Hum Tum aur Koi Nahin SS NOTE + teaser pg 23 - Page 9

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Posted: 13 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: $ara_$hachi

<font color="#660033">hey babaji, ye ladki kab meri sunegi ????
kab humien long parts milenge ????

about this, i loved to see so many FFs & threads dedicated to GC's b'day ... total amazing
but the real present by Geet was beyond explanation ... agar ye starting hai toh aagey kya hoga ????
waiting eagerly like Maan
btw, helper toh gaya ... never mess with Maan Singh Khurana or his lady love
loved the way he showed what he is capable of doing & she only belong to him

do cont soon & do PM me

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Love ur comment dear!!!
I try to make long updates but I guess I have to try harder ... Dnt wry I will make the next one extra long :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82
hey continue soon. do pm me abt the nxt update.
Edited by dh_riti - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
Hey guys!!
Sry for the delay just busy with college :(
But don't worry I have next week off so get ready for lots of updates :)
Will try to update 2morow if not then defiantly saturday !!
Thanks for all the comments guys!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84
Awesumm update..pls continue n Pm me..thnks😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
Sorry for the delay guys

here's the next part
enjoy :)

Part 8

"Maan" whined Geet

"What ...i'm just trying to show you how much i love you" said Maan making an innocent face

"I know exactly what you were trying to do Mr. Possessive Singh Khurana...he was just being polite"

"I don't care if he was being polite ...all i know is I can't stand it if someone lays a finger on you because only i have that right...understood" Maan said authoritatively pulling Geet up against the length of his body.

"In this position I'll agree to anything you say"

"anything?"

"since its your birthday anything u say baby"

"well for starters how about a kiss"

"A kiss? thats it ...i would have done that even without you asking because you just look so Hot without a shirt" said Geet tiptoeing to give Maan a slow yet sensual kiss leaving him wanting more

"well i did say for starters so there is still more to come so be ready"

Geet chuckled at Maan's words nodding in assurance that she would so what he says. They both made their up to the terrace of the yacht. Maan made sure that the helper would not disturb them asking him to leave everything they needed and not to come unless he was called.

Maneet had their lunch and they both layed out on the yacht in each others arm soaking in the sun and just being happy in each other arms. Just being in each others arms, Maan realized that there is no other place he would want to be. Waking up in the morning and seeing Geet next to him brought a smile on his face whenever they were on their getaway trips and at that moment he wanted that more than anything to be with her when the sun wakes them up in the morning and when the moon lights up the sky at night. He didnt want to have to take a holiday to be with but he wanted to have her with him all the time.

"Geet"

"hhmm"

"If i ask you to do something will you do it"

"Maan i thought we went through this already...ill do anything you want" Geet said hugging Maan more tightly and placing a kiss on his cheek

"Geet i want you to move in with me"

"Maan are you sure about this?" said moving away a bit to look into Maan's eyes

"I've never been so sure in my life"

"But Maan this way everyone will find out about us"

"i don't care...let them find out im tired of hiding from them. I want the whole world to know your mine"

"Maan you know i don't want anything in this world than to be with...if this is what you want than i want this too"

Geet placed her lips on maan's lips and sealed the deal.



Precap

B-day continues ;)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
Loved the part..
I too was waiting for dese words from maan..
the world shud noe abt them..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#87
awesome dear...love the story but parts are very short...thoda sa bada pls
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Posted: 13 years ago
#88
Awesome story

Loved it

waiting for the next part

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Posted: 13 years ago
#89
beautiful n romantic update...

i loved it...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
Saru, is that you?? Kaha thi itne time se?? Pata hai kitne PM kiye. And this was small but the others should be long huh, you have promised that.

I just love everything about them. It was small and sweet. Me don't have any other words.

Do cont soon and do PM me.

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