'Devil's Desire' Thrd5.New Note Pg150 - Page 44

Originally posted by: drrose31

ohhh

my treat is here

comments by my rose

muah dear

loved the comment as usual

better than my update😳

Originally posted by: aziza_ahmed

annie the writter ???
haan??

Originally posted by: drrose31

hmm... so geet is trapped badly for 6 months...poor her she can't escape now...

even she gets some kind of false/ pretending BF then also who knows devil will leave his desire...

ahan...heer is very much samajhdaar and mature...😆

what an idea...👏

but i was thinking about that uday poor...will he be standing infront of THE MSK?????

guess not...

dev to patli gali se he nikal gaya tha ye to khud sher k muun me hath marne chala hai...

that too if geet told him k just pretend he karna hai and no touching...

so geet remembered what maan said I won't allow you to let someone lust on you with your approval. And don't compel me to do something you may regret later.

Just don't let anyone touch you..!

If someone touched me without my will..?

Then I will wipe off his existence from the face of this damn earth.

He won't be able to live long enough to lust for you

I won't let him breath in the same air you have passed.

so geet was well aware what can this devil do ... with or without her consent...😭

geet went to the devil's farm house with that poor uday to show the devil that she was in love...oh geet devil is way too smart to know your false lover...😆

if i go to that desire lines of the devil then this comment will be longer ...so skipping that one

but will quote your line...Yes this desire is my destroyer..!

yest it would destroy me..

yest it is destroying me but yet this very desire is my creator...👏 👏

loved the last line to the core...muah muah muahhh...

your lines were wow...👏 👏

this desire is my creator

but yet it is my very destroyer

making me feel alive

yet killing something inside

awesome...👏 👏 👏

maan is too much...she was screaming and pleading for help and that devil was putting conditions after conditions...😆

and then geet's thoughts I can't decide what is more dangerous, deadly water or the devil beside her. I even can't decide what is more poisonous, this snake or my devil..!!!!!!!!!!!!!

did she just call him MY devil??????

wondering will she seduce him??????? naah plzzz kuch to leniency de do maan?????😆

continue soon

love rose😉

Originally posted by: ritzy09

Maan is what he is but don't know why Geet doesn't come across as an intelligent girl or the one with high morals either.

ok ok I know maybe I am over reacting but ofr me last part was lacking somewhere. First of all he is able to make a fool of her so easily. Secondly is she really dumb. He said he won't save her and she believes it. Just now did he not say that she was his desire. Atleast she can retort that what kind of a desire she is if he just lets go of her?

Also, just now she said she preferes death over him...and now she is agreeing to kiss him and seduce him? Fear of life...I agree but if this is agame sometime you have to bluff too. He bluffs all the time and she hasn't learned anything from him

Sorry Annie for such a long rant...but today I did not get any sympathy for her situation. To some extent she herself is responsible for it.

Awesome update though...i guess that is exactly what you wanted to portray here...there are multiple shades of grey here from both the sides

Originally posted by: Sushmacholke

CONGO ANNIE CONGO ANNIE ,500 LIKES YIPPIE ME TOO JUMPIN IN JOY ,
Add +5 my frenz r silent readers they dnt hav acount in if.
Update was fantastic , lines were complicated yet so meaningfull i love this devil so much ,ws thnkn wat if uday huggd frm frnt wink wink ..
What an stake maan has put up kiss+seduce ,does she have to do sumthng maan toh waise hi seduce hojata hai geet ko dekh ke ,
Next wud be 18+ i think me waitngz so eagerly
Annie ab Ss bhi nahi hai PLEASE YAR EK UPDATE SE HUMARA KYA HOGA RAHEM KARO HUMPAR YAR...BONUS PLZ...

Originally posted by: $ara_$hachi

haye, mein mar jawan anshru - kya update tha

i totally love this Maneet - Geet is too stubborn to accept anything (let it be the reality too, as told by him) and Maan is too straight forward for anything
heer, idea was nice but you still don't know this devil ... he is indeed a scan machine in himself ... poor uday, gaya kaam se ... i love the was you write "her devil" ... Maan, the master mind ... dono too much hai ... god, Geet usko mana mat kiya karo sweetie - kiss ke saath saath "seducing" bhi ... ab kya hoga ??? ... who will win - Geet, Maan, cliff, snake or anshru - who will bring the twist ... btw, phir latka diya na

do cont soon & do PM me

Originally posted by: PariNain

oops

Panga with Devil is not Changa dear Geet

Bechara uday

Kal tak acha bhala hansta basta tha par aaj

🤣 Bechara

aur Geet sweeto have to chose less danger for her

u knw what Ainee I want to see the re action of devil when she get hurt

really I just wabt to knw wat she meant to him

nice update