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Posted: 13 years ago
the update is somehow confusing.
maybe the next part will clear the confusions in my mind.
awesome update!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
I have a feeling that dis boss is maan...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Shimmerr

the update is somehow confusing.
maybe the next part will clear the confusions in my mind.
awesome update!!



if u still confused after next part do say :)
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Posted: 13 years ago


but james maan bhi to ho sakta hai...vaise bhi maan is missing na...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: farie1209



but james maan bhi to ho sakta hai...vaise bhi maan is missing na...



dont you think geet would recgnise maan😳
next part will make it clear😛😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
If boss is james... Then where is maan???????
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Posted: 13 years ago
More Piya
Part 24


Geet suddenly stopped and closed her eyes. She really did not mean that.
"ten minute late" frustrated, james could not bare late. There are no sympathy for that in this world. Nor he will ever show any plight manner because it's miss geet handa.
"I have a proper reason and excuse sir." softly. Geet could read his every expression. From the wrinkle on his forehead to the frown with his nostrils. The nostrils was wide and red, his pink cheek. Gosh he have pink-red chick! Those rough stubble around, where it do look like he haven't shaved for months, it's not that. It just he likes his stubble. And lastly those big blue eyes. Which was red in anger at this point of time, however... It's perfect.
"are you listening miss handa?' james reminded geet again. She was in her little fairy world that god knows what he is made out of. James twitched his eye brow and concentrated deep on geets face. "why are you late? I demand an answer."
"I have moved in to a new place. That's why" geet gave out an honest respectable answer. That couldn't be shorten any how. James had this disease, everything had to be minimal, short and quick.

"question comes back to why are you late. Now in whose permission you have changed the house and you are late because of that. In other word you are late because you have moved house & who gave you that permission to play with my timetable" James finished his words.

"excuse me... Firstly you have wasted 20 minutes now accusing me why I am 10 minutes late. Do you fancy doing my work?" she was frustrated with his twisted words.

Geet gave one glare to James and walked out. "mad, that's what he is mad'

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'I tell you molly! He is mad. For god sake. Wasted 30 minutes of my on why I am 10 minutes late. I just can't believe that I am still working for him' geet walked one side to another of her living room, looking here and there with frustration. Files were scattered on the sofa, dining table, chair, next to the flower decoration, fish tank near the main door. She rested one hand on her hip hurting the waist in anger.

'calm down. What ever you say geet, James is really hot!' she giggled. Geet angrily pressed the red button and threw her phone across the room. 'idiot!'

She walked in to her bedroom and lands on the bed flat on her stomach. Her mind was throbbing in anger. It was very dangerous situation, if anyone dares to come in front of her now she will surly murder them. Geet slowly turns around and looks straight across the room, to the parallel wall. Gazing up her and maans photo. Very old of course. 10 years. Geets 14th birthday. her last birthday.

'I am angry' she moaned at the photo. 'I hate the job! I Hate my life. i Hate everything!' geet sat up. And walked across the room to her wardrobe. 'maaannn! Seriously, how much a person can tolerate?' geet questioned the photo while taking her nightdress. 'James, hot! Sexy! What not. Uff! I just want him out of my life. Oh my life would be so much better. Just you and me.' Geet smiled. She walked across the room again, a massive maans photo against the bathrooms door. 'I know, I know... I am being to angry. Per what can I do? He does stupid things na!' she places a kiss on the door over maans lips and walked in to the bathroom.

Next day, geet woke up with Ranos Call. She lazily looked up, wondering its Sunday! Why today? 'hello' her lazy voice spoke.
'are you still sleeping? It's 10!' Ranos scream. Could almost kill geet's ear!
'can't you speak little quitter mom?'
'you suppose to be here! There are people's who is coming to see you geet. This is the 4th week I had to reschedule.'

