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SONU_29

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

Interesting FF.
I liked it.
Continue soon

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namita25

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

nice concept...

would love to read it..

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Tabinda Areeb

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

like it

they both want to get rid of each other in their won way

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Angel..Drashti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Character sketch

Maan singh khurana:26 years old.future MD of khurana industry.arrogant, rude and like to be disciplined.love his family very much.can do anything for them.jiya is the love of his life.

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Geet handa:22 years old.live in a small town with her family.cute,sweet,caring but anger is in her nose.can't tolarate any wrong thing.love her family.

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Dev khurana:22 year old.sweet,caring and little introvert.opposite of his brother.

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Jiya malhotra:24 years old.selfish,arrogant and spoilt.love only money.

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Nidhi gupta:22years old.chirpy,talketive and love geet as her own sister.

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kkiddoo

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

nice CS dear continue soon

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Angel..Drashti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Part 1

mom what r u cooking and that also in this early morning..?...itna accha smell aa raha hai...dev yawn while talking.then he remember what is the reason behind all this decoration.his strict bro is coming from UK after finishing the project successfully given by his father.he loved his brother so much and always follow his footstep.

mom u always pamper bhai...unki pasand ki cheese banate ho..apne haat se khilate bhi ho jaab wo ghar wapas aate hai...u didn't love me that much.mujhe to kabhi aise nahi khilate ho...he teased his mother

jaya waked his naughty son.then said lovingly...

tu to humesha meri pass hi rehta hai...wo bechara kitne din gharse bahar tha...don't know if he ate properly...

to aab kya mujhe bhi ghar chodhke jana hoga aapki extra love paane k lie...ok i m going right now...he teased again making a pout.

jaya pulled his cheek and said...

oolle mera baby gussa ho gaya...

yuck...mom i am not a child now...don't behave like that..he said with a yucky face then both broke into laughter.

what's the matter...why u laughing so much mom...kya dev ki girlfriend firse usse chodhke bhag gaya...comes a husky voice which made jaya and dev both happy.

maan...jaya went towards him

maan smiled a little looking at his mom.he missed her so much.he hugged her lovingly.

kaisi ho mom...?

kaisi ho sakti hu jaab tu mere paas nahi hai...jaya said getting emotional.

mom...now don't cry pls...said dev smiling..

maan hugged him too...

u didn't answer my question...gf bhag gaya kya...?maan teased him.

dev make a irritated face...

agar gf hoto to bhagti na...

both maan and jaya laughed at his comment.then maan again being his usual strict self.

hw's your study...?

fine bhai...

he was going to ask something when his phone rang.he excused himself and take the call.

i miss u j...he said in a loving tone.