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kkiddoo

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Posted: 13 years ago

#601

Originally posted by: sona-rai

🤣edit ker diya hai😳waisay tujhay phir bhi samajh too agayai thi na🤣🤣

😛 yaa dear i did understood it after all i know u as a friend 😛

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arpitaji

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Posted: 13 years ago

#602

Sona dear next part post soon na 😉

(sorry dear can't participate as not even finding time for my FFs)

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sona rai

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: arpitaji
Sona dear next part post soon na 😉

(sorry dear can't participate as not even finding time for my FFs)

😡today i'm thinking of send pm to u that arpita write next part but see madam is BUSY😡😆

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sona rai

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Posted: 13 years ago

#604

Originally posted by: ruhakhan
liked it do update soon

thanks yar😃

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sona rai

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Posted: 13 years ago

#605

Originally posted by: impoojaverma
awsome

thanks yar😃

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arpitaji

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Posted: 13 years ago

#606

Originally posted by: sona-rai

😡today i'm thinking of send pm to u that arpita write next part but see madam is BUSY😡😆

Waise i do wanna write the part where she comes to know, especially how she comes to know...

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sdlife19

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Posted: 13 years ago

#607

loved it..

like the way geet talked to maan

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kkiddoo

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Posted: 13 years ago

#608

Originally posted by: arpitaji

Waise i do wanna write the part where she comes to know, especially how she comes to know...

wow so who is writing the next part 😉

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sona rai

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Posted: 13 years ago

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PART 18

KC NEW DEHLI

adi knocked on maan's cabin door

maan;;;;;;;;; yes

adi;;;;;;;;; sir u called me

maan;;;;;;;; yes adi bring me the file of land i bought from HANDA'S

adi;;;;;;;;;ok sir

adi left cabin and maan was lost in his own thaughts

after 10 min adi came again with papers and handed file to maan.

maan;;;;;;; ok adi i have to go some where u take care of party arrangements.

adi;;;;;;; yes sir.

maan went to mittal's house in new dehli.

in his way he called geet but geet is not attending her phn.

MITTAL HOUSE NEW DEHLI

servent came to inform geet about some guests wants to meet her.

she came down but shocked to see BRIJ and DARJI in her lawn with MAHESH THAKRAL one she knows b'cause he's also doing some work with yash.geet composed herself and walked towards them

geet;;;;;;;;;;;;;hi mr thakral pleasure meeting u here in dehli

mahesh;;;;;;;;;;;;;; geet betay how r u actually i'm very happy to know that u r doing this project urself.

during this brij and darji was shocked to see geet in front of them and suddenly darji shouted in anger

GEETTT

geet teasingly smiled and said

excuse me why r u shouting my name mahesh uncle may i know them?

mahesh;;;;;;;;;;; was little embaressed and tense said MR HANDA she's GEET MITTAL i told u na and geet he's MR HANDA and his son BRIJ

darji;;;;;;;;;;; magar yeh geet mittal nahi geet h

but geet cut him between and said

MR HANDA i'm GEET MITTAL and i dont want to insult u in my house b'cause u r here with mahesh uncle so plz can u tell me why u r here in MY HOUSE

mahesh;;;;;;;;;;geet actually i brought them here i want them to work in ur project as TRANSPORT SUPPLIERS

geet;;;;;;;;;;;;; i'm sorry mahesh uncle its not possible i want to do work as i wana do and i don't like them at all so i'm not giving them any work in my project...geet said with teasing smile and brij face was red with anger but he's not capable of doing any thing here b'cause she is GEET MITTAL.he feels so helpless

darji;;;;;;;;;;mahesh hum chaltay hain hamari itni bezati ajj tak kabhi nahi hui.

geet;;;;;;;;;;;;;; MR HANDA izat aur bezati apnay hath hi hoti hai hamaray karam tay kertay hain ke anay wali nasal(generation)hamay IZAT de gi ya nahi.

darji and brij went from there and confused mahesh also left with them.

geet feel so bad she needs someone's shoulder to cry but there is no one she can TRUST.

she was crying alone not aware of MAAN who's standing behind her.

(plz ignor geets sindoor and mangalsutar😆)

THE END

precap;;;;;;

no precap actually arpita wants to write about MAAN'S TORTURE😆

Edited by sona-rai - 13 years ago