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angullgrl91

@angullgrl91

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#371

hahhaha...well finally the truth is out! well some of it i guess..lol!

good thing geet figured it out! I like this smart geet! ...and the fact that she's not of those oppressed, gullible indian women. she's smart and strong-headed! good job on the part!

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Sushmacholke

@Sushmacholke

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#372

So chotu update:(:( Sheer confusion all around and geet is adamant wild cat Maan and geets fight was less intense was expecting much more sensuous one well geet drooling over love bites but hell bent to admit her feelings, hilarious confused update but solved everything ,nxt is wat?? will they quit their jobs ?? Geet doesnt knw tat she is Maans song!!! waitin for tat... Thanx for the pm jaan:) WAITING FOR NXT... UPDATE DEAR... last one:(:(:(

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preethia

@preethia

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#373

loved the update

omg this is ending

didnt expect it to end so soon

waiting for next

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honeygrape

@honeygrape

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#374

awsome part marvee...no you cant end it so soon...continue soon😊

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Tabinda Areeb

@t_areeb

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#375

waiting for geet's reaction on finding out the truth why he didnt do his task with her

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Sarita

@AnonMSK

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#376

So finally things are getting cleared up!!waiting for d last part.

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Dona

@Donnaa

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#377

awsome update

like button is not working dear

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mysteriousmilli

@mysteriousmilli

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#378

Excellent part...
so sweet...😉 they are way too smart as expected by dadima & karan khurana 😆😆😉
please update soon dear...
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vivacious_gurl

@vivacious_gurl

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#379

Loved the part 10...awesome... so Karan Khurana revealed to Maan that Geet wasnt a file to be handed over...she was an applicant for the post of Lieutenant... Savitri is relieved that Maan hasnt slept with Geet...Karan is relieved that Maan dint break his trust and Savitri will now not kill him and Maan... Maan is relieved he dint actually do anything wrong with Geet coz she wasnt a case to be closed... Geet is confused at Maan being a Lieutenant, Karan giving Maan her case to test her, Her daadi ma knowing about her application and also knowing Karan Khurana... wow Marvee loved the update... waiting eagerly for the next one... please dont make it the last update

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 13 years ago

#380

Hi dear..thanks 4 da pms for parts 9 n 10 bt read part 9 n commented already! Part 10 was rocking, intense n hilarious! Maan trying to help Geet bt she refuses! Geet runs i the bathroom n looks @ herself n then gets an idea! Meanwhile Karan & Dadi arrive @ the truth is revealed ...all r relieved after Geet confronts Maan! Well written, sorry 4 late likes n comments! Update soon! No...it cannot b the last part...there is so much tht geet n Maan do not knw! Love the way u write⭐️