyes.. wondering itna kuch kah dethen ho.. lekin...
she looked away.
He narrowed his brows.. umm
she shook her head
he hugged her pulling the spread on them.
Next day Geet had to wake him up.. or he was definitely not going to sneak back into KM before anyone noticed him. He couldn't look happier.. waking up in her arms & cutely placing the flower in the side table.. she could stop laughing at herself.. for falling his every oddest of style.
Kuch tho hain.. dil mera.. itna majboor!!

As the training became intense with exhaustive hrs, Maan really didn't have time for anything else. He started coming back late. The training even had late sessions to meet the IT life style. Couple of weeks the only time he got to see his misti.. sleeping when he walked in at 2am.. or sometimes at 4am...
he could clearly see she was waiting for him.. until she could... she had her laptop lying next to her..still open on the part she would be working on. He would save the work for her & switch it off.. before lying next to her. Instantly she would roll into his arms. A smile invariable touch her helps..
Geet really missed her puchki a lot. She tried to sleep early so that she could be awake when he came.
It was their anniversary the next day.. Maan managed get back home early. He finished the dinner & desperately waited for every one to sleep.. dammit why did seem like an eternity!!
he got her some chocolate. He didn't know how to give it to her. It would look so odd. He scratched his head walking into the room. Wat will he tell her...he held the chocolate behind.. even she brought him chocolate.. both couldn't think of a better gift.. especially since the other person doesn't know.

Geet ' aapke haat main kya hain
he was all most caught, well that was MSK... he coolly showed the chocolate.. mujhe aaj chocolate kaane ka man tha
did he get that for her.. she looked at him hiding her chocolate.
Meren liyen she couldn't resist.. she had to ask
umm.. no ways.. I said mujhe chocolate kana tha

he opened the chocolate & began to nibble it.
She pouted ..& looked at her babaji.. inhe tho anniversary bhi yaad nahi
its our first anniversary teehk hain yaad nahi.. inhe tho pata bhi nahi.. atleast chocolate tho mere saath share kar sakten hain.. nahi dehko..kaisen aklen aklen kaa rahen hain
chadho.. mujhe nahi dena inhe kuch gift..
she opened her chocolate & began to eat giving him all kind of looks.


He looked at her chocolate & snatched it from her.
Jab meren liyen layen ho tho di kyun nahi


she looked at him in shock.


He conveniently ate her chocolate & gave her his nibbled bar. He was so glad he managed to give her the chocolate with out having to face her questions.
She too had no option but feel happy that she managed to give him the chocolate with out any hanky panky. But couldn't be more romantic.. kya jaatha pyar se chocolate lethen.. uff!!!
Next day was special... both tried to dress up in each others fav color of dress. Even the flower he gave her was special.. she couldn't stop herself from going to KM in the morning to see him... actually show him the dress & jhumka she wore. Not directly.. but pretending to have visited Nt.
Nt & Dev teased them.. oh yah.. aaj tho tum done ki anniversary hain na
Maan coughed '
Dev ' pyjama wali .. he couldn't stop laughing
Geets face was all red
after they left Maan couldn't have left this chance ' kitni buri biwi ho tum
u didn't even give me an anniversary gift

aap ne bhi tho nahi diya
diya tha na..
she looked at him intriguingly
chocolate nahi diya kal raat ko
main ne bhi tho.. she almost blurted out
he looked at her trying to read her eyes..
she fluttered her lashes & looked away
he held her hand & pulled her closer.. she just wanted to run away from there before he could read anything in her eyes
waisen happy anniversary he whispered in her ears
almost!!!
he added in the end
she twisted her lips ..almost!!.. inhe tho har baat pe mazak sooj tha hain
main buri biwi hoon.. jaisen ki yenh bahut aachen pati hain

Precap
another face off!!!
-PREV PART 175 NEXT PART 177-
thanks for the lovely comments & likes
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sooo cute!

haila i am so dead!!
both wishing anniversary...devtara ko bhi yaad tha...
chalo chalo unko clebtare bhi karwa do plz..😳😳 muski style nahi lekin😡
Edited by aashluvsmaan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Maan was restless because she didn't wish him He confessed many times indirectly Dumbo kahien ka seedha seedh kiun nahi bolta He came home early for anniversary UFF tubah yeh MSK ki big fat ego ek Gift bhi theek se nahi de sakta Finally he wished his Mishtimia They are SO adorable
PreCap: another face offwaiting waiting
Edited by Speechless - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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*swati runs after muski di, demanding another update*
Edited by princess163 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Yaar kitna din tarsayegi inki love story to aisen hi bina rassi ki patang ki tarah udhti ja rahi hain How i have wanted them to face each other and their family and own up. I was imagining all kinds of situations. Thiis is not fair and this is not the love storiy people have.

I thought after bombay incidnets, but no. bohut ho gaya. He dont forget tjhose cricket watching episodes.

Muski you start another FF then you will think of bringing this to some end.

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