SURROGATE RELATIONS # 7 imp note on Pg143(15/6) - Page 57

chechiiisss happy easter...when are you coming here??? varalleee, oru maathiri raksha illaandu choooda ivide...ningal enkilum rakshapedu😆

Hey that was too short.. 😕 but a nice one..😊

nice part continue sooon waiting

PART 49

my sincere apologies to every medical person who may find the update too bizarre and OTT😆😆

50. Shona

Sometimes fate makes a joke of all your efforts and presents you with the exact situation you wanted to avoid. Geet went into preterm labour in spite of all the care they took to avoid the same.

Geet was happy to have Sameera's company when Maan had gone to attend a conference in XY International and Dadi and Rudr had to go elsewhere too. She had a doubt that the visit was planned either by Maan or Rudr so that she wouldn't be alone. But she didn't complain as it gave her an opportunity to crib about Maan to their friend and drill her about the lack of progress in her romance with Rudr.

"Okay, I agree that you are concerned about me. But I can't understand why it is difficult to make it official that you are a couple. I feel so bad that you have to hold back on your happiness for me."

"You don't know how helpless we all felt when you went missing and then the risk it put on your life, no we are not going to risk any new adventures from you."

"But this is happy event, a good excitement, nothing will happen!" she patted her stomach. "We love to be happy."

"Happiness or otherwise, we are not going to risk having you hyper." She continued while Geet tried to show her objection shaking her head in negation. "Come on Geet , are you telling me you will sit somewhere quietly and just watch the preparation of Rudr's marriage?" Geet pouted.

"Besides I am too busy with the summer collection, heard Mandakini' is going to bring out theirs with some Bollywood star as their star model."

"Really? Are you also thinking something similar?" Geet asked concerned.

"Now don't you start worrying about that." Sam said quickly.

"I am not that fragile, you know!" Geet complained. "I wonder why everybody likes to consider me an invalid. I am not that only one who has become pregnant in this world! You should see how Maan acts these days!" she rolled her eyes. Then sighed, " I just can imagine how he will be with Shona!"

"Shona?" Sameera quirked her eyebrow. "So have you given up on Sonu?"

"I think this one is Shona," she rubbed her stomach indulgently. "Actually I have been thinking so for some time now, but I am not going to accept that when Maan is around." She laughed and Sameera joined in.

The phone rang and Geet gave a happy sigh. "That must be Maan, to check on us. I left my moble in the other room." She started to go to the phone but Sam stopped her.

"You sit here, I will bring it over."

"I am allowed to walk you know..."

"But I can do that faster!"

As Sam moved away towards the phone, Rudr entered the room in haste.

"Look who is here!" Geet teased. "Finished your work fast to meet my soon ..to ..be bhabhi?"

"Sameera is still here?" he looked beyond Geet to see Sam walking towards Geet with the phone.

"Hi Rudr," Sam smiled in welcome. "I thought I would take you more time to..." she could see the agitation in him, "Is everything alright?"

Rudr shook his head slightly in warning casting a quick glance towards Geet, "I managed to finish my meeting fast." He sat down with Geet who offered him the fruits in the plate. He hesitated before taking a piece of apple.

"Who was it Sam?" Geet asked taking the phone.

"Got disconnected before I could get the person on line." She could feel something was wrong, Rudr's looked too tense.

"Is Dadi back?"

"No bhaiyya , but I think she will be soon. So if you want to go somewhere with Sameera you can." She said cheekily.

"Now why should I do that?" he asked with artificial gaiety. " I just came sooner so that I could spend more time with my Chotu and Jr."

"Yeah, yeah I know..."

The phone rang again. "Hello.." Geet answered.

"Who is it? Maan?" Rudr asked expectantly.

"It didn't connect properly. Must be Maan, because he couldn't reach me on the mobile. It is in the other room charging... Now I'm in for a lecture, once he is back..."

"Shall I get your mobile for you?"

"No bhaiya, you be with my honewali bhabhi..let me hear my earful in peace." She moved towards her room.

"I need to talk with him too .. let me have a word with him before you disconnect, ok chotu?"

"Teek hai bhaiya..." she called over her shoulder

Once Geet was out of sight Sam moved to sit with him, "now tell me what is worrying you."

"There has been a series of explosion in and around the area where Maan's meeting was being held. I just caught in in the news at Pran's place." Sam gripped his hand in horror too scared even to speak. "The details of the casualties are still not completely known. I've asked Pran to contact me when he gets more information. I am going there myself but before that I wanted to check on Chotu... Will you stay with her until Dadi comes."

"OF course... I want to make sure Maan is unhurt. But wait until you talk to Geet , Maan might be calling to let her know all is well." Her voice was a prayer willing herself to believe what she said to be true.

"Yes, I don't want to give her unnecessary tensions."

They saw Geet walking in and went silent, "Sorry bhaiyya, it wasn't Maan. I think the meeting is taking longer than expected. There is just one missed call that too a long time back. But Adi has called, let me just check..."

She placed the call, "Hello, Adi..."

She listened to the answer... "What? What explosion?" she turned pale as she listened, her voice a whisper of panic " ... Maan..." she staggered bumping into the chair.

"Geet..."

"Chotu ..." Sam and Rudr called out.

"No...not Maan..not...Maan..." she cut the call and frantically tried to call Maan's cell. She barely noticed Sameera and Rudr who stood by her side, her hands shaking in fear. Her cell dropped to the floor and she bend to pick it up, ignoring the discomfort it caused. Sam drew in a quick breath, "Geet ...careful..."

