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Originally posted by: AbbyluvsMaan

wow Sneha Di...
dat was truly amazing...!!!!!!!!!!!!

beginning se... I love the poem write in the intro... deep and sooo meaningful... me absolutely that... i really luv ur poetry... 😃

now cumin to the update...
i luv the entire theme of d story... lyk the thing dat dey hv this unsaid.. unquestioned relationship... n hw their togetherness means evrythin to them... i really luvd d way u described that...

i luvd d way Geet juz barged into Maan's room.. hehhehe.. she didnt really need a permission... hehehhee... 😆

den i luvd hw jhat se Geet solved Maan's prob.. n hw Maan knew dat Geet ws upset jz wid d colour of her dress.. OMG.. dat ws sooo innovative.. i juz luvd it...

den I juz luvd hw u narrated ki Maan n Geet both are aware of their love 4 each other... bt neva express it.. both hv their own reasons for nt expressing.. bt dey still hv dat unbreakable bond.. dat love blossoming each day...

i luvd d part whr u said dat some relations loose their spark if its named.. i sooo agree wid that... some deep relations cn neva be named...

I luvd hw colg pohochte hain Maan became ol arrogant n show off juz to irritate Geet.. hehhehe.. dat ws funny... 😆

hehhehe.. i absolutely cracked laughing on d part whr Geet saved Maan.. gosh it ws funny.. hehehhe... 🤣 🤣

plus dat dialogue... "Excuse me.. Maan Singh Khurana never goes after any girl.. Its girls who come after me.."
it reminded me of SRK of Kuch Kuch Hota Hai... hehehhee...

me absolutely luvd it Sneha di...
looking forward to more...

love ya loads... ❤️

Originally posted by: ananya95

awesome os sneha di
just loved it!
haayyyeee that was so so so cute n full of life n love
the way they teased each other geet saving maan from bimbos maan cheering her up geet selecting clothes for him
the whole thing was so cute spcly they know they love the other but dont express it awww
really eager to know the next
loved the title it gave me "butterflies" in my stomach lol!
cont soon
thnx 4 d pm!
that was marvellous!

Originally posted by: kahkashansakina

wow mindblowing

very cute both of them

its feel may be they will separate

what is butterfly love?

color ful love or flying love samaj mein nahi aya

loved it

Originally posted by: shrutheAjay

Just loved the first part of "butterfly love"...

Loved the concept and your writing is so beautiful.. and the clarity in your writing is fabulous...

characterization of both maan and geet was brilliant..

it just made me feel so good...

you are such an awesome writer darlin!!!!

and muahzzz (low cal) for writing this...

eagerly waiting for the next part

Hate this IF.. its not letting me press like

Originally posted by: poongs123

wow my sweetie first congo for writing another os ...

very diff concept

yaar u knw is so energitic to read ..full of life in this os ...OMG actaully i m not geeting words to express sweetie its simply superbbb u r rocking dear me dancing here out of joy ... to u dear...

diff flavour of maaneet dear eagerly waiting for the next update dear plz continue soon dear

Originally posted by: snehaj

Oh My My..!!

here comes my dear Abby..

Luv u and your comments too much sweetiee..

U knw the like button was not working since 2 days..

so i delayed sending Pmz..

But I knew it.. the moment u'll get my Pm u'll defo comment..

Thank u bunches for this luvy duvy comments..

Much Luv frm my side.. ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

🤗

Originally posted by: AbbyluvsMaan

hehehhe... love you Sneha di...
I knew you'll love my comment... 😉
m sooo happy u replied... hehhehe... 😆
actually aap jo likhti hain.. i like ti sooo much.. ki mai bs likhti hi jaati hun... hehehhee... its ol lyk sooo natural... hehehhee...

Originally posted by: snehaj

Me luv talking to u Abby..

U r such a darling..

My fav commentator..

Mmuuaahhzzz..

Luv u too much sweetiee.. 🤗