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Posted: 13 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: ruchs

🥳UPDATING!!!!!!🥳


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Posted: 13 years ago
#72

thank you for your overwhelming support sweeties!!!!!😳
here's the next update'
hope i don't disappoint you guys
please buddy me for PMs'.😳

PART - 5 (part 82)



Maan was totally taken aback. He expected Geet to become emotional, hug him, ask questions at her Hoshiyarpur express speed. He expected everything but this. In fact shouldn't it be him who should be angry with her for hiding such a big thing from him. He scratched the back of his head but knowing her unpredictable nature, he shrugged his shoulders.

He went towards his car to see the most cute and adorable sight in the world. Geet was cribbing to her babaji!!! Oh how much he missed it.

"Babaji aap dekh rahe ho na. yaha meri jaan nikal rahi thi aur vaha vo hai ki' kahi yekoi superhuman to nahi hai? Pata nahi inhe sab kaise pata chal jaata hai? Dusht danav kahi ke? '"

She looked so cute that Maan just wanted to eat her alive. But he knew now he would have to placate his jaan even though it was HER fault.

He cleared his throat to get her attention. She stopped her cribbing and turned the other way. He again did the same, this time she gave him a glare and sat in the car.

He gave up and went to the other side and started driving the car. He sneaked at her a number of times but Geet even refused to spare a glance and kept looking out of the window. When they reached back at their flat, she literally jumped from the car and ran away.

"Sambhal kar Geet'"

But she had already went away. Now Maan was getting seriously angry. He went after her and as soon as he entered the flat, he jerked her hand and brought her to himself. Geet who was not expecting this was startled and looked at him wide eyed.

"YE KYA NATAK LAGA RAKHA HAI? EK TO YOU HIDE SUCH BIG THINGS AND NOW WHEN I SHOULD GET ANGRY, TO TUM MUJHE HI TEWAR DIKHA RAHI HO?"

He shouted on her but immediately regretted it the second he saw big fat tears escaping the beautiful brown hazels.

"Sorry jaan. Please ro mat. Shhh. Sorry'"

By then Geet had started sobbing uncontrollably. Her whole body was shaking. Maan engulfed her in a tight hug and rubbed her back. Gradually her sobs subsided and finally she looked at him.

"Jaan'"

"Mujhe aapse koi baat nahi karni. Main aur baby ab aapse tab tak baat karenge jab tak aap mujhe ye nahi bata dete ki aapne sab jaante hue bhi us chudeil se sagaai kyun ki?"

Maan actually got scared seeing her getting so angry. He was thoroughly frightened now. How would he tell her that at that time he actually thought that Rimi was Geet. His heart kept on telling him otherwise but he still listened to his brain. He had no answer.

What an irony, jis ko dekh kar duniya kaanpti hai wo ek ladki ke samne bhigi billi ban gaya.

But kya karein if he is MAAN SINGH KHURANA then she is GEET MAAN SINGH KHURANA'

"Main wo'"

Geet gave him a glare and he gulped.



PRECAP

MAAN and DADIMA😆

PREV -PART 4 NEXT - PART 6

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next update coming soon!!!😉

Edited by ruchs - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#73
awesome
love u baby for this update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74
wow awesome
he knew it im happy
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Posted: 13 years ago
#75
baby u rock with ur update
gosh me flared with ur writing and brainy things yaar
me waiting for next update but plz give lit bit big yaar aise thodi na hota hai yaar
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76
wow dear what an update maan scared of GMSK 😆
want more of it dear me just imaging what will be rano maa and dadi's reaction after knowing all this 😉
hey dear continue soon waiting eagerly for the next part 😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: zohafarheen

baby u rock with ur update
gosh me flared with ur writing and brainy things yaar
me waiting for next update but plz give lit bit big yaar aise thodi na hota hai yaar


awww me flying with the praises!!!!😳😆

thank you so much sweety...

am trying to give 1-2 updates everyday, that's why they are short!!!😳

but will try to update more!!!😳


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Posted: 13 years ago
#78
awesome loved it add me in ur pm list
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Posted: 13 years ago
#79
am on top of the world…

such sweet comments!!!!😳

updating again🥳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: ruchs

am on top of the world'

such sweet comments!!!!😳

updating again🥳

wow dear waiting eagerly 😍

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