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abinash079

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Posted: 13 years ago

#351

awesome update
loved it
maan derserves it i think he deserves much more than this he should not get any love from his close ones he should be treated like a filth for what he did to an innocent girl
this is worst than rap*** a girl as this is trashing her dignity infront of whole world and it is very difficult to come out of this situation

i m more angry on geet's family her own parents didnt support her this shows that they didnt understand their own child i really feel very pity on them they surely doesnt deserve to be called as her parents an i dont want geet to forgive her family 😡
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sona rai

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Posted: 13 years ago

#352

zoha sweety HAPPY BIRTHDAY .

friends i'm dedicating this update to my dear friend zoha.

PART 12

AFTER 1 YEAR...

a women stading near window of her well decorated office in LONDON she's thinking about her life that make her GEET MITAL from GEET HANDA ...yes after that night she's no more HANDA now she's MISS MITAL yes a daughter of millionair YASH MITAL ...

FLASH BACK...

rep;;;;; so geet hanad au spend night with mr maan singh khurana for money or u r his girl friend.

2 rep;;;;;;;;;;;;;; or only ONE NIGHT STAND

geet was shocked and horrified seeing newspaper and tv reporters there and asking her q's she was sure that there's a missunderstanding

GEET(S.T)maan maan kahan hai yeh kya hogaya babaji main too raat ko maan ke sath thi phir mujhay chakar aya aur abb yeh sab kya ho raha hai zaror maan ne meri help ki hogi but abb woh kahan hai...(end of s.t)

geet tried to call maan but he did'nt recieve her calls and after some time his mobile was unreachable.

geet reached her home but shocked to see brij on main gate with murderous looks

GEEETTT he shouted

tu kahan gayai thi?

geet;;;;;; woh main veerji main

brij...chup ker ja tu ne khandan ki izat mati main mila di

geet;;;;;;; nahi veerji main

brij;;;;;;;;dragged geet and throw her on the road and said ja apnay us ashiq ke pass jis ke sath raat guzar ker ayai hai ajj se hamaray liye tu mar gayai and brij clossed the gate of handa house.

GEET was shocked firstly and then ran towards door and shouted plzzz veerji maa buaji mainay aisa khuch nahi kiya plzzz meri baat sun lo plzzz but there's no answer from inside and after some time she's exausted and dragged herself on the road after sometime she sat on a rock and start crying.

suddenly a car stopped in front of her and someone shouts GEETTT

geet was starteled to see MEERA there

meera was shocked to see geet in that condition...

(flashback ends)

GEET GEET a man called geet again

geet comes out of her past and answered ya abhi

wooo geet wat happened yar i called ur name many time but no responce wat happened sweety?

geet;;;;; no abhi it's ok actually i was thinking .

abhi;;;;ok come to confrence hall dad was calling us there for some special project.

geet;;;;ok lets go.

THE END

Edited by sona-rai - 13 years ago

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sona rai

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Posted: 13 years ago

#353

phewww i've UPDATED AGAIN 😆

and the next update pic

maan torturing himself😉😭😆

Edited by sona-rai - 13 years ago

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abinash079

@abinash079

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Posted: 13 years ago

#354

awesome update
no amount of punishment is enough for maan😡
😡

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Remya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#355

omg deepu..
i luvd that twist... This s wat i expected..
Loved it a lot...

@sona...
Part was so good...geet vanished from their lives...
and maan's new realization...
I think nw the story needs a leap...

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sona rai

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Posted: 13 years ago

#356

Originally posted by: abinash079
awesome update
no amount of punishment is enough for maan😡
😡

thanks yar

yes maan's gona suffer a lot😉waiti for next updates😆

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Remya

@Remya_Pillai

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Posted: 13 years ago

#357

hey sona..
Loved the update.. and thanx for the pm..
So who s Mr.Mittal?meera's dad?
Loved this present situation..
So i hope ds new special project s frm MSK...

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sona rai

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Posted: 13 years ago

#358

Originally posted by: Remya_Pillai
hey sona..
Loved the update.. and thanx for the pm..
So who s Mr.Mittal?meera's dad?
Loved this present situation..
So i hope ds new special project s frm MSK...

😆thanks yar😆

sooo keep guesing who's who😉 but 1 thing is sure i'll gona make maan suffer a lottt😭😆

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kkiddoo

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Posted: 13 years ago

#359

amazing update guys i sooo loved it sona i want more update from u i so love u r writing and dear when r u going to get geet back in the ff me just can't imagine what would u write for her entry in maan's life again 😉

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kkiddoo

@kkiddoo

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Posted: 13 years ago

#360

amazing update sona i haven't saw that u updated part 12 also but when i saw remaya comment on top of mine i was confuse reading her comment so just the pages and found u updated next part also + that its zoha's birthday wow i didn't knew about it 🤗 for telling 😉

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