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Posted: 13 years ago
part 11 i and ii
awesome...
oh Geet is too good...
Maan ki bolti band kardi...
very good...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
the fight went all emotional in the end

nice to see she agreed to help
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update..loved geet's dialogues...hope maan will understand that rehaan misses his mom..
cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Updating but giv me at least 8-10 pages
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Jass.KN

Updating but giv me at least 8-10 pages


tu update to de phir dekhna... chalo chalo jaldi karo...
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Chapter 12


Geet prepared food for Rehaan becoz she had to take it with her.Around 1:25 she reached school.Where Maan was already waiting for Rehaan n Geet too.He came toward her finding she was out of car now.

Maan: Ms Handa how r u ? (He had forgotten what had happened some where he thinks Geet was rite so he was very normal)

Geet: I m fine...yeh Rehaan k liye (handing over tiffin to Maan she said)

Maan: Thanx Ms Handa

Geet: Plz Mr Khuraana don say this again.Need not to b formal

Maan: okey..need not b formal...U can ask me Maan

Geet: Ji ? (she was amazed how he had been changed in hours)

Maan: Ji

Geet:Okey so don ask me Miss Handa also jst Geet (she flashed a smile)

Maan: okey Geet jaisa aap kahe

Geet: Aap nahi tum...aap main keh sakti hu..aap mujhe se badde hai.

Maan: Main badda hu apne..I mean tumne yeh estimate kaise laga liya...(he placed his one hand on waist)

Geet: Its not a big deal.Rehaan 5 years ka hai as all kg kids r.Yahan tak mujhe pata hai u r in this business for 10 years to its clear aap 35 to 40 k to hongay he (she teased )


Maan: No No Geet aap oh I mean tum estimate sahi...(before he could complete Geet stops)

Geet: I m rite ? (she giggled)


Maan: Miss Handa is main aap haar gayi ..


Geet: Miss Handa...per main kaise haar gayi


Maan: Miss Handa..kyo main tumhare aur tumhari beti jaise intelligent nahi...jo ek baar sabh yaad ho jaaye..trailer to maine first day he dekh liya tha...per apko dekh kar pata chal gaya why she is such ? (he raised his brows thinking about Mannat n then Geet)


Geet: Meri Beti apka matlab wo apko jhgada (she messes) karne wali lagti hai .?


Maan: No no I jst wanna say my son is a Gentleman.


Geet: Oh Mr Khuraana let it go I can understand what u wanna say but no more fight plz


Maan: Even me don wanna fight..waise I m 30-40 nahi 50 ka

hu (he said folding his arms)


Geet: Oh per apke in kaale baalon(black hair) ka raaz kya hai..which brand u use (she teased )


Both stared each other for some time n then burst in laughter.


Maan: Mere black hair ka raaz apne cosmetologist se push kar bata sakta hu..who is my only stylist also from last 29 years or I mean since my birth


Geet: Aap janam se he aise hai...mera matlaab from my bith u started to wear suits..cut ur hair..or hav stubble (she winked hiding her face with her one hand not to show him )


Maan: Kar lijiye mazaak aab keh kya sakta hu kush kaha to fir se shuru ho jaayegi (he mumbled )


Geet: Jo kehna hai keh lijiye I don mind...waise school bell has been rung challe (she flashed a smile )


Maan: Sure (Maan first placed tiffin at back seat of car..locking it followed Geet to school gate)


First attendant handed over Rehaan to Maan n then Mannat to Geet.Maan waited for Geet n Mannat.


Maan: He is Rehaan Geet..Mannat se to main mil he chukka hu..met my son


Geet: To aap hai Rehaan (looking at Rehaan Geet bent on her knees)


Rehaan: aap kon


Maan : Rehaan yeh Mannat ki momi hai..bahut azeeb hai Rehaan apko by face nahi jaanta


Rehaan: Aap Mannat ki Mommi ho meri nahi (he was much sad)


Geet: Beta main Mannat ki momi hu per aap aisa kyo keh rahe hai main apki momi nahi..apki momi to aur hai na (she was surprised why he said so...n cupped his face)


Mannat: Momi ...Rehaan ki Momi nahi hai to humne kaha tha k jo Mannat ki momi hai wo Rehaan ki bhi hai ..ho na (she said with much hop)


Maan n Geet both understood why Rehaan said so.Poor creature missing his mother


Geet: Ha beta Mannat ki momi apki momi..agar aap mujhe momi kehna chahte ho aap keh sakte ho( she hugged him tightly with tear filled eyes)


Mannat: Momi Rehaan k pass to aab momi bhi hai..per Mannat k Pass Papa nahi hai..Rehaan ne humse paka kaha tha Mannat ki Momi Rehaan ki momi aur Rehaan k Papa Mannat k 'Mere Papa Maan hai ' (she made pity face in hop to get same response from Maan)


Maan:'Mannat k 'Mere Papa Maan'


Geet: Beta he is uncle


Mannat: No he is Papa...Mannat k 'Mere Papa Maan'9she yelled to make them understand )

Geet: Mannat tum to hamara keh kar bolti ho to aab aise kyo bol rahi ho mere..

Mannat: Rehaan ne bola agar Mannat kahe 'Hamare Papa Maan' to uska meaning hai wp Rehaan k bhi aur Mannat k bhi Papa hai...hamare Papa to tabhi kehte hai jab brother sister ho Rehaan k real wale papa aur hai Mannat k aur hai isliye Rehaan k bhi wo 'Mere Papa Maan 'hai aur Mannat k bhi but real waale nahi


Both were surprised how both kids hav created their own assumptions.For Geet it was easy to accept this to b mother But for Maan it was not easy.


