MG-OS-Unexpected Incidents--Part 2:Pg 9--22/02/12 - Page 5

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PART 2

Maan stepped into the city and all the memories rushed like waves.

When he entered the city for the first time ,he was an innocent ,careless teenager ...but when he left this place 5 years ago , he was a completely changed person whose innocence was lost in the crowd of the people around him.

**Flashback**

Maan : Geet ,I guess you should think twice before taking any step.

Yash : Haan Geet, aakhir yeh hum sabki career ka sawaal hai.

Geet was shocked to hear those words from Maan and none of her friends were

there to support her.

Geet: guys ,hum yun darke peeche nahi bhaag sakte!!

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It has been three days since that incident happened ,the whole gang was walking on the road on their way to hostel when they all noticed a girl ,who was sweating badly, she tried to walk as fast as possible , she was walking while continuously looking back ,It was somewhat visible that she was terrified of something. Everyone ignored the fact but , Geet sensed something wrong and her doubt became more stronger when she saw two people on a jeep were searching for her. Geet along with the gang followed that girl ,they reached the railway station following her. When they all saw her leaving the place, they all tried to convince Geet that there's nothing wrong ,so it's better to leave .

They all left but Geet again went to the railway station to ensure if everything was fine and that night Geet witnessed the murder of the same girl.

That night changed everything.

Geet was completely shocked and was also disgusted ,a lot of feelings were

revolving in her mind ,she lodged a complaint against them , unaware of the incidents that were about to come.That complaint started to become a threat to her friends , Maan, Yash ,Naveen and Shreya started to receive threatening calls as they were very close friends of Geet .It scared the hell out of them.

The most important thing that was making them tensed was the fact that they all were in the final year and any wrong step can ruin their lives.

Maan : Geet ,I guess you should think twice before taking any step.

Yash : Haan Geet, aakhir yeh hum sabki career ka sawaal hai.

Geet was shocked to hear those words from Maan and none of her friends were there to support her.

Geet: guys ,hum yun darke peeche nahi bhaag sakte!!

Shreya : We know Geet ,but just think , us din ek insaan ki jaan gayi aur tumhari gawaahi ki wajah se we all might land in trouble .

Naveen : It can also ruin our career Geet.

Geet: guys ,tum logon ko kya hua hai?? You are scared of your career?? Some one lost their life .

Maan : Geet, why don't you understand?? She is now no more ,but we all are still alive and If you continue to stand against them ,I'm sure those people will ruin us and it's true ,we all are till alive Geet and why are we pushing ourself into the trouble?? Think practically!!

Geet: Maan tumhe hua kya hai?? Why are you ppl scared??

Maan : Geet because we know the truth ,they'll not let you ruin them easily. It's not possible for you to change things ,in sabke chakkar mein hum sabki Zindagi barbaad ho sakti hai

Yash : Haan Geet, I agree with Maan , tumhe is case se peeche hanta hi hoga, for our sake!! Otherwise you'll be the reason for our loss.

Geet: Just stop it guys ,I never knew that you people are such cowards!! Main peche nahi hatungi !!!!

Maan : Ok then Geet , to phir hamaari baat bhi sun lo ,tum apni zid par adi raho and don't expect anything from us Geet.

Geet :Maan listen to me!! Naveen tum toh meri baat suno!!

Naveen : Kya sunoon Geet?? Tumhe pata bhi hai ,how many threatening calls do we get every day.

Yash : yeah and still you don't care!!

Everyone left from there leaving Geet alone Tears were formed in her eyes ,she couldn't believe that none of her friends was ready to support her ,everyone left her . She suddenly started to feel so lonely and instable as if someone broke her back bone.She stood there alone on the road waiting for some-one to hold her hand and ensure her that there's no need for her to worry .

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***Present*****

Maan ,isn't this place beautiful !! Main yah ape pehli baar aa rahi hoon said Megha while continuously looking outside the window from her car.

Yeah..it's indeed very beautiful.

Maan you have done your engineering here only na ,so you must be very well aware of this place na...Shaadi ke baad hum yah ape ghumenge.

As you wish Megha , but usse pehle humein kahin jaana hai .

Kahaa jaana hai Maan.

Tumhe pata chal jaayega.

They both headed towards a deserted place , It was not difficult for Megha to find out that they were in a graveyard.

Maan hum yaha kyun aaye hai??

Mere saath chalo Megha.

Maan took Megha near a grave and he placed flowers .

He knelt down and touched the grave.

I'm sorry Geet. Tears started to flow from his eyes.

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Everyone left from there leaving Geet alone Tears were formed in her eyes ,she couldn't believe that none of her friends was ready to support her ,everyone left her . She suddenly started to feel so lonely and instable as if someone broke her back bone.

She stood there alone on the road waiting for some-one to hold her hand and ensure her that there's no need for her to worry .

One whole week passed but no-one of them talked to geet ,even if she tried to talk to them , but one morning they got to hear a news that shook all of them badly.

Geet was found lying in the pool of blood near the college gate. They all got the news and ran near the spot but couldn't find her ,police already took her body the next day.She was no more.

No-one amongst them was ready to believe the fact that their Geet was no more and her death came as a news to them.

Maan fell on his knees ,we killed her..other than that he didn't utter a single word.

None of them talked to her for one whole week , all of their lives became so silent and they never expected this hurricane of that deadly silence.

They were not with her ,when she needed all of them badly..May be it wouldn't have happened if they wouldn't have left her alone.

Suddenly the whole world changed for them , there was a day where they only knew one word , enjoy ,have fun ...was it a dream ,so beautiful , few weeks ago everything was perfect , bright colours left a musical effect on them but suddenly everything changed the dream came to end ,they came to the reality where bright colour reminded them of blood ,dry blood.

None of them knew what happened with her for last one week ,what all she had to face before losing her breathe.

None what was happening with her throughout the week ,the on;y thing they all knew was that she is no-more . She left everyone permanently.

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Maan opened his eyes , He looked at Megha, she was a very good friend of

mine. Megha but I wasn't a good friend of hers, I was a coward ,who was even

scared tohold his friend's hand and walk with her.

No matter how brave I become ,no matter how strong I become , no matter how

many lives I change ,I can never call myself a good friend , never because once

''I was a coward''.

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P.S : I'm so sorry If I disappointed all of you ,as few of you were expecting a maaneet ending , but I couldn't give it as this was the story I thought of .

I know I'm gonna get a lot of jhootis from you all ...

I'm still waiting for your comments!!! So in case if there's anyone who liked the update , I would like to share the song which made me write this ...you can just hear to this song from gulaal,which made me write this part.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jLWqR1U1jYM

Edited by World-of-Dreams - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
oh god..!
i m crying badly.. Sumwhere in my heart i thot dat geet was no more in ds os..
but wat happened to her really?
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
awesome update
continue soon
thanks 4 the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
Nice update
Felt very sad for geet😭

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Posted: 13 years ago
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u broke my heart into million pieces
my heart is beating painfully
n i m crying badly
feeling bad for geet
but i loved it very much
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
luvd da update relii emotional
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very emotional dear but very realistic too...loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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omg :(
dat is soo sad
but still an amazing os

harneet <3
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Posted: 13 years ago
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namru...i am go to kill u...
u always do this , either u go for non-maneet ending or kill someone...yahan toh donon ki kasar poori kardi...😭

the OS was awesome but made me melancholic...cant say much as i am feeling very low now😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Such an emotional part..
Very well thought...

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