MG FF - The taming of the shrew pt-pg3 p2-pg4

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey guys x

Well... where do I start?

I have so much to say yet so little .. haha

anywayy... You guys can call me princess as that's what my beloved family call me :) . I'm quite young and was born and bred in the UK yet with DESI origins! I've never been to in to the whole dramas and serials concept. But still, I watch a few here and there and prefer to read about them on I. I have been a silent reader for almost a year now and have finallyyy got the guts to make a membership and ... V OILA.. here I am now; typing my very first post! :D eeepp... lol

Anyway... BASICALLY! I am a BIG FAN of creative writing and LOVE LOVE LOVE to write (ever since I could hold a pen). I always jot a few short stories when I'm bored but keep them to myself. NOW, I have decided to enlighten all you out there with the gift of my creativity.

*_* woo .. how exciting -__- im sure ur as happy as ECSTATIC as I am :-l

pahaha anyhoo..

I wanted to start with an SS inspired by the GREAT AND GIFTED WILLIAM SHAKESPEARE (big fan). His play the taming of the shrew is EXCEPTIONAL and I would love to write based on the same concept.

If you haven't read it... WHAT ARE YOU DOING WITH YOUR LIFE??? lol joookkeee you should read it. I greatly recommend it. But if you're not into all that, I'll just tell you. It's about an extremely rich and handsome man named Petruchio who is quite ruthless and has an attitude the size of Mt.Everest. He gets married to a woman called Katherina who is a very STRANGE character. She can be quite mean, spoilt and violent. But, I LIKE HER! I think she's witty and confident and can stand up for herself. The play is about how they fall in love and he tames her from a wild woman to caring and affectionate.

SO... I wanted to write an SS based on this with a similar. BUT there's no point if you guys aren't interested so PLZ PLZ PLZ let me know whether I should write this . Thank you mwah xxx


Character sketch

Well, I
felt that our beloved Maaneet were the most suited for this role. MSK does
remind me a lot of Petruchio (the protagonist from the play). However, Geet is
much more 'civilised' than the Kate from the play but I'm sure I can tweak that
a little. SO here we go..



Geet -
(as Kate)



Geet is
known in HP (village) as the full on 'mast' girl who totally does not fit into
social norms of Indian society. She is bold, independent and feisty! She stands
up against the men in the house and is as brave as Napoleon! She is
unfortunately bound by the bonds she shares with her beloved father, a rich
landowner. She can never deny him. No matter how much she tries, she ends up
doing as he says in most matters. The rest of the world sees Geet as an outcast,
as a wild 'shrew' and she's disliked by many due to her attitude.


Maan – (as Petruchio)


A ruthless
business man who has only a few aims in life:


Money

His ego

More money


He has
spent his entire life building these. He's very rich as he inherited the
business from his father who left him recently. His father was the one of the
few figures he was fond of in his life and he has just passed away. Maan is
now, thanks to his Daadi, on a search for a bride to fulfil his father's last
wish. However, he won't take any Tom, Dick or Harry as his wife (partly because
he's not interested in wedding a man). After all, this is MSK, a wealthy idol
in society! Besides, he's sick of meeting the usual shy, timid, quiet women his
Daadi has introduced to him. He needs someone with a spark to counteract his
attitude; he needs a challenge; he needs Geet Handa.


MOHINDER HANDA – This is Geet's father who loves both his
daughters greatly. He is very rich and owns lots of properties around India. However,
he has strict orthodox Indian values. He sees the women of the house as
inferior who should obey his orders.


NANDINI HANDA – This is Geet's younger sister. She is also
beautiful like Geet but completely OPPOSITE! She is timid, quiet and fearful.
She lacks confidence, authority and power. She is the standard pretty damsel in
distress who would be a 'good little wife' for a dominating man.