"I need to talk to Maan..." she said, nothing else was significant. "It's not connecting... I ... I need ...to..." she kept trying muttering to herself, shivering, unaware of the concerned look exchanged between Rudr and Sam. "There is some problem with the signal...may be Maan's phone's battery is down..." Her heart hammered away and she could feel the nausea threatening. She swayed on he feet. Rudr moved to circle her shoulder with his arm and to pull her closer to him. She tried to shake him away, still in her effort to call Maan.

"Chotu..." he gently but forcefully pushed her towards the recliner. "You will make yourself sick...what will Maan say then?" he smoothed the hair of her forehead.

"But Maan...he didn't call...been so long..."she looked at him with dazed eyes. "He would have called by now..."

"The signals must be jammed... I will go and find out...but promise me you will try to calm yourself."

She nodded jerkily, trying to pull herself back for the baby and was about to take the glass of water Sam held when she saw Dadi.

"Dadi..." she pushed herself up suddenly. "Maan..." She cried unable to complete the sentence as a sharp stabbing pain stole her breath away and she doubled over in pain.

"What is it?" Sameera, exclaimed dropping to her knees before Geet.

"Pain..."she managed to gasp out as another pain sliced thru her. Fear curled into her, she shouldn't be having this. Something was wrong, there was still weeks to go before the baby was due.

"Geet...beti..." she heard Dadi's frantic call as another shooting pain ripped thru her. She couldn't be losing their baby.

"Maan..." she cried, scared that she might not see him again.

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She rode the pain, moaning in agony, forgetting all about the breathing exercises that the birthing classes had taught. They were talking about shifting her to the theatre. "No..."she protested feebly, not before she saw Maan. Was it an illusion or had Dadi said he was safe, that Maan was coming. If anything happened...she wanted that last glimpse of him ...he was the strength that made her go on...

Panic rose in waves as another wrenching pain tightened like manacles. She needed to remind Maan of his promise, his promise to let her go, if it came to that. But not before she saw him...

"Mrs. Khurana..." the urgent plea, caught her on the edge of the surreal world she was fighting to keep off.

"That is it... we need to shift her to the theatre. Nurse!"

She wanted to protest she would go anywhere once she saw him.

Then she felt him near as another contraction hit her. She closed her eyes trying to hold back her moan, without success, she didn't wish him to see her this way.

"Mishty..." his voice was hoarse with her pain.

"Maan .." she wanted to remind him to choose Shona... but his eyes held such pain such fear that she wanted to comfort him. The vision of him renewed her energy. "Have your Shona this time... but next time it's Sonu, promise?"

Maan paced the corridor, pushing away the fear that threatened to tighten it's hold . He held himself responsible for the condition she was in.what a day he had chosen to tease her by not calling even once. The meeting had gotten cancelled at the last moment and then when he had decided to surprise Geet , he got the call from the site supervisor regarding the theft and he got caught up in that matter. Between the police station and the questionings hemissed his regular call. then decided to tease her by not calling and soothe her sulking with a carton full of icecream and gulab jamun. Then when he finally managed to reach KM after getting caught up in the traffic blockades, he was informed by an upset Nakul that Geet was taken to hospital.

He would never forget the sight of her as he was allowed inside the room she was in. How could one endure such pain and still willingly put herself thru it again? He knew what she trying to do... Soothe him even while she was in pain, even when she was terrified of what was happening... His mishty... Her words echoed the promise she had given...not to let go...to fight to survive against odds... he was sure she would keep her promise. Yet that didn't prevent him from standing in front of the god's idol with folded hands, requesting his aid to help Geet and their child.

A doctor appeared from the theatre and he saw Dadi stand up to look at her expectantly.

"Mr. Khurana? Congratulations! You have a beautiful daughter." He closed his eyes in a quick thankful prayer.

"But you will have to wait for sometime before you see her, as she is in NICU." The doctor continued.

"Geet? How is my wife?"

"The gynacs are still with her. It's been a bit difficult for her." She gave an apologetic look.

He heard Dadi draw in a deep breath as if holding back a sob.

Please babaji...let her ..keep her safe... Don't take her away from me... I promise never to put her thru this again... I promise to cherish her...

"She will make it Maan. You know chotu..she is a fighter." Rudr's hand gripped his shoulder. "she won't give up, not when she loves you so much!"

He let that reassurance and Geet's promise to him echo in his mind as he waited for more news. His thoughts were always with her even when they were allowed to see the baby thru the windows of the NIC. The baby looked so tiny and helpless ..so fragile. How would she survive without her mother? How would he survive without her mother? A lone tear slipped past his eyes.

"Mr. Khurana," he saw one of the junior nurse standing by his side. "Mrs. Khurana is doing fine. She is in the recovery room now."

He bowed his head in gratitude, his fore head touching the cool pane of the glass. Amidst the sighs of relief, he looked at his daughter again, with unburdened heart. He saw his daughter lifting her tiny arm as if sharing and saluting his elation.

PART 51

hope i haven't overdone it😳...and did i please u gals by complying with Maan's wish?
don't feel bad if i don't reply this time...got to pack the bags...off to kerala 2morrow..did i manage to leave u satisfied with a long update...u will let me know, na? with long comments😉...
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awsome one chechi...so it is shona this tym😊 loved it dear...hope you have a great tym here

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