Geet twitched her eye brow, this is the limit.
'can you please be here.'
Geets facial expression changed instantly.
'I am begging you'
'mom, you know very well why I always avoid this. I am not ready!' geet spoke in a grumpy face.
'you can't wait for him forever. You know very well maan is not there. He will never be there for you. It's just a projection in your head.'
'no! No he is not' geets voice almost disappeared. She couldn't argue back. Along with her everyone knew well maan is no where to be found.
'for god sake geet. I want you back home in 30 minute!'

Rano hangs up. A drop of tear rolled down her eyes. Geets hand automatically came up and whipped it off. She quickly. Dressed her self up and head straight towards her old house.

Sena, who works with geet was already there with a smile. Mostly every member of her family had smile, starting from her bhi to bhabi.
'I am so exited!' Sena came along and hugged geet before she could step out of her car. 'he is hot.' she giggled. Geet gave out a uncomfortable smile. The larkywala came to see her, however her heart could only think of maan. As she touched the front door, pushing to open, she could only sense maan charging the door back at her face. Her soul jumped, waking from the deep thought, only to find the 10 years old paint. Lacking her and maans finger print.
'maan' she whispered... Rano who was standing by the door instantly looked at geet.
Every second in this house haunted geet with maans memory. It's painfully to feel the happiness she lost. Her eyes dying to see maan. One look, one glimpse of his psychical presence. Geet twisted her head to one side to another... Again maan walking by in to the living room with an angry glare... She nearly flowed but Rano stopped geet.

'what's wrong? Why do you look so lost?' Rano confusingly looked at geet.
'au maan?' she points at the direction. confusingly...
'he is not there geet' Rano bites her teeth in anger. 'it's been 10 years he have left. He is not there!'

Suppressing the motherly pain, Rano had to be the strong one for geet. She pushed geet in to the living room.
The whole family stood up as soon as geet walked in. The man, called niten stood between his parents. Geet barely looked up. She gave out a smile to hide the rudeness and the unwanted words that is running through her head. Geets mom came across, letting geet comfortably sit on the opposite sofa.

She looked down, barely caring what's happening around them. Why she is here? What type of relationship she is about to be in. Then suddenly a warm hand rests over her. Geets heart skipped several beats. As her eyes slowly looked up she discovered maan. The 16 years old maan. His projection. He was smiling. A cunning smile on one side of his lips. His green eyes twinkled in pain. There was fear. A fear of loosing someone special. A fear of being someone's else. A fear of someone taking over her life. His hard rock palm rests against geets cheek then slowly he bends forward to kiss the opposite cheek. His breathtaking face could clearly take her breath way. Those lavishing red lips against geets red plum one, she still couldn't forget. It's almost they are 14 years old again.

'are you leaving me this quick? Haven't you thought even once that what this maan would do without his geet. If geet is a rose, then maan is the root to keep that little light breathing inside. Always providing anything for that rose...'
'you are lying' geet whispered back. 'the rose is dying, then where is the root to save me?'
'I am here. I am always here. I will always be there. I could never disappear because you are not letting me go.' maan consoled geet.


'I will never let you go. You are my' geet demands. She closed her eyes with tear rolling down, but when she opened them back, it was back to the reality. Rano slowly elbowed geet to answer there question.
'do you think this would be correct?' nitens father questioned.

Geet confusingly starred at them for a moment, them rushed out of the room, through the corridors then outside to her car,driving off in less then a minute.

Everyone starred at Rano for answer.

Niten did not pleased at all. Specially after 4 weeks of reschedule. He stood up angrily and looked at Rano. 'if your daughter have afire with her boss then why call us? To insult?' all three walked out. Leaving Rano feeling shameless and low.


next-?
hay i will update again soon, :)
hope you all loving this
if u r confused do ask ;)


common Q- where is maan?
A- you have to wait to find out :)
Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome !!!
Loved it !!!
Waiting for maan
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Posted: 13 years ago
We will wait to find out where Maan is😊...both d parts were awesome...plz update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
@ smallvill & asmani- thank you so much ;)

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