MAANEET FF- LOVING LAMENTS- LST PT PG 96/ 12 MARCH

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Remya

@Remya_Pillai

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#271

That was so cute update..
Awesum one..

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sanu3108

@sanu3108

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#272

oh woow /. that was an amazing journey .. i will surely miss this FF .. but u have done full justice to this FF ... thank u sooo much for writing this ...

love u

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tamannA

@tamanna1391

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#273

me going to miss it

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abinash079

@abinash079

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#274

awesome update
loved the epilogue

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seemamary

@seemamary

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#275

Fantastic dear, m sad this FF is coming to an end.😭

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nagajyothi

@_Jyothi_

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#276

awesome ff...
loved it...
superb ending... wow they 3 r soo good...
happy ending... will surely miss this ff...
come up with new one...

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maaneet5

@maaneet5

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#277

hey zoha aaj hi last part dedi k

nice update dear well geet plaing with mangalsutra was nice osum para

She giggled but soon he starts kissing her lips.. I never thought you would change.. He chuckled nibbling her neck.. I have to.. Tumhe wapas lane k liye kuch bhi kar sakta hu.. She smiles closing her eyes when a light moan escape from her lops when he start sucking her throat making her go crazy.. They stayed in each other's embrace not saying anything for a longer time just feeling each others close. When she whispered. I love you.

we miss all these

epilogue osum

nice ending

with khushi returns

khushi maan geet ki conv nice

well maan khushi ki tarah baby talks geet all happy

Maan hug geet more tightly. Mama dekho Na Khushi KO. Geet laugh bringing Khushi in her lap. Kissing her both cheek. Mama Apne dono baby ki baat sunegi. Bus.

Yay.. Both yelled hugging her kissing her either cheek. She smiles happily.]

we miss FF aot ZOHA

continue ur others FF

bye TC

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maansee

@maansee

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#278

Originally posted by: tamanna1391
me going to miss it

mee too going to miss it... beautifully written ... loved last some lines... maan repeating daughters words. and geet's answer... mama dono ki baat sunegi... a normal family talk...