Maan try to distract Mannat. Saying he had to attend an urgent meeting n he left taking Rehaan with out answering Mannat .


Mannat: Momi aap Rehaan ki 'Meri Momi Geet' ho to Rehaan k 'Mere Papa Maan' ..Mannat k 'Mere Papa Maan' kyo nahi hai (poor girl rubbed her tear filled eyes)


Geet: Beta he is not ur Papa jaise main sirf apki momi hu...ha Rehaan apki mujhe momi kahta hai to main real wali momi to apki he hu..per it is not okey na k aap Rehaan k Papa ko force karo to b ur Papa


Mannat: TO fir Rehaan bhi apko momi nahi kahega


Geet: No its not good isme Rehaan ka kya kassor.Promise me aap Rehaan ko apki momi ko momi kehne dengi..Uncle bhi apse pyar karegay butr beta don force him to b ur Papa


Mannat: But momi (she was sobbing)


Geet: Dekho apki momi kon hai 'apki Nani' rite but mausi bhi humse kitna lov karti hai per apki momi unko mausi kehti hai na(she hugged her )


Mannat: Ha


Geet: waise he uncle apse pyar kare-gay but its not possible k aap unko Papa kaho...


Mannat: Per momi 'Mere Papa Maan' kyo nahi hai(she rubbed her head to Geet's neck)


Geet: Mannat ab royo mat Momi ne apke liye special banaya hai chale aab


Mannat: okey

Geet lifted her n she put her arms around Geet's neck.Both mother n daughter had tears.As usual Mannat understood she hurt her mother.So she was quite now.But Geet she was thinking 'is Mannat such big now to question her about her father or she was gonna face it soon'


She placed Mannat at back seat with her where driver was waiting

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Hopes in that lil girlz eyes disturbed Maan .This was first time twice in a day he experienced totally different situations.A person who has no word 'emotions' in his dictionary.He was thinking looking at Rehaan who was eating Kachodi made by Geet with very less spices especially for Rehaan

Rehaan noticed his father sad.He stopped eating n came to him.

Rehaan: Papa aap sad hai (standing on sofa he said )

Maan: No Rehaan I m not sad.(taking him in his lap said)

Rehaan: Papa I know u r sad...Mannat ne apko Papa kaha na...aur Rehaan ko pata hai aap mujhe se kitna pya rkarte ho isliye koi bhi aur apko Papa nahi keh sakta (he gav same explanation which Maan was thinking about question Rehaan asked )

Maan: Rehaan beta sabke Papa alag hotay hai aur Mama bhi jaise Mannat ki Momi ne apko momi kehne diya beta wo alag baat hai per wo apki real Momi nahi hai...waise he main sirf apka Papa hu..okey tumhare friend Samar k Papa nahi hai per iska matlab main to uska Papa nahi hu na (hugging son he said )
Rehaan: Per Papa Samar knows who was his Papa usko pata hai wo bhagwaan ji k pass hai..per Mannat ko to apne Papa ka name bhi nahi pata aur wo bhagwaan ji k pass hai yeh bhi nahi pata (cupping his father's face he said)

Maan: Rehaan let it go son...main Mannat ko bhi wiase he pyar karunga jaise tumko..becoz her momi loves u na..but beta I m not her Papa.

Rehaan: okey per jab Mannat ko koi kush kahega to aap fight karogay na uske liye aur usko ice cream aur pizza k liye bhi le kar jaa-o-gay na

Maan: Okey as u wish (he was relived at least Rehaan was ready for it ..but his son he is not a stubborn child...Maan said he accepted)

Both Maan n Geet were in dilemma.How to face each other Maan he was really ashamed of his rude behavior for a five year old poor girl.Geet she was feeling bad that What Maan thinks about her.

Around 6:30 Maan got a call from Geet.

Geet: I m sorry Maan ...meri Mannat ne jo kaha mujhe nahi pata tha k wo aise (she was really upset)

Maan: No Geet but sorry to main hu...per yeh sabh itni jaldi hua mujhe kush pata he nahi challa what to say.I really hurt Mannat (he had tears but he was unaware)

Geet: Its okey Maan wo maine to is liye phone kia tha I m sending dinner for Rehaan if he needs some thing plz let me know

Maan: Okey aab main kush nahi kahunga..main Rehaan se baat karva deta hu ..aap dono k beech main nahi aata (he gav phone to Rehaan who was doing his home work )

Lil boy he was too much happy to talk with Geet .Which Dadi also noticed.Even she was also noticing change in Maan.This change was visible more n more in next few days.

Mannat she never called Maan Papa papa again.Even not talked to Geet.When ever she found any kid saying Papa to father.She jst had tears to show her pain.But poor girl always wiped her tears off

One day Rano found her sobbing in front of god.

Mannat: Bhagwaan Ji Rehaan ne kaha Mannat uske Papa ko Papa keh sakti hai..per unko acha nahi laga.

She continues

Mannat: Per Bhagwaan ji Mannat k papa kahan hai..kya wo apke pass hai...bolo na

Rano's eyes got wet.She hugged her from behind

Rano: Mannat aab aap mat rona...apko Papa chahea.

Mannat turned around.

Mannat: Nani Mumma apko pata hai Mannat k Papa kaha hai (she had lots of hopes in her broad eyes)

Rano: Beta apki Nani apko Papa la kar dengi promise..but don tell ur mommi (wiping her tears she said0

Mannat: sachi..fir hum nahi bolte momi se ..unko rona aa jaata hai agar Mannat unse pushti hai

Rano: Ha beta na aab apki ma roye gi aur na aap.bahut ho gaya (she lifted her up n moved out from Mandir )


hop u ll lik.If yes plz let me know.

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Jass


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Edited by Jass.KN - 13 years ago
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