DEV KHURANA – Maan's younger brother who is hopelessly in
love with Nandini but cannot wed her as she is younger to Geet who is still
single. Plus, his bro is still a bachelor and he would like to wait for him to
get married first.


DAADIMA - Just like in GHSP, she wants her grandchildren
to get settled in life to live peacefully so she can pass away in peace. She is
the only one who can order Maan… kind of



Part 1 = http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2804391&TPN=3

Part 2

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2804391&TPN=4
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Posted: 13 years ago
#2
seems to be interesting
plzz carry on
will love to read
504887 thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#3
Woohhooo! Its awesome one dear!
Loved it!!
Do cont soon!
And PM me too pls!
and about the NY idea there is already a FF named" NewYork Times" by 6th Element (Hasini) so sorry and btw I have never been out of my city let alone state or country lol!
So bit weak at these outside things but may be I may introduce this NY thing in future in my FF btw THANKS A MILLIONS for the suggestion! And actually I wanted some kind of modern or trendy title for the FF rather than the old typical ones! Could you suggest..
504887 thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
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any such title! Hope I am not pestering you lolzz!
AND eagerly waiting for you to start your new FF!
cont soon!
thnx 4 d pm!
504887 thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#5
And the Character Sketch is awesome!!!
Nandini being typical sacrificing
MSK being shrewd!
Geet being wild!
Dev being meek lolz
Handa being dominating
And I am all loving it!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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interesting
add me in ur pm list
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Posted: 13 years ago
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🤗nice start best of luck👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oho oHo...sounds great...Do continue...👍🏼
So Pwincess JI u too started ur FIRST EVER ss On IF...🤔.nt fair...😔😆
Nw we r nt same same anymore...😉😆
anyways lovely concept...looking 4wrd to it...😃
Thanx 4 the PM.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congats on ur new ff dear...
plz update soon & add me in...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@anshra

Thanks dear I really love the encouragement your comment smacked a HUUUGEEgrin on my face

@suba2011

Okie doke yaar – JUST FOR YOU I'll update now

@ Ginqueen

Thanks J im hoping I can live up to your expectations

@

AAANNUUU DIII

THANKKKSSS YAAR! You made my day.. no my week… no my year! Lol x uv inspired me Anu di my role model J will do as long as u keep pming me ;)

Oh yeah I think iv heard of it x I may have read it a long time back

Aha same my city is HOME SWEET HOME! Theres no place like home. I've only ever been to Dubai, Saudi Arabia and Pakistan on holiday a few times.. that's it!

It's fine I'm glad you liked my suggestion J and yeah I saw you named your ff destined to be loved… woowww yaar this is why you're the natural writer! Cos you can come up with things like that!

And DIII! You and pestering? As if… my di can pester me ANY TIME!

WILL DO THANKS J thanks for the encouragement

Paha lol I'm glad you've understood the characters well di J I knew I could rely on you J x

@mollycoddle

I hope so yaar let's see…

@komlika

Thank you mwah let's see how you like it .. thanks for the feedback it really does help me and keeps me going

@love2_soma

Thanks I won't keep you waiting for long don't worry

@ambbiha

Ok darling I will do

@preetymaaneet

Thanyou so much please do keep reading and commenting.. It really encourages me thanks

@dona86

Thanks do keep reading and posting… will update now

@_mahi.ve_

Pahaha lolll ur comment made me LOL really loud in front of the whole family! Lol they probs gna send me to a mental institute now lol x and James Bond ji.. aww bbs don't worry me and you are a team all the way.. even if iv bizarrely started to write a corny ff lol thankyou darling J pls keep reading and commenting

@geetsweet

Thank you dear I will do and thanks sso much for the encouraging comment J mwahh

THANKS ALL GUYS YOUY DON'T KNOW HOW BIG MY GRIN WAS WHEN I SAW THE COMMENTS! Me being a jhalli thought no one has commented yet so was really depressed thinking im so rubbish L you made my day guys love you all lots mwahhh xxx

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