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Posted: 13 years ago
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VERY NICE UPDATE! WELL WRITTEN!! DO CONTINUE SOON!!!
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wonderful update pz add me in your pm list
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Posted: 13 years ago
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great update... poor geet!!!😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da pm, congrats on the new ss! interesting concept! well written Part 1 was intense n emotional ! well written.sorry 4 late likes n comments
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ana di this is just a beautiful start
well loved the start
was feeling bad for geet
looking frwd to how story progresses
continue asap
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Posted: 13 years ago
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luvvd d cncpt plxxx update sooonnn
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice part
does he know geet from before

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Posted: 13 years ago
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dear..😛..
...4 PMing me...😛
4 ur hard work...👏👏
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guys...me sad...i PM ed almost 500 but comment only...17-18...😕

i said u guys ealier if u don't like plz tell me...but it really hurts a lot...me try to reply each of u...many serials i don't watch but i read ur ff's ...checking out ur updated stuff's...n try to make a sweet comment which u guys liked...but u never check my any stuff...i really busy wid my studies...but also don't want to hurt my frndz...i try to comment ecah of u woh Pmed me...but only few of u ans my Pms...if don't want me to bother u...plz tell me...i never pm u.4 my any update...
but i updated 4 whom woh waited...i know just few..but i updated for them surely...but that surely ime said..that me really hurt abut u guys...😭me uncontorled sob.sob..😭
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Geet: Maan you should go and sleep''' You are not at all in your senses'''.

Maan was coming more close to her but his eyes were closing slowly but only one word was coming out of his mouth'' I want you, I want you'..

Maan just drifted to sleep on the couch'''.

Geet made him sleep properly…….. and she slept on the bed…….. She even refuse to go in front of him

Next Morning

Geet got much early and wore a beautiful saree as it was a first day for her in the house.

Geet took the blessing of Savitri and went to the Kitchen to help Nakul to make breakfast……………

On the other hand Maan woke up with a heavy head………. Because of the heavy head Maan was already in his angry mood………

Maan: Nakul Nakul………. Where is my coffee………..

Nakul had gone out to bring something………

Geet heard the voice and got little sacred…….. She was not sure whether to go before him or not………….

Maan opened his eyes fully and found himself sleeping on the couch and recollected the last night incident……

Maan: Nakul Nakul…… God dammit …….. Why my coffee is still not in my room………….

Maan came out of the room and started walking towards the kitchen…… But something caught her attention……… A beautiful lady…….. The back of Geet who was busy working in the Kitchen………

Maan just got attracted towards her and started walking towards her…… Geet sensed that someone is nearing her…… She knew who could it be…… She tried to move but before that Maan hold her from waist……..

Maan(whisper in her ear): Good Morning Beautiful……. I thought you will get a coffee for me in room……….

Geet without any reaction: I will get it………

Maan was giving wet kisses to Geet on her shoulder but Geet just wanted to get away from his hold……..

Geet: Please let me go Maan……….

Maan: Nooo

Suddenly Nakul came screaming

Nakul: Geet Didi Geet Didi

Geet just pushed Maan away……….

Maan gave an angry look to Nakul…… Seeing Maan so angry Nakul just gulped his saliva………

Maan(in an absolute angry tone): Nakul where is my coffee??? My head is paining like hell…….. Don't you know that I need a coffee first thing in morning………

Nakul (stammering): Who who Maan Sir I had gone…..

Seeing Nakul, Geet immediately said I had send him to market……..

Maan just went off the room……….

Nakul: Thank you Geet Didi……

Geet: No need Nakul……..

Nakul truly liked the Geet as she was calm with him………

Geet was busy with her work and Nakul went and gave coffee to Maan…..

While Geet was busy a very sweet voice came from behind………

Hey hi sweet heart……… Good Morning……….

Geet turned around and was happy to see him…… Her facial expression totally changed……….

Geet: Yash………

Yash: Hummm…….. So you are my Bhabhi now……

Geet got little nervous my hearing a word Bhabhi……… She recollected the last night incident……….

Yash saw the concern in her eyes and immediately hugged her………

Geet and Yash were very good friend……..

Yash was very well aware in what circumstances Geet said yes for the wedding………. He also knew how his brother was……..

Yash: Geet are you ok????

Geet just nodded her head………

Yash: Did Bro did anything wrong to you???

Geet was little taken back…… Again the last night incident flash in front of her………

Geet did not reply anything but Yash was sure that something has gone wrong……..

Yash changed the topic and started asking her about what she has made for the breakfast………

Savitri came and also joined them in the conversation………

Savitri could see the dull face of Geet…… She very well knew that what Geet is going through……….

On the other hand Maan was looking at Geet from the upstairs…… He saw that Geet was very comfortable with Yash…..

Maan (self talk): I will make you mine Geet……….

Maan walked towards the study room……..

After finishing her work she came back to her room to take something from her cupboard. She was initially scared to go as she was aware that Maan has still not gone to office……

When she entered she was relived of not seeing Maan………

She was busy finding her thing in the cupboard…… Suddenly she heard a sound of door closing and turn around to see Maan closing the door… She just wanted to hide from him……..

Least was Maan aware that Geet is in the room…… He could feel the aroma of her……..

She was moving behind when she bang herself with a flower vase which was there…… The sound of falling made him see her face…… she started walking more behind….. He was walking ahead……

Maan came very much near to her and pinned her towards the wall.

Maan: Why are running away from me………

Geet: Let me go……

Maan breath was falling on her face…….. The rosy lips of her were inviting Maan…. The milky skin was making him insane…….. He just wanted to capture her completely…… The desire in his eyes was clearly visible……..

Geet (tears in her eyes): Please let me go………

Maan(angry): You were very comfortable down then why not with me… and now I am your husband and I have full right on you……..

Geet: But I have not given you any right……..

Maan: Ohhh by marring me you have given me all right……..

Geet: No……. I am not like your other girl friends……

Maan: Ohhh how do I know that you are not like my other girl friends….. For that I need to taste you……

Geet: I said leave me……….

Maan came more near pressing his entire body on her…. She just wanted to move away from him……. But his hold was too tight for her to move anywhere………

Maan's one hand was on her waist which was making patterns and other hand moved to her shoulder…. Moving her blouse from her shoulder and planting kisses over there….. Maan lips were moving from her shoulder to her neck and it captured her lips with full force…… She was shivering, crying due to fear…….. His other hand which was there on her waist went to open the saree which he was successful to certain extend……

Geet just wanted to come out of him…….. She was pushing him…….. that was making him more angry as he recollected the night incident where she had denied him……..

Maan became more furious because of Geet reaction…….. He started biting her more vigorously……… Geet was pleading him to leave her….

Suddenly there was a knock on the door……..

Geet Geet………

The knock made Maan hand loose her little…… Geet took an opportunity and push him and ran towards the door to open…… She was continuously crying………

She opened the door and saw Savitri standing……… Geet just hugged her and went on crying…….. Savitri saw Geet's condition and noticed Maan standing……

Savitri holded Geet and took Geet with her in other room………

Savitri consoled and made her comfortable……… and came back to Maan who was getting ready for the office……

Savitri (roaring): Maan …. I am warning you…… Dare you come near Geet now………

Maan: But

Savitri: No more argument now……… Geet will stay in other room and not here……… and you will not go near her………

Savitri just walks out of the room……..

Maan was fuming and his hand goes in his hand (self talk): Dammit….

On the other hand Geet was still crying and goes in the deep thought…..

Precap: Geet: But he is not like the one whom I always dreamt of.





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