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Posted: 13 years ago
TO ALL LOVELY MAANEETIANS WISH U ALL A V HAPPY ,SAFE AND COLOURFULL HOLI. MAY THE LOVE AND BONDING NOURISH AND FLOURISH RICHLY LIKE BRIGHT COLOURS OF HOLI:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update... whhich part was the best??? ummm let me think...was it the fact that it was their first date...or their little aakhon ki gusthakiyaan,or thier sweet romance, or her chupke dance in the outhouse,or his nihaarifying , or her blushing, or the fact that he did all that for her as he got his first salary, or her gift, or her sudden asking the babaji "he loves me na?" ... am not able to decide... but let me say the whole update was SUPER SWEET... waiting for the next


HAPPY HOLI!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
waiting di...but if u make in let say 10 min...gt to go bed early...
arrey bhai kal holi hai...da
by the way...

Rang udaye pichkari, rang se rang jaye duniya

saari, holi ke rang aapke jeewan ko rang de, yeh

subhkamna hai humari''''.holi mubarakh.


HAPPY HOLI...

Edited by lively-piia - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
tip tip barsa wala update de do plz
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Posted: 13 years ago

Dhundlae aks

PART 179
HAPPY WOMENS DAY

Daadi gave a packet of bangles to Geet ' don't worry.. he asked me to pick something for u too
geets eyes filled with tear she took the pack & looked away.
Nt ' let me see wat did Daadi pick for u
wow its so beautiful Daadi
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He spent the whole evening with her.. he had all planned aur mujhe kuch batayen bhi nahi..she pouted cutely.. she immediately looked at her babaji.. he loves me na.. she asked cutely
aap ko tho bahut maza aata hain na mujhe confuse karne main

she felt so overwhelmed with the way he made her special. He has been with her the whole evening.. she couldn't hide the blush.. thinking.. even the night. The special dinner.. that was their first date technically that too with his first salary. She didn't know wat more to expect. He always does the most cutest thing in the whole planet & then.. she just falls for him all over again.. like it was for the first time. Maan came like a zombi to the dinning table.. still yawning dressed in his tracks & vest.

He stopped yawning the moment he saw his dad glaring at him. He straightened himself & greeted every one..almost ignoring Geet, who was desperately waiting for his one glance. She pouted .. & again complained to her babaji.. dehka mujhe teehk se dehka bhi nahi ..

Maan watched her silently.. uff yeh mistimia aur dad.. kabhi khush nahi rah sakten.. jab dehko inhe koi problem rahthi hain.
He twisted his lips & had his breakfast.
Daadi was little scared.. but she had to.. she had..couple of glasses of water before giving maans gift to yash.
Yash ' yeh kya hain
daadi very excitedly said ' Maan ne gift le hain.. appne first salary se
yash didn't say anything.. just continued with his breakfast.
Maans face turned all sad .. sad.. Geet looked at him cutely feeling his pain
he glared at her angrily & excused himself from there.
Yeh lo.. aab iss ke lien bhi mujhe hi gussa karenge.

She sighed & waited for him in the outhouse ..she knew he is definitely going to shout at her. Exactly that happened.. he came in with a big face.. & got angry at her for no reason. All the anger of dad was on her!!! she quietly heard every thing.. dehkna aaj yash ka meeting hain.. I am sure he will wear the tie u gave him.
Maan ' tum dad ke gussen ko nahi jaanthi..
nahi jaanthi.. aapke gussen ko tho jaanne lagi hoon.. she mumbled..
umm.. he shot a glare..
she cutely shook her head

she peeped out of the window & saw Yash going out.
Yeh dehko aapki wali tie pheni hain
Maan immediately ran to the window to watch him.. Maan felt so happy & proud.. he couldn't take his eyes off his dad.. yash was again & again feeling the tie...& setting it right.. anyone could see how proud he felt abt it.
Geet watched Maan's expression hain..
he straighten himself.. phelen nahi bol sakti thi.. khama khama mujhe gussa dilaya
she looked at him making a big O face.
Yeh lo.. issme main meri galti hain
he ignored her amazed face & coolly parked himself in the couch infront of the TV trying to get a nice movie to watch. They spend the weekend together after a long time. Mano yah na mano.. both knew it was special.. for them..just simply being together.
Well least did laila - majnu knew next coming would take a toll on them. Maan was put on a project even before completion of his training period. It was too much of learning & work for him. He had to work even after getting back home. He didn't miss being with mistimia at night..even that meant just sitting with his lap top.. or just dossing off.. the moment he reached the bed. It was hard on both of them, not even able to talk to each other with the work pressure & on going calls. Maan tried to take the call in the hall so that it didn't disturb Geet. Both of them tried their best at least to see each other.. may it be... just in sleep for her.

It was 5.. & Maan still didn't come that day. She was not sure wat went wrong probably he didn't come back yet. But she did see the car come in at around 11pm... she checked the time every min.. he had come early.. for his usual standards but then why didn't he come to see meet her.. she was getting really restless.. she even checked with the watchman.. whether that was Maan who came in her car.
Then why is not coming to meet her. She waited pacing restlessly .. he still didn't come.
May be he is tired
well thats not an excuse.. he would still come here & dose off next to her
why is he not coming..??
she can't even call him & ask.. it was never like a commitment between them.. that he has to come..
but he always comes..
her eyes filled with tears..
may be he is sleepy
she wined he could sleep here ..he always does.. loving him was like a confusion.. running behind dhundlea se aks.. the war was endless inside her head,
the war between her heart & mind was always on.. . Still this desire to be loved the way he does.. if that is ..she closed her eyes.. tears shedding her mind screams it loud it could be his choice.. & her heart looks at the phone to call him atleast she could hear his voice.
Sometimes this fight would never end like this endless night.. dam.. it was not even 1.15am.. !!mind trying to give logics while.. heart not wanting to believe any excuse. Why is he not here.. even on the worst days of his work he never failed her.. then...
it felt she was torn between this reflection of his & him ..himself!!! still her heart continues to cry loud yearning for him.. this feeling is been an evil bliss!!!

Precap
Geet angry.. Maan shouting on top of that!!! uff the fight
-PREV PART 178 NEXT PART 180-
thanks for the lovely comments & likes
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
ME FIRST!!!!!😉

colourful comment on colourful HOLI….😆

loved geet being confident about yash wearing maan's gift tie…😳

haaye… he actually wore it…. defo maan must be very happy…😃

Oh god work taking toll on their cute cute meetings…

very cute… geet waiting for maan like a typical wife….😳😆

Ooops…. why didn't maan come to her even after retuning home???😕

Precap- hey babaji inn dono ka kuchh nahi ho sakta…


Edited by ruchs - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
really nice update di...
but wat happen y did puchki didn't come????????
precap scaring me...
no crying on holi...pity plzzz
cont
Edited by lively-piia - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it di
waiitng them to be in commnitment
oh god
maan ka gussa and geet too
waiitng for the next par di
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Posted: 13 years ago
aww.. sometimes i just dont know who I am a bigger poonchh (tail ) of 😆.. geet or Yash..😎

she just knew he 'd wear that tie didnt she...🥳

so work is taking its toll on them now isnt is..

hope they get over this.. though I don't want mr.khurana shouting on her when she herself is mad at him.. I am shamelessly always on team Geet😎..

continue soon !
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Posted: 13 years ago
why dint puchki went to the outhouse 😭
oh no another fight
Edited by sanu3108 - 13 years ago

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