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Princess DD

@Amoureux

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#321

Brilliant update... Loved reading it... and waiting for the next one to come soon 😳

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Seher

@Speechless

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#322

"Ever has it been that love knows not its own depth until the hour of separation"

Distance changed them both but still they missed eachotherWhy they are holding themselvesSneha the mails they sent are breath takingi love each and every word of the update Both are in pain and so much hurtKab melien Gy Dono don't do this Sneha That was a sady sady Partbut still waiting for them to meet and tell that they love eachother

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Krupa

@idunno

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#323

Aag dono taraf barabar laghi hai bus ab mulakat baki hai...! update soon thanks-idunno

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Abreshmina

@Abby-GC-Crazy

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#324

wht an update Sneha di...
Me totally in love with it...

U knw like Maan n Geet cudnt stop their tears after dat msg exchange...
Rlly... I rly cnt stop my tears from flowing out seeing their helplessness...
I so wish i cud unite dem ryt away..
Bt i knw u hv set their tym to unite...
N i hv faith in u..

I knew...both wnt b d same Maan n Geet to d world dat dey wer to each other.. Dey portrayed themselves as strong n cmplte... But within dey wer so incomplete...

Honestly.. I feel some of their incompleteness must hv vanished jz by listenin to each other...
I cn imagine hw beautiful a moment it must hv been 4 both of dem...

Umm.. Though fate parted their ways...
Bt d same fate sent dat msg to Maan...

I absolutely adored Maan's rply to Geet's msg.. It ws jz sooo soothing n sweet...
I cud feel his glistened eyes wen he wud hv written dat...

Ahh... Geet called him up...
It ws sucha beautiful conversation...
Hw Maan neva needed to see Geet to knw her state.. He cud jz tell hw she ws feelin inside out even if she tries to hide...
May dats y dey didn't tok 4 dis long.. Dey knew dey wud brkdwn infronta each other...
Theas ws neva hiding btw d 2 of dem..

I totally loved hw Maan consoled Geet.. N asked her to stay strong 4 him.. Of nt 4 herself...
Ofcourse Maan cnt bear his cherry brkin dwn...
I jz loved their convo...

I loved d last lines u wrote...
Dey wer vry beautiful..

Honestly i believe...
A guard distance might become
Physically separating the two dearies
But a guard distance can never become
Emotionally separating the two besties.

Its the distance
That creates a barrier
Its the distance
That makes the two cozier.

Love u Sneha di..
Muah...

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myramabin

@myramabin

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#325

i dont have words dear to tell u how beautifully u hav written this update i still crying so sorry for mistakes coz tears r blinding me o god those letters were beauti fully written that it touches ur heart also it was like missing nd longing for ghsp well done

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mysteriousmilli

@mysteriousmilli

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#326

You made me cry...😭...It's really very touchy ...and their convo...excellent dear... lovely update ...please continue soon..

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Niharika

@Niharika.Nair

Rocker

+ 9

Posted: 13 years ago

#327

I just completed reading all he parts together and have no words to describe my feelings, its too beautiful dear thank you... waiting for them to meet again

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luvraj4ever

@luvraj4ever

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#328

loved ur fic...i hope that they don't get separated...i reallly want to see them together...

cont soon

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504887

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#329

Wow!!!! Sneha Di!!! That was simply superb!!!!!👏👏👏

Loved it!!!⭐️⭐️⭐️

Nearly made me cry feeling their longing to be together, to be with each other!!!😳😳😳

Both have changed drastically trying to put up a face that they are strong against fate's decision!!!!

Geet had become so devoid of her bubbliness, emotions while Maan wasn't the teasing charmer anymore!!!!😭😭😭

Poor Geet misses Maan so much! It seems he has become her life supporting system!!!😳

The mail was so emotional!!! 😳OMG She used to write many mails but never sent them to Maan !!!😲😲

Awww She didn't want to show her weak side to him!!!😳😳

Ha ha it was accidentally sent!!!!! She cursed!!!!!😆😉

AWWW loved how Maan with all his excitement read her mail and amazed to know her inner feelings!!😳😉

His mail was soothing to her too!😃

Their convo was so emotional!!! 😳Though she put up a brave face Still he could understand her emotions and get affected by her tears!☺️ Still they blamed themselves for their situation!!!😔

But nothing changed!😃

Places changed! Attitudes changed! Environment changed! Even their work changed! Even the distance too! But their love and friendship remained as fresh and as lively as ever!!!!😳😳☺️

Loved how he consoled her to have patience and wait little more!!!!😳☺️😍

OMG they have been separate for almost one year!!!!!😲😲😲

Poor Maaneet dying to meet each other! Loved how beautifully you expressed their inner turmoil ! The way they craved to be happy and be with each other!😍

Loved how they relished each moment they spent together was superb!😳😳☺️

It was marvellous!!👍🏼

You rocked it!🥳

Cont soon!😳😍

Thnx 4 d pm